Criticism, anyone?

@Ciel-san: Oh nice song =D One of my favorites. ( Ah, DATEKEN ) The vocals are not too loud I think, but I guess you put many echos o3o;; Sometimes you shouldn't put them but you did it xD;; In the last part(without bgm), why not do the voice more ... « robot » /shot. ME & MY ENGLISH Anyway, nice cover :3 I really liked it & the mix was good.
YT or Nico don't want to post it?

Ah, the echoes and heavy reverb were copying the original song's mixing though? If you listen to the original, it's very strong :3. Robotic? Hrmmm, it doesn't sound good autotuned though, this song :/. And it goes against the meaning of the song anyway, being all about the "voice from the heart"? Strangely, I've always thought of this song being sung very much like a human, haha. Even Miku's programming is very natural in the original :3.

Thank you though! And yeah I don't think I'll upload to either places XDD;;

Wow... needs lots of critcism, this one xD



For the guy's chorus. D=

@Pronch,Momoka and Ciel

THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLS!

this critique really helped me, Lol yeah, I gotta say Last Night Good Night wasn't the best choice ever but I was bored so when I'm bored I choose hard songs lol, yeah, I noticed the problem about the low notes too, This is a problem I always say I have, I just can't sing soft sometimes to save my life, My voice is very weird in the sense that is either too strong for some songs and too soft for others, in this case it was too strong for the low parts, also about the high notes well yeah lol, they sound very uncomfortbale for the ears, I just need a better technique at hitting them since those aren't really uncomfortable for me to hit, they sit at a very comfortable place in my head voice, Anyway thanks again girls I appreciate it



Now for JSR's request


BOY, YOU HAVE AWESOME TALENT!


you did an excellent job at this song, I hear almost no off notes, I just noticed some off notes in the really high parts where you went a bit flat but other than that it was masterfully sung, Keep singing!

@Kumba: Yeah I know what you're saying. For me, some of my high notes aren't uncomfortable to sing at all, they just sound awful XD;;. And conversely, my low notes sound great, but I sing them really badly >_>;;. I think with this song though, it's not so much voice type as technique - you need to "whisper" the verses, and then build up to a big chorus. The note transitions in the Bmero (pre-chorus) definitely help building up notes, IMO. I have quite a heavy voice, so I know how hard it is, but yeah, if I can somehow achieve it, you should be able to!

@Elianti-san: I can't see it >_<;;

Pronch wrote:@Elianti-san: I can't see it >_<;;

I second that. XD

https://www.youtube.com/user/AwysaChan#grid/user/A81C07FE5783F9CF
coughtfailcough covers ive done.... im a (i need a good word to describe this...) noob.

plz critisize. thank you.

Its not VOCALOID but I hope it works -shot-
I really need critique on this since its for an audition XP

@Awysa-san: Well... wtf? Sometimes it's the original song or the song without vocals .v.;;
@Elianti-san: Don't worry~. Really nice beggining ( How your voice is ). You have a good voice & the mix is good c: but why did you sing with Luka? I don't say that's bad, but why? xD She's choral after all. And, a little problem, your voice is really loud when you have to :3 or is the bgm who is too low? Anyway, that was a good perfomance =D Really like your « scream » xD
@Michi-san: Yaaay~ Another dub :3 Nice dub ^_^ I don't know why but why not change the sound of your voice a little bit when there is rap part & « normal » part? :33 Maybe you did it, but I can't hear it ;3; The mix & other stuffs are nice =DD Good job

Criticism?'cause maybe I will make a full version!Than I know what I have to do better xD!

@BRS-san: Oh, nice =D Your voice is like Haruhi but in more loli /shot. Anyway, your voice is really energic ( is it english? ;_; ) Maybe the sound ( bgm & vocal ) are too loud ? No? But I liked this cover. Good Job BRS-san :33
Hard song btw. x3

BlackRockShooter wrote:
Criticism?'cause maybe I will make a full version!Than I know what I have to do better xD!

Your voice is really cute<3 It makes my pedo heart beat so fast<3
The timing and mixing sound great, but you should focus more on the accuracy of notes.
There's lots of off notes in the chorus. Try not to use your chest voice too much when singing high notes, because there's no way that your chest voice can reach the notes. Breathe with your stomach, not your uppor chest. That way it'll support your voice to make it sound stronger.

BlackRockShooter wrote:
Criticism?'cause maybe I will make a full version!Than I know what I have to do better xD!

my ears bled x__X;;
xD <333 but its okay <3

I like the cute voice to it, it blends well with this type of music.
but, when singing, I think you were singing it 1 note lower than the original tune.
the bridges is the best part of your song ^^, even if you were off key,
I like the energy you put into it ^^, I want to see the full ver :3

mii wants criticism, pwease. ._.

@Mii-san : How nice cover That was really cute :3 But, your french accent « détruits » some parts ;3; we can't help it orz & the mic~ not so bad, but not so good either. Anyway, that was a really cute dub I want to do so too >3< I'm not as cute as you. & the mix was nice c: Good job =D

wah! i leik all of these covers :3 :3 :3
AwysaChan ish veryyy happy :3

I don't know if you guys know Morning Musume, Inazuma Eleven, AKB48, C-ute, and Berryz but this is an audition for a fandubbing group of them...Xept...Over 100 people auditioned already OTL....

Probably the strangest critique you'll ever come across but...

Anyone want to criticise my Engrish? I tried really hard to sing the English parts Japanese-style, but I DON'T KNOW. It sounds odd. It doesn't sound "right" (as in, wrong. if...that makes any sense at all).



(I'd ask for more crits than that, but what's there to critique when I'm entirely autotuned, and didn't mix this song myself :'D? You can if you want!)

Ciel wrote:Probably the strangest critique you'll ever come across but...

Anyone want to criticise my Engrish? I tried really hard to sing the English parts Japanese-style, but I DON'T KNOW. It sounds odd. It doesn't sound "right" (as in, wrong. if...that makes any sense at all).



(I'd ask for more crits than that, but what's there to critique when I'm entirely autotuned, and didn't mix this song myself :'D? You can if you want!)

I-I think you're Engrish is a mix of English pronouncation and Japanese pronouncation, maybe that's why it doesn't sound right to you?
Like, you pronounce some part of the sentence in the normal english way, but you pronounced some other parts in the same sentence japanesely...>______>
But hosnestly, they sound more english instead of engrish to me.
If you need some examples, the "girl", "want you", "can" are some of the ones you pronounced in the normal english way.
Btw, I think this song sounds better with normal english pronouncation... the engrish just..doesn't fit.

QrMOMOKA wrote:
I-I think you're Engrish is a mix of English pronouncation and Japanese pronouncation, maybe that's why it doesn't sound right to you?
Like, you pronounce some part of the sentence in the normal english way, but you pronounced some other parts in the same sentence japanesely...>______>
But hosnestly, they sound more english instead of engrish to me.
If you need some examples, the "girl", "want you", "can" are some of the ones you pronounced in the normal english way.
Btw, I think this song sounds better with normal english pronouncation... the engrish just..doesn't fit.

That might be it D:. Faking a Japnaese pronunciation is harder than you think ><;;. I'm pretty sure I pronounced "can" more like "kyan" though - I know, because I kept retaking XD;;. I can't pronounce "girl" in a Japanese way. I don't know how to do it. In fact listening to all the other covers they actually just sound like normal English LOL.

This song actually doesn't sound good with proper English, just because the song makes use of broken English rhythms e.g. "I'm sorry not to become meekly" corresponds to notes as "i'm sorry not to become mikurii", so if you pronounce "meekly" normally, it doesn't fit the rhythm XD;;. Same with lines like "make up and doresu up" ><;;. I trieeeed. Because I suck at broken English orz.

Thanks though! At least I think I've figured out why I keep thinking my Engrish parts sound odd D8

@Ciel-san: Why don't you sing the engrish part in English? XD Like that you'll be more cool 8D /shot.

Pronch wrote:@Ciel-san: Why don't you sing the engrish part in English? XD Like that you'll be more cool 8D /shot.

WHAT? no way!
if you already speak english there is no point doing that xD;
you have to speak engrish xD! sound like newbie and earn newbie awards point!