【CLOSED】『Tori No Uta』　《7 People Chorus》 SCRIPT UP~LINES NEEDED DEADLINE EXTENDED: SEPTEMBER 16TH !!!

My audition,but I done this in a rush,so,if needed,I can redo it later...
*shyshy*
http://www.4shared.com/audio/A86B6Tru/tori_no_urta_aud.html

@Amilara: you sound sooooo sweet *---------------------* <- stalker much???^^'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

I recorded it the fastest I could so I make sure I still have the chances to be in this *-*
Audition - no effects added. [fail mix is fail .-.]
I wanted the number 4 lines >////<

Thanks for your auditions, I will listen to them with the others, once I can find them.......but do you want our critique? -a better word says AmyAnn-san

"Critique" would be a better word XD Criticism is really negative~

I will get my audition in asap! Best I can do is maybe Wednesday so I'll get it in then!

Of course I need critique,althought I know I sound here lame..can't breath when is needed to sing lower and lower(

^ same same! I want the critique @.@ *-*
My mom came in at the last minute so my voice lost strengh on the last chorus.. T_T

I love this song, but it doesn't love me that much xD

btw I redid all the harmonies.. one upper and one lower though you can clearly hear it in the off vocal, I just thought having a chorus might make the harmonies in the off vocal softer xD

audition: http://www.box.net/shared/ksghbhmyebnbu5endymh
please critique! <3

@nzpnkrckrgrl, Amilara, Skylark, shinouyuki Critiques coming soon ^^ ( in a few mintues ) -glomps-

^ Okies \(^o^)/

@Hakura: you forgot me D:
-didn't you see the audition..? .-. -

SORRY IF I SOUND HARSH I DON'T MEAN TO AND I DON'T WANT TO ITS JUST THAT WHEN I SPEAK FORMALLY, IT ENDS LIKE THAT SO I'LL TRY TO SOUND LIKE A GOOD GIRL D:

@nzpnkrckrgrl
When recording, make sure that the fuzz doesn't get in the way of your vocals or the background music like in the beginning of your audition. Also, Your voice (in my opinion and no offense PLEASE DON'T HATE ME D:) sounds a little weak x: -shot- when you sang the song. (please contact me if you have come to hate me or anything relevant to the subject of hating - other than hating if you want to ask for anything feel free to ask)The volume in which you sang the song is fine, but i felt that the strength in your vocals wasn't strong enough.
Adding is that your voice is a bit off tone at parts ( but not a lot so don't worry).

@Amilara
Your Voice is so soft ! And I noticed that when you sang the song the background music was lowered so that your voice would be OP (overpower) ING the music LOL, so I wished that you would've sang louder so you wouldn't have to lower the background music. In my opinion, i also thoguht you sang a percentage ( 1%) slower than the actual song but maybe my sense of time is dieing.

@Skylark
I didn't know what it was, either the mic or program quality that you used made you sound bad (and I'm sure you don't sound bad at all).
Umm because of the bad quality recorder/mic, I wasn't sure if you were breathing right or finishing the lines ( the lyrics) so um ... I was completely lost with the quality and pronunciation and breathing in this audition @.@ SORRY D: But there's little/no fuzz which is cool.
Also if it is the mic, the feedback is pretty bad so um, i recommend a better mic/program ( if its the program ) but not liek a really expensive one, i mean like, i use a cheap webcam xD

@shinouyuki
-Is Wowed- You sounded like the singer , BUT i heard fuzz As it started I heard a little fuzz. Also, keep in mind the feedback your mic gave off when you increase your volume when you sang xD (Don't worry that happens to me too), try to keep you volume consistent and balanced when it comes to certain parts.

@Sakura
The beginning was just a tad off tune, and i heard some notes that you couldn't reach ! Oh that's another thing, I think i mentioned this before, You could always change the notes to fit the song ! Like a harmony ( i do this all the time Also, i think you should have sang a little bit louder ( you sound so young lol) but i'm not sure if you mic would take it ( as well as others, i forgot to mention, if your mic is being g** I'll understand ).

PLEASE CONTACT ME IF YOU WANT TO KNOW ANY SPECIFIC DETAILS, AND PELASE DON'T MISUNDERSTAND D: I WAS TRYING TO BE AS LESS MEAN AS JUDGING SHOULD BE -Pocki-chii- TEEHEE

@ Sakura
OH CRAP IM GOING BLIND LEMME GO CHECK OUT UR AUDITION D: -shot-
LOL Somewhat of a same name

REediT: Alright All Critiques up for All Auditions ! CONTACT ME IF YOU NEED MORE DETAIL !

Ahaha it's ok ^^'''
Thank you for taking your timing to listen (:

omg so many words xD and yes there is the fuzz, I always have that problem with the beginning of verses or quiet moments, can you recommend a way to reduce the noise without affecting the quality of the recording so much? xD I know noise remover can work but then...I listen to the recordings again and some intensity is lost xD

and truly, the loud parts are hard to figure out when it comes to feedback, it's either I hold back in singing or I get away from the mic as soon as I can xD

thank you so much~! it helps with learning how to sing better :D

shinouyuki wrote:omg so many words xD and yes there is the fuzz, I always have that problem with the beginning of verses or quiet moments, can you recommend a way to reduce the noise without affecting the quality of the recording so much? xD I know noise remover can work but then...I listen to the recordings again and some intensity is lost xD

and truly, the loud parts are hard to figure out when it comes to feedback, it's either I hold back in singing or I get away from the mic as soon as I can xD

thank you so much~! it helps with learning how to sing better :D

OH LOL when the fuzz in my mic starts to get in the way i get like a sock or some type of clothing (not too thick or it'll start to block out your voice D:) and yeah when i start to sing loud i sort of back away from the mic but i think its more like volume control; I know when at some parts you have to sing low, sing low and keep the consistency there, but when it starts to increase ( the rhythm/music/beat ) and you need to sing louder and like LET IT OUT , ( because of your g** mic D:< ) I recommend just lowering your voice lower than the usual volume and then at the part where its like KABOOM, that's where you go to the volume your suppose to be at. If i don't make sense and fail, push me off a cliff >:

Oh I have to hurry with my critiques as well...ummm ALSO TO EVERYONE WE ALLOW REAUDITIONS!!! ALL BY THE DEADLINE JULY 29TH!!!

@nzpnkrckrgrl Yep, like yuki said there was fuzz in your mike and you sounded not as strong for some reason (same as me) not confident really~ However you really got the long notes out!

@Amilara I sent your critique through PM.

@Sakura You were somewhat out of tune (for other parts other than the low notes which are hard to pop out) But mostly you were in tune. Good job on the high notes.

@Skylark I liked your voice, you were in tune just you need need NEED a better mic and you were kind off with the music. I also you need work on your long notes like they weren't as strong. There were also some out of tune parts(just a little, no big deal)

@shinouyuki I liked your harmonies, they were good! You have a strong voice but the fuzz in your mic covered up some of that. You have a good voice, like you make the high notes come out easy!! Overall the
problem is the mic and that's all~ ^_^

Hope I didn't miss anyone!! I hope I didn't sound too mean, I mean you guys are all better than I am! XD

afyjwxky5wx!!! I'm redoing my recording tomorrow!!! I'm so sorry for the crappiness...I realised my mic was waaaaay too close and reading the Audacity manual helped. *sweatdrops* I really want to be in this chorus..Y^Y Gambarimasu!

Good luck Skylark-san, we say we allow reauditions because people can always try again to make it sound better, and to be honest I really liked your voice~^_^

@kahomelody: yeah..low parts are really difficult for me... \:
thank you for the critique <3333
If I have the time.. I'll redo it (:

Yea!!! I'd love to hear it *excited* XD (I know the low notes are sooo....grrrr)

I don't want to mess up one of my fave songs anymore than I already have.I really will do my best >.<

Also,I'm leaving from the 16th-30th of this month so,if it's ok,can you guys inform me of any improvements before that time?I'll do any improvements before Friday if my re-recording isn't good enough...sorry for the desperateness...

Ok then, but our deadline is the 29th and after that we will be asking people to turn in their raw vocals after we assign parts, but we see~

I'm sorry about this >__<

wow, harsh critique... but good though... which means next ones is even better... i still havent upload mine... suddenly my interent went slow T^T... try to upload... in slow internet... if it doesnt work it will be on the 15th.