Noob utaite looking for advice

Hi everyone, I have started to upload videos on youtube i think about a year ago. Im fairly new with singing. But being an 'utaite' has always been my dream (doesnt necessarily have to be a lot of subs, but producing utaite kind of content). although it seems I've not much clue how to go from here; so I'll start by asking for your help- I went through the trouble of weeks trying to craft this piece. This is my first singing cover. Of course, it is not perfect to everyone's ear- so I hope to improve from hearing your feedback!

 
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And I also struggle with creating instrumentals, they take quite a lot of time to make for me (as im honestly still an amateur) , though I put a lot of effort in them, it would be nice if i could just sing straight away. But then I would have to deal with some copyright issues, and i dont really have anyone to collaborate with. Any advice would be gladly appreciated. Thanks.

Wow! I think it's absolutely amazing!
Everything is really well balanced, especially if it's just your first cover!
Would love to see more stuff from you in the future! ^_^

That copyright issue sounds painful though! I mostly sing vocaloid songs so I haven't really had that problem before, and unfortunately I'm not too music-y so I can't be much help with this :c

thank you very much I appreciate it @Catalyst
I just realized that the render settings were not good for internet distribution. (the volume got lower) and have tried to fix that by reuploading in niconico. /watch/sm30694161

Either way, in any case I'm very glad you liked it. Saying you want to hear more- It means lot to me. c':

I agree with Catalyst. I think you did a great job with the cover. The effects you chose were mixed in well and weren't overdone.

I'm impressed though. You make your own instrumentals?

Thanks for the compliment Aerlith. Yeah, I've been creating a few instrumental covers since about a year ago. I think it's improved considering how you guys thought it's well mixed, very happy to hear that. 

Though they take a lot of time for me to make (usually 2-3 weeks, rarely less than that) almost to the point I get sick listening to the song over and over again sadly; and bcz of college ive been very busy lately- so I haven't done anything music related.

If you have song suggestions, do feel free to let me know. Its hard to find time nowadays which one/songs may suit my voice