[Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]

This topic is JUST to contribute your ideas for the lyrics.
All questions and other things go here -> https://ytchorus.forumotion.com/music-f17/youtube-chorus-project-creating-a-song-title--t421.htm

Lyrics:

I can make up/translate some stuff in/into japanese and swedish or check japanese grammar. ;D

Just a suggestion... maybe the lyric should go from a 1st person's perspective, to 2nd person (you), then to 1+2 = 3rd (we)


Example:

From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me
<insert some more lyric here>

Time has flown by and there comes you
<insert more lyric>

You and Me, We are One (chorus)
<insert the same phrase (talk), but in different language>


Something like that. :D

Dawnbringerz wrote:Just a suggestion... maybe the lyric should go from a 1st person's perspective, to 2nd person (you), then to 1+2 = 3rd (we)


Example:

From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me
<insert some more lyric here>

Time has flown by and there comes you
<insert more lyric>

You and Me, We are One (chorus)
<insert the same phrase (talk), but in different language>


Something like that. :D

Oh wow, I like them :D

From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me
<insert some more lyric here>

Maybe: and then I found you?
Or something like that

@luna~ but the second verse is where you comes. :D

uhm... *randomly suggests* do you people think that we can make more than one genre within one song? :D
yah know...ballad an then *screams* and then reggae (ehwut?!) then pop into country and then ballad into RNB. haha.XD i dunno.XD

okay, i think i'll just post later with the lyrics.XD

EDIT::
[*] = my idea
~ = nothing really.XD
++ = i'm talking.XD
<> = insert lyric

~From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me
[*]i don't really know where to start
searchin for someone to light my heart~ sad part

~Time has flown by and there comes you
[*]You showed me sunshine and not just few
when we're together i always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you~ enlightened

~You and Me, We are One (chorus)
<insert the same phrase (talk), but in different language>
[*](TAGALOG) Ikaw at ako, tayo'y iisa! =D +Filipinos out there /
in here,haha,you may rephrase it if you have better ideas,k? :D+
<insert the same phrase (talk), but in different language>~ happy mood

+next verse,i suggest we use a different story+
+like this:+

~im a kind of person that gets what i want
but i always complain, there's somethin i ain't got <-- +with this part, i think it suits to be a rap.LOL+
in my room is silence, thinkin of what is that
i just sang my favorite tune and an idea suddenly popped~
+i accept criticism peole!haha.XD+

<more lyric please. ^^>



those were just my ideas. you may change it if you have better. ^^

@sakuratine
They are really good, thank you ^^

So pretty. I'd love to join you in this project. =] I'm a song writer.

Let me know what I can do to help.

I want to join too, but I'm not good at writing ... may be singing? If there's a place for me..

Please, post here other things that are not lyrics!
https://ytchorus.forumotion.com/music-f17/youtube-chorus-project-creating-a-song-title--t421.htm

Since it's a "song to you", and the concept is about "I" and "You" being alone, then meeting each other and becoming a "We"...well, I thought we could make a singing or talking part with "Thank you" in all the languages.

@Sakuratine : Changing the song style could be nice, but...I'm not sure if it is very easy to do. Maybe we could try to stick to one or two genres first?
Your lyrics are nice!! <3 About the last sentence "i just sang my favorite tune and an idea suddenly popped~", I'd suggest something more like "Singing your melody I suddenly thought of you". It's not really the same thing at all...but that was quite the idea I got from it.

To follow your ideas with some..randomn lyrics °A°'':
"Let's hum a song, sing with your heart!
Take my hand, we'll reach tomorrow
Enlightening the silence with our words
Melodies from yesterday blahblah~"
That's just the idea...If anyone could help...°_°

*goes away in a dark corner*

I was thinking to put different styles of music in one song....
(I mean, jazz, then pop, rock, hardcore....:9 )

@Aelve
Don't go at that corner! xD
Your idea is nice :)

@Luna : Thank you ><

Jazz is win *__* all the other stuff too. I kinda like the "Nico genre" ("From Y to Y" for example..I dunno what it should be actually..)

Yeah, I think that it would be really cool if we add some music styles :)

(ahahaah...hardcore is taken~~ XD)

aelve IS right though xD if its hard enough to make the melody and find people who can use those programs it'll be even harder to make so many different genres ^^; plus the genres need to be able to merge with one another ,it cant be random either. Also genres should be related to lyrics as well (well jazz usually doesnt have lyrics so I dunno Im making a point there xD)

Yeah..Maybe we could make different songs =D

When talking about jazz, i thought more of jazzy songs like PianoxFortexScandal or Cremation melody. But I guess it's hard to compose =__=

What should we choose then?

UPDATE: lolz.XD

[*]o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah..!
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yeaheh....(or just hums and something.xD)

dawnbringerz: [From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me]
sakuratine: [i don't really know where to start
searchin' for someone to light my heart]

CHORUS1: (spanish, malay, french) You and me, We are one +then they will sing in english together+

dawnbringerz: [Time has flown by and there comes you]
sakuratine: [You showed me sunshine and not just few
when we're together i always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you]

CHORUS2: (thai, filipino, german) +then they'll sing together in english+

sakuratine: [im a kind of person that gets what i want
but i always complain, there's somethin i ain't got
in my room is silence, thinkin of what is that
sang our melody and true! it is [all]Y-O-U! +ehh? whaddya think people?XD+

CHORUS3: (korean,sweddish,mandarin) YOU and me, we are one (together:english)

ADDED:

+i just thought about this: hehe ^_^'+

when i get home, take my laptop and turn it on
i rush the type with an excited expression.
browse my bookmarks and tell me what you see
most of it is about you, YTC. [yeah!]

+lol.that is more like ..my situation?haha.XD+

BRIDGE:
aelve: [Let's hum a song, sing with your heart!
Take my hand, we'll reach tomorrow
Enlightening the silence with our words [o-oh oh~]
Melodies from yesterday],
[*]brightens today [all] yeah yeah yeah!
Here we are, it's not a perfect world
various languages,diff'rent cultures
singing one song with YOUr reflection~~ [yeaaahh..o-oh o-oh]

CHORUS4: (chinese, cantonese, khmer) then, together.:D

<add more people. haha>

+please criticize, people.XD and, btw, i am randomly putting ohhs and yeeeaahhs.haha.im singing these with random tunes.XD for me, that third verse is rap.haha +

@aelve~ you got the correct idea.! xD oh... okiish! *thumbs up* hmmm...how abt that? "sang our melody and true! it is Y-O-U!" XD

@luna&aelve~ thanks so much! :D about the styles, i dunno.XD

@kicchan&moonlight~ you may help with the lyrics. :D

[*]o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah..!
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yeaheh....(or just hums and something.xD)

dawnbringerz: [From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me]
sakuratine: [i don't really know where to start
searchin' for someone to light my heart]

CHORUS1: (spanish, malay, french) You and me, We are one +then they will sing in english together+

dawnbringerz: [Time has flown by and there comes you]
sakuratine: [You showed me sunshine and not just few
when we're together i always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you]

CHORUS2: (thai, filipino, german) +then they'll sing together in english+

sakuratine: [im a kind of person that gets what i want
but i always complain, there's somethin i ain't got
in my room is silence, thinkin of what is that
sang our melody and true! it is [all]Y-O-U! +ehh? whaddya think people?XD+

CHORUS3: (korean,sweddish,mandarin) YOU and me, we are one (together:english)

ADDED:

when i get home, take my laptop and turn it on
i rush the type with an excited expression.
browse my bookmarks and tell me what you see
most of it is about you, YTC. [yeah!]


BRIDGE:
aelve: [Let's hum a song, sing with your heart!
Take my hand, we'll reach tomorrow
Enlightening the silence with our words [o-oh oh~]
Melodies from yesterday],
[*]brightens today [all] yeah yeah yeah!
Here we are, it's not a perfect world
various languages,diff'rent cultures
singing one song with YOUr reflection~~ [yeaaahh..o-oh o-oh]

CHORUS4: (chinese, cantonese, khmer) then, together.

Moonlight (I could sing/rap this part. I’ve got it all planned out): [Revolve~ Revolve~ around the world and share your passion~ Oh-oo~.
(rap) We’re together in this life sharing everything we’ve got-
Let’s expand our wing and reach a brightened future full of song.
From the lights of Mexico to Spain to Germany, Thailand, the Philippines, Korea, China and the USA—
Let’s come together in a place were we belong—
We’re here on YTC and together sing this song!]

CHORUS5: (in English. With no bg music)
(fade out)

Moonlight-KurochiMisa wrote:

Moonlight (I could sing/rap this part. I’ve got it all planned out): [Revolve~ Revolve~ around the world and share your passion~ Oh-oo~.
(rap) We’re together in this live sharing everything we’ve got-
Let’s expand our wing and reach a brightened future full of song.
From the lights of Mexico to Spain to Germany, Thailand, the Philippines, Korea, China and the USA—
Let’s come together in a place were we belong—
We’re here on YTC and together sing this song!]

CHORUS5: (in English. With no bg music)
(fade out)

Uh you mean life? o:

And wow you guys are so amazing, i couldnt even write a song/poem if i tried T_T

shoyru166166 wrote:

Uh you mean life? o:

And wow you guys are so amazing, i couldnt even write a song/poem if i tried T_T

Yeah. Type-o. My bad. lol

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I'm mad? o_o

Im sorry just forget everything i said, it seemed kinda rude even though i was just playing around

nice! you're the best, moonlight! :D
i love your rap.
i hope my lyrics isn't bad. :-S

however.... hmmm...
im getting the sense that the pattern of our lyrics is a little similar to Smiling. hmm.... let's adjust it. :D

UPDATED LYRICS::

Spoiler:

Oh, we're already finished? xD That was very fast. But yes, I think the lyrics are pretty close to Smiling's...we should maybe change some things?

But, I see there's no japanese...I think we could put the chorus in japanese once? Because we may be posting this on Niconico, it'd be nice to have one sentence in japanese~ (As for many songs on NND, there's often one or two sentences in english).
Like "Kimi to boku ga issho ni utau yo" I'm almost sure the grammar isn't correct, but well...it's just an idea. If anyone could make a correct sentence..?

Actually, if everybody wants to sing, no one can sing more than 2 times...and we have to make the lyrics longer....

But sakuratine & moonlight
It's really cool! We've got the first part ;D