1/6 - English (fail) translyrics, critique?

1/6
(said as one-sixth)

Someday soon, I will break the chains of gravity
And bring you to space to go to the satellite

I was walking around town looking for your face
Wandering along all these dark streets in the night
When you talked to me on the phone, the way you were speaking
Made me feel a very great deal of concern

When I had found you, I saw your eyes were reddened
Please don't lie to me, pretending that there's nothing wrong now

I can't leave you alone and let you sink into the dark swamp I'm seeing you go farther in

Someday soon, I will break the chains of gravity
And allow this satellite to fly all around space
Your weight up there, it will only ever be 1/6 of what it was

If the sadnesses you carry are lightened
That's the only thing that I could ever want
Someday soon, I'll take you all the way up there
Out of the gravity

Space traveling is an impossible feat right now
But bringing you higher physically will do
Considering all of the various options
I chose the red tower on the edge of the port

I decided to pretend that I had been running there
A way to explain why my heart was beating so fast
Today, I shall claim the right to bring your hands into mine

Like an elevator heading toward orbit
Our satellite is rising up above the clouds
300 meters higher, your weight may be a little lighter than what it was before

This may only be but a cheap little trick
But I think you understand what I am meaning here
I want to take you somewhere above the boundaries of Earth
Out of the gravity

My feelings are sometimes very thinly veiled
But I think you've probably known that all along
Though I still want to save you if only because of my egoism

It's all because of the sun's light
That the moon can be so brightly shining white
Can you allow me to help you in a similar manner?

Someday soon, I will break the chains of gravity
And bring you to space to go to the satellite
Sorrow and sadness up there, it will only ever be 1/6 of what it was

Space ships are still a bit too far to reach
But until I am able to do so,
Can you please keep a hold of my left hand?

Out of the gravity; someday I'll take you there
Out of the gravity