Requesting Critique! ~ horizon's version of Scissorhands

I covered Scissorhands by Hatsune Miku, and I have completely mixed feelings about it, so I wanted to know what you guys thought of it.

Like it? Hate it? Be honest. I can take it. /manly tears Q AQ)/

I'm gonna be honest here. Trust me okay?

You sound really good!!!!!! Omg I'm in love with the cover LOLL!!!

I like the fact that you can change your pitch. As in, I don't noe wats the term for it. Its when you drag it to higher pitch. I fail at that technique. Seriously.

If I didnt like this cover I wouldn't have bother to post this So really, its good!!!

Edit: Oh yes I finally found it, I remember there is a thread for critique as well
https://ytchorus.forumotion.com/t773-criticism-anyone

Your cover has been Shuuki-certified~ <3 And Shuuki certifies only the best~!

Didn't really like the opening few "Aishite"s. Started off a little too abruptly, and it feels like you're withholding too much breath while singing them.

But you certainly have style~ Such jazz~! I love it~! Go upload on NND and become a top-ranked utaite we can all boast about knowing~~~

The little flair at around 1:30 has a little... too much consonant, I guess? The scream at... 3:37 got just a little, little bit out of hand. ....The last note.... I'm a little dubious about it. It sounds almost like you were about to sing more, and then decided that one was enough.

....Sorry for being a harsh critic. Q_Q Shuu is used to critiquing in painstaking detail.