My art thread thingie.

[Guest]

So I've decided to get a little serious about drawing again. I haven't drawn seriously for like a year and I used to love it and it just sucks that I'm not doing it much anymore.
Anyway I know that people are online here 24/7 so this might be the right place to show my art and getting quick comments.
It's 3:17 am and I want to finish this pic's lineart before I sleep. Does anyone see something that looks strange that I need to fix? Anything. I'm drawing this for a friend and I want it to be as good as it could possibly be D:

[Cloudniaa]

It's so nice and cute ((The dog and the girl)) you draw I much better than I do

[ChiruKashu]

Uwaahh <3 the dog looks really cool!

[QrMOMOKA]

Nice puppy darling<3
But I guess you came here for critics so I'll talk about something I see that's a bit strange in your drawing.XD

The legs might be a bit short compare to her body and head. Also, the neck seems a little thick too. Maybe you want to move the uppor part of her right leg more right, because right now her hip is even skinnier than her shoulders.<3

[Hikki-chan]

Omigosh Othello, that's awesommeee!
But I agree about the legs being a bit too short, unless that's your style XDD
The dog looks really fantastic though! n w n

By the way, I was wondering, are you the Othello from Yopro? :00

[Guest]

It's a kid, so I meant to make the legs short and all that xD Are they too short for a kid too? o.o I've actually never drawn one before so I just ... I just tried something that looked okay. ... o:

Oh and the dog, I guess I should've said that but I totally just copied it from a photo xD
And

are you the Othello from Yopro? :00

yes. xD

[Pronch]

Ooh, really cute ;v;

[QrMOMOKA]

Little kids aren't that tall, but their body proportions should be the same as adults, except for the head XD
the knee should be in the middle of chest (where nipples are XD) when bending down like that, because the uppor body have to be bent a bit to remain this position. So the body should be appear shorter, or to make it easier, draw the legs longer<3

But it's still a pretty doggy<3 and cute loli<3

[Guest]

WHOA complicated. oAo;
I'm ... going to leave it like it is for now and remember that for my next pic though <3 because ... I already started colouring it. lol xD
And thank you (to everyone probably)

[QrMOMOKA]

XD yep, very complicated<3
I hate to change my linearts too, especially if I'm already coloring it XD
And no problem at all<3

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