Sky's Translyrics

Hm... not sure how this works, but here I go :D
I sing English Vocaloid covers since I can't sing Japanese, so here's all my translyrics

Aurorae ft. Hatsune Miku:

Bring Back Summer ft. Hatsune Miku:

Earth Day ft. Hatsune Miku:

Farewell Blue ft. MAYU:

From Y to Y ft. Hatsune Miku:

Hello Worker ft. Megurine Luka:

Hoshi no Uta ft. Gumi:

post-script ft. Gumi:

Sayonara ft. Hatsune Miku:

Sunset ft. Hatsune Miku:

Tell Your World ft. Hatsune Miku:

Tower ft. Megurine Luka:

Umbrella ft. Hatsune Miku:

Wrinkle ft. Gumi:

...So many! Joker might have competition soon! XD You've done a good amount so far! I'm not super familiar with a lot of the songs.

I would recommend posting your videos that you have covered already with the lyrics, too, so people have a guide. c:

oooh! okay :O

There's no way I can ever lose the times that I got to spend with you
So let's delete the past and see our feelings be reborn anew
I know now that it's me who'll sing and write all of my secret songs
Those words that hid away, I'll let them go forth and throw them up
into the blue sky

With all these different things I want to tell you
There's all these different things I wish that you knew
I hope that they'll line up and make pathway
And find their way somewhere out there

With all these different words I want you to hear
I hope now that this song will make it all clear
It seems that both our thoughts have come together
Bringing us together here, let's tell them everywhere! Ah

This bright light that I see, it's clear and nice, it kind of resembles you
I felt it falling through my fingers, slipping out towards the blue
It made my body move, my hand tapping along with a soundless beat
That beat inside myself, I let it go forth and throw it up into the heavens

With all these different things I want to tell you
There's all these different things I wish that you knew
I hope that they'll line up and make a pathway
To a place somewhere they can reach you

With all these different words I want you to hear
I hope now that this song will make it all clear
It seems that both our thoughts have come together
Bringing us together here, let's tell them everywhere! Ah Ah

As I'm dancing through these unchanging days, clarity piercing
through the haze
A thought started moving through my head that this day was a gift for us
The sound that made me see, it made me believe
It shook and made my whole world free
Will you tell me now? Come to me now and tell your world

With all these different things I want to tell you
There's all these different things I wish that you knew
I hope that they'll line up and make pathway
And find their way somewhere out there

With all these different words I want you to hear
I hope now that this song will make it all clear
It seems that both our thoughts have come together
Bringing us together here, let's tell them everywhere! Ah Ahh Ah

Looking back on the years that have passed of pictures in a book,
It seems like both of our lives became intertwined
Back to a time, so long ago, just like a fantasy
I thought that I couldn't ever love someone then, but...

Knock!
Did you see?
That you were the one who went and opened that door, there
You opened my heart

Remember, as our wrinkles keep growing one by one each day
Let's have fun, let's look to tomorrow once more
I'll just laugh and spend time with you
So, every time our wrinkles keep on growing
You seem a little bit happier than before
I hope you'll always be smiling
So let's just let nature take its course

Looking back on the years that have passed of pictures in a book,
It seems like both of our lives became intertwined
"One day, I will pass away, please promise that you'll smile"
That's what we promised that day, do you remember? Then...

"Please marry me!"
Getting down on one knee, I pull out the box with a ring
You make me happy!

Remember, as our wrinkles keep growing one by one each day
The sky turns and burns out a soft glow that's warm now
All my tears start overflowing
So, every time our wrinkles keep on growing
There's no taking, no giving, nothing like that, ah...
As long as we're still together
I hope that this feeling never ends

If we're really honest though, we know that things will have to come to an end
But there's no way that we can turn back the time to before
So let's promise again, just one more time
Remember... 
(Remember)

Now it's time, the day has come that we must part
Laying down, your wrinkled hand reaching out to mine
And it seems that it time to say our goodbyes
I remember, you were crying like a child then
But just like you promised you still seemed to smile
I looked you in the eyes and told you,
"I've never seen you so beautiful"

"You know, you make me so happy!"
And as you said that, I close my eyes

I listened to From Y to Y, Sayonara, and Tell Your World since I actually knew those songs. It often sounds like you are out of breath. I am not sure how much you are recording at one time but maybe you should try recording in smaller parts.

Your From Y to Y lyrics seemed to have too many syllables occasionally.
EX:(Posting it messed up the spacing, sorry )
and like a     small chi    ld  I       just cry out
ko  do  mo     no   you   ni  sa     ken da

EX:(Still messed up   )
Now   I   look  like the  strongest     one,and gave up  on  my fu  ture
Tsu   yo ga     tte  te   bana          shi   ta   ri      sou no mi  rai

Sentence one could be fixed by removing ‘just’.
Sentence two not only has an extra syllable, it also does not make sense. The way the sentence is worded makes it sound like you gave up on your future because you are the strongest one. I think it should be reworded to something like: “Though I may look like I’m strong, I gave up on my future” That fits the syllables and sounds more accurate.

Your Sayonara lyrics seemed left a few syllables out
EX:( Yep, still a problem  )
Those happy days that would never end, I     wish that they’d go on and on
Na       nige   na     i       ma  ini      chi  ga    ei    en     ni     mo o   mo  e  ta

Ex:(I have determined that it just is not going to space right  )
Even  if    it’s just a   lie, I   feel my self fall ing down
Yasa  shii  u   so  de  mo ki   mo chi ha   yu  re   ru      no

For sentence one, just change the ‘they’d’ to ‘they would’
For sentence two, just change the ‘it’s’ to ‘it is’.

For Tell Your World, there were not any syllable issues that I saw but I did not check the whole song. However, there was an ‘a’ missing from your lyrics.
EX:
I hope that they'll line up and make pathway
Should be: I hope that they'll line up and make a pathway

There is a tense error.
Ex:
I let it go forth and throw it up into the heavens
-To be able to say ‘let’, you would have to change ‘throw’ to ‘threw’
I think that leaving it as ‘let’ sounds odd. I think it would sound better if it were written like this: “I’ll let it go forth (I would change ‘forth’ to ‘on’ personally) and throw it up into the heavens

For both of the lines:
throw them up into the blue sky
and
throw it up into the heavens
-Maybe you should change it to not say ‘throw them/it up’. Since that can also mean vomiting, saying that you’ll throw the beat and words up into the sky/heavens sounds awkward.

I noticed that parts of your Tell Your World lyrics rhymed yet other parts did not. Either chose to rhyme or not; having some parts rhyme and others not makes your lyrics sound confused.

You have a nice voice, but it sounds like you are recording the song in one take. I am not sure if you are or not, but if you are, stop and record in parts. If you can time your singing to the song as close as you do then that probably means that you have some recording software that would allow you to record in parts. If you are not recording in one take, then just record in more parts so you can catch your breath. If you record in parts, I think that you can become a great singer~

P.S. As I was finishing my feedback, I noticed that your Wrinkle lyrics are missing ‘d’
EX:
And as you said that, I close my eyes
-Should be: And as you said that, I closed my eyes