【CLOSED】『Tori No Uta』　《7 People Chorus》 SCRIPT UP~LINES NEEDED DEADLINE EXTENDED: SEPTEMBER 16TH !!!

.......Please prepare for massive fail~~~
I tried to sing it down the octave, but then my voice kinda failed me about once every line... (Kaho-chan can tell you about my terrible lower register.) So... I sang it up the octave. And my shota voice kinda failed me. oAo Anyway, please tear into it. I wanna hear all about the terrible things I did, no matter how little.

http://www.mediafire.com/?n2f8w7i8ttdfv1y

Douzo, onegaishimasu~

@HakuraSakura Okay!! I'll try.... Thanks for that. I'll re-record right when I'm free. (Idea of putting a sock might works XD)

Here my re-audition. http://www.box.net/shared/ilpbfoxzqfv51ggxmnyp
The quality of my vocal is much louder here. Plus vocal vary... dont know why.. i change vocal pitch here and there. T^T... the more i redo... it not getting perfect T^T...

I perfer the 1st audition i did, even though i have weak voice

Here's my audition sorry can't keep my promise was soo busy the other day xD anyway this is a one shot so sorry if it sounds horrid xD critiques and feedback r welcome anytime :D thx

Daww I just can't get low notes,what I should doT___T
Well,I tried everyday and..of this is not good I give up)
http://www.4shared.com/audio/sraMWOXb/tori_no_uta_aud2.html

kahomelody wrote:You took everything I had to say but the new auditions were great, and stop worrying about you mic, Skylark!!! (meanie Yuki)

ITS CALLED JUDGING >:U

nzpnkrckrgrl wrote:Okay. I have re-recorded.
I think the mic is fine now (considering Im still cautious not to kill it).

Can you critique on my voice.
Im definitely bad at singing those high notes.
Link: http://www.box.net/shared/m6lmxq521b26k9b5yupq

I totally agree with your mic :3 Its like perfect and your voice does sound alot stronger and lol louder, but i sort of can't sense the right emotion your trying to show us, also some notes are quite off but over I think you did an overall better job than your last audition and i recommend this one ^^ Good job -claps

Seitanoshuuki wrote:.......Please prepare for massive fail~~~
I tried to sing it down the octave, but then my voice kinda failed me about once every line... (Kaho-chan can tell you about my terrible lower register.) So... I sang it up the octave. And my shota voice kinda failed me. oAo Anyway, please tear into it. I wanna hear all about the terrible things I did, no matter how little.

http://www.mediafire.com/?n2f8w7i8ttdfv1y

Douzo, onegaishimasu~

I can totally sense the emotion in this one xD -claps- in the beginning you did sound a little weak and i see you've got this vibrato going on and i think its great but you shouldn't add this vibrato -almost everywhere- but at the -necessarily- parts where holding the notes for a long period of time. Also i really like your voice but at one part i heard some negative feedback from your mic so watch out for that.

haneWing wrote:@HakuraSakura Okay!! I'll try.... Thanks for that. I'll re-record right when I'm free. (Idea of putting a sock might works XD)

PFFT LOL XD Alright I'll Look Forward to Your re-audition~

vampirebitesxx wrote:Here my re-audition. http://www.box.net/shared/ilpbfoxzqfv51ggxmnyp
The quality of my vocal is much louder here. Plus vocal vary... dont know why.. i change vocal pitch here and there. T^T... the more i redo... it not getting perfect T^T...

I perfer the 1st audition i did, even though i have weak voice

In my opinion, i really liked your second audition because you sounded a lot stronger and better and your notes where amazing, you hit everyone of them and I'm really glad too. Also i could feel more emotion in this because of the strength you put in it, but it does lack JUST A LITTLE bit or emotion - lol recipe- a lil pinch of emotion in there and perrrrrfecto Adding is that the mic feedback, at the part where you said 'kiitto' sorta of ruined the audition, so watch the volume there a little. Then after that, I think some of the confidence died down and your notes began to become flat a little bit. But Overall, amazing job -claps-

jordy905 wrote:Here's my audition sorry can't keep my promise was soo busy the other day xD anyway this is a one shot so sorry if it sounds horrid xD critiques and feedback r welcome anytime :D thx

YAAAAAAAAAY -is so excited- I've never heard many guy auditions so I'm just excited xD
- is listening- o.o -cracks fingers- Alright, the timing and notes were also bit off at the beginning and other parts during the audition. Since the mic was picking up your air waves form your singing, i suggest you back away form the mic if you are to close and sing louder or just avoid making those waves. Also, your singing was a bit subtle and soft so i want you to sing louder and stronger, but if the notes were too high i understand, you could always sing an octave or two lower ( unless you don't have that manri kreeper voice like i do ._. ). And that's about it - claps-

Amilara wrote:Daww I just can't get low notes,what I should doT___T
Well,I tried everyday and..of this is not good I give up)
http://www.4shared.com/audio/sraMWOXb/tori_no_uta_aud2.html

NO GIVVING UP EVER ! NEVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER !
Well i liked the subtle-ness in this audition and i heard that there wasn't much background music change at all ( like i heard 2% or maybe i'm going crazy ), when you sang in this i felt much more emotion in it with strength, and you hit the notes perfectly ! So regardless that you sang -still low- I think this audition is great. I applaud -lol i changed words-

Hikari-chu wrote:My audition.
I suck at high notes >.<
I'd like critique...?

Nice Background music :D -is loud- PFFT LOL IS SUPPOSED TO TALK BOUT UR VOCALS/AUDITION - clears throat- I think your audition was great but some notes were off, including some of the timing and volume ( at one part i think your voice just shrank for a moment and then got louder o.o; Also your emotion in this song was great but i just need that little pinch -lol- in there -of emotion- Your mic is great nonetheless no feedback whatsoever or any wierdness - lol *inside head* define wierdness- but overall it was good MOOO -claps- ( i had to wirte the moo to keep -claps- together :D)


ALSO I WANT TO REMIND ALL AUDITIONEES THAT NO MORE MEDIAFIRE OR ANY PROGRAMS THAT INVOLVE DOWNLOADING- has so many songs - PLEASE AND THANK YOU
^just incase pocki-chi doesn't edit lol

PPFFFT X'D Awww,Kaho-san it's ok~
And don't worry Sakura-san,you're a great judge!

*huffs huffs* I'm gone out shopping for a while and I'm now sooo behind in everything!!! (Yuki's so fast)

Yay critique~~~~~~! Thank you so much~!!!!

Hm... Too much vibrato? Guess I need to watch out for that. @_@ (not doing it consciously orz must be too used to those classical choir things)

*kills mic* >_____> Naw... there's probably stuff I can do to fix that....

(Agh... so tempted to do a loli-Miku-Rin reaudit. 8DDD But so little time.... >_____>)

I totally agree with your mic :3 Its like perfect and your voice does sound alot stronger and lol louder, but i sort of can't sense the right emotion your trying to show us, also some notes are quite off but over I think you did an overall better job than your last audition and i recommend this one ^^ Good job -claps

Thanks for the critique. I'll keep in mind about the emotion bits. ^^

I'll send in an audition for this soon ♥~ I LOVE AIR!

In my opinion, i really liked your second audition because you sounded a lot stronger and better and your notes where amazing, you hit everyone of them and I'm really glad too. Also i could feel more emotion in this because of the strength you put in it, but it does lack JUST A LITTLE bit or emotion - lol recipe- a lil pinch of emotion in there and perrrrrfecto Wink Adding is that the mic feedback, at the part where you said 'kiitto' sorta of ruined the audition, so watch the volume there a little. Then after that, I think some of the confidence died down and your notes began to become flat a little bit. But Overall, amazing job -claps-

Okie dokie... I'll just fix back the kitto part... and redo the sections that is lacking and emotion. (or the whole thing again XD)
I'm glad you like my 2nd one... started to like the 2nd too.

Edit: I fixedthe parts. Dont know who it sound like.. Just only redid the section. Didnt have time to do full. ><

YAAAAAAAAAY -is so excited- I've never heard many guy auditions so I'm just excited xD
- is listening- o.o -cracks fingers- Alright, the timing and notes were also bit off at the beginning and other parts during the audition. Since the mic was picking up your air waves form your singing, i suggest you back away form the mic if you are to close and sing louder or just avoid making those waves. Also, your singing was a bit subtle and soft so i want you to sing louder and stronger, but if the notes were too high i understand, you could always sing an octave or two lower ( unless you don't have that manri kreeper voice like i do ._. ). And that's about it - claps-

Gotcha will work on my timing pitching and need to watch out for mic distance xD will send a new 1 ASAP thx for the feedback and critiques :D

Skylark wrote:PPFFFT X'D Awww,Kaho-san it's ok~
And don't worry Sakura-san,you're a great judge!

Thanks sky 8D ~ Pfft lool kaho ~ BUT STILL ! We still have a little time i wanna see more of your auditions 83 don't give up !

kahomelody wrote:*huffs huffs* I'm gone out shopping for a while and I'm now sooo behind in everything!!! (Yuki's so fast)

PFFFT not really i get on liek 2 hours a day minimum and like i just go right to YTC xD -ish my life- My only escape to freedom

Seitanoshuuki wrote:Yay critique~~~~~~! Thank you so much~!!!!

Hm... Too much vibrato? Guess I need to watch out for that. @_@ (not doing it consciously orz must be too used to those classical choir things)

*kills mic* >_____> Naw... there's probably stuff I can do to fix that....

(Agh... so tempted to do a loli-Miku-Rin reaudit. 8DDD But so little time.... >_____>)

OMG REALLY ? -has never heard of song- I WANNA HEAR IT XD .3. You can put it on the side of your re-audit xD ?

nzpnkrckrgrl wrote:

I totally agree with your mic :3 Its like perfect and your voice does sound alot stronger and lol louder, but i sort of can't sense the right emotion your trying to show us, also some notes are quite off but over I think you did an overall better job than your last audition and i recommend this one ^^ Good job -claps

Thanks for the critique. I'll keep in mind about the emotion bits. ^^

Alright .3. Looks forward to your re-audit~

Azura wrote:I'll send in an audition for this soon ~ I LOVE AIR!

I look forward to et .3. ~Btw Azura For the One Winged Bird D: -is so anxious OTL- IM SO FREAKED FOR THE LIST

vampirebitesxx wrote:

In my opinion, i really liked your second audition because you sounded a lot stronger and better and your notes where amazing, you hit everyone of them and I'm really glad too. Also i could feel more emotion in this because of the strength you put in it, but it does lack JUST A LITTLE bit or emotion - lol recipe- a lil pinch of emotion in there and perrrrrfecto Wink Adding is that the mic feedback, at the part where you said 'kiitto' sorta of ruined the audition, so watch the volume there a little. Then after that, I think some of the confidence died down and your notes began to become flat a little bit. But Overall, amazing job -claps-

Okie dokie... I'll just fix back the kitto part... and redo the sections that is lacking and emotion. (or the whole thing again XD)
I'm glad you like my 2nd one... started to like the 2nd too.

Edit: I fixedthe parts. Dont know who it sound like.. Just only redid the section. Didnt have time to do full. ><

Oh Okay D: Pity but i understand .3. -listens- I totally felt all the emotion put in this one and I'm loving it ! I love your notes too, nice kitto lol x3, but after the instrumental break there's just this one little part where your timing was just a bit off. Also near the end, you did sound a little weak but after that, you just fixed it up with you (lol kathy) Amazingly mediocre voice xD But overall I think it was perfect .3. -applaud- <<- lol word change

jordy905 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAY -is so excited- I've never heard many guy auditions so I'm just excited xD
- is listening- o.o -cracks fingers- Alright, the timing and notes were also bit off at the beginning and other parts during the audition. Since the mic was picking up your air waves form your singing, i suggest you back away form the mic if you are to close and sing louder or just avoid making those waves. Also, your singing was a bit subtle and soft so i want you to sing louder and stronger, but if the notes were too high i understand, you could always sing an octave or two lower ( unless you don't have that manri kreeper voice like i do ._. ). And that's about it - claps-

Gotcha will work on my timing pitching and need to watch out for mic distance xD will send a new 1 ASAP thx for the feedback and critiques :D

ALRIGHHHHHTTTTT ! I can't wait .3. I'll check out later today ( lol has school ) Please no questions D: Unless you really want to know lol I'll post my whole story up somewhere else lol

Well I might not be abe to record anything new for a while.I had my braces removed and must wear retainers now and I'm not allowed to rake them off for a while.They make singing really awkward >_>;

BTW @KATHY !!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU NEEDA UPDATE THE LIST SLOWPOKE D:<
Seitanoshuuki
Hikari-chu
Jordy905
HaneWang
Have sent in their auditions if i've missed anyone, you can yell at me but you can't take my lolipops D:<

ReEdit:

Skylark wrote:Well I might not be abe to record anything new for a while.I had my braces removed and must wear retainers now and I'm not allowed to rake them off for a while.They make singing really awkward >_>;

D::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: NHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU BUT BUT BUT BUT -shot barraged- >: how awkward ! I'm pretty sure you can still sing D:

LOL ReEdit #3 :
NOTICE ummmm Since we've received a lot of auditions -bonks kathy- We would like to change the deadline audition date to an earlier date .3. so we need a minimum of 2 girls and 2 guys to sing the song but the girl number might change if the competition between the boys is they aren't so epic .3. ( heads up for guys) SO UM YOU GUYS NEED TO STEP IT UP AND JUST LET IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LET YOUR HEART OUT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean if its embarrassing to sing ( guys) I SING LIKE A GUY WHEN I RECORD D:< MY FAMILY COMPLAINS, DO I CARE ? NO BUG OFF PEOPLE LET ME SING lol okay too massive over there but yeah, i would like both guys to join .3. because i was planning on gender bending 8D and we might change around the placings for the scripts. Also heads up on who's going to be chosen for the chorus, we're going to post the results up on the deadline .3. which will be moved to an earlier date -bonks kathy- :D REMEMBER TO HAVE FUN ! I know we all hate limits, why am i setting up a time limit ? Because Kathy wants this chorus .3. OTL LOL

P.S. if i sound too scary, mean, vicous, malicious, wierd, awkard, or any signs of retardedness, please shove me in a locker and report me OTL lol

When new deadling will be decided,write that in topic's name.'kay?

Gomen...I'm leaving for two weeks on the 16th btw,so...TT^TT

Amilara wrote:When new deadling will be decided,write that in topic's name.'kay?

Oh Alright Don't Worry ^^

Skylark wrote:Gomen...I'm leaving for two weeks on the 16th btw,so...TT^TT

D: Oh noes ;~;

Yeah...oh well~

Lol already nine pages~

Oh Okay D: Pity but i understand .3. -listens- I totally felt all the emotion put in this one and I'm loving it ! I love your notes too, nice kitto lol x3, but after the instrumental break there's just this one little part where your timing was just a bit off. Also near the end, you did sound a little weak but after that, you just fixed it up with you (lol kathy) Amazingly mediocre voice xD But overall I think it was perfect .3. -applaud- <<- lol word change

okay i'll fix the time.. of the section, the end i do something about that. http://www.box.net/shared/2d0clu4guslepnxx26x3

vampirebitesxx wrote:

Oh Okay D: Pity but i understand .3. -listens- I totally felt all the emotion put in this one and I'm loving it ! I love your notes too, nice kitto lol x3, but after the instrumental break there's just this one little part where your timing was just a bit off. Also near the end, you did sound a little weak but after that, you just fixed it up with you (lol kathy) Amazingly mediocre voice xD But overall I think it was perfect .3. -applaud- <<- lol word change

okay i'll fix the time.. of the section, the end i do something about that.

Alright ^^

I WANNA JOIN D":
CAN I?? this song is so epic <33
i love it so much~ i would like, listen to only this years ago, heheh