Basic feedback on "Karakuri Pierrot" (2+)

Hello, I recently recorded a short version of "Karakuri Pierrot"

This is more of a test cover, I just want some feedback on how the cover sound in general.  Please don't mind the mixing (I'm still getting hang of how to use CS6 to mix haha). 

Please let  me know what you think of this cover and any suggestion for songs I should cover? Since I'm returning , I don't know what to cover next haha. 

Thank you for your time!

Here's the cover : soundcloud.com/eimi_eimi/karakuri-pierrot-short-cover

Just to clarify, are you looking for basic feedback or intermediate? Or both? The only one you won't be able to get would be in-depth, since you don't have enough points.

(Also, to whoever fills her request, please post in her portfolio and then LINK to your feedback in this thread).

@Aerlith 

I meant to write "Basic" haha. 
Thank you for letting me know !

Wee, feedback! (It's my first time giving one too... I hope it's still only basic.)

https://ytchorus.forumotion.com/t6405-singing-eimis#279323

Since Eimi only has five points, moving this thread to Filled. If anyone else wants to give feedback to her cover, they are welcome to, but they will only receive the usual number of points. (1 pt for basic, 2 pts for intermediate, 3 pts for in-depth).

Fona and Amy, please don't forget to turn in your points here:
https://ytchorus.forumotion.com/t6312-feedback-turn-in-december-12-1-01-31