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[Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Isn't it awesome? xD
Edit:
Full lyrics:
...I'd like to know what everybody thinks. After all, we're all singing this song, right? It's okay if you can't write or compose, just say what you think. Thanks~! 8D
( We're also missing a sentence to sing in every language. Suggestions? owo )
Edit:
Full lyrics:
- Spoiler:
- o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah..!
o-ooh-o-oh! yehiyeah yeah yeah...
o-ooh-o-oh! yeaheh....(or just hums and something.xD)
From little pieces of fragments I came to be
From the beginning there was only me
I don't really know where to start
searchin' for someone to light my heart
CHORUS1: (spanish, malay, french) You and me, We are one +then they will sing in english together+
Time has flown by and there comes you
You showed me sunshine and not just few
when we're together i always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you
CHORUS2: (thai, filipino, german) +then they'll sing together in english+
Im a kind of person that gets what i want
but i always complain, there's somethin i ain't got
in my room is silence, thinkin of what is that
sang our melody and true! it is [all]Y-O-U!
CHORUS3: (korean,sweddish,mandarin) YOU and me, we are one (together:english)
when i get home, take my laptop and turn it on
i rush the type with an excited expression.
browse my bookmarks and tell me what you see
most of it is about you, YTC. [yeah!]
BRIDGE:
みんなで心を込めて歌って
minna de kokoro komete utatte
手を取って明日へ歩こう
te wo totte ashita he arukou
昨日のメロディ今輝いてる
kinou no merodi ima kagayaiteru
言葉で静けさ啓発しながら
kotoba de shizukesa keihatsu shinagara,
[all] yeah yeah yeah!
Here we are, it's not a perfect world
various languages,diff'rent cultures
singing one song with our reflection~~ [yeaaahh..o-oh o-oh]
CHORUS4: (chinese, cantonese, khmer) then, together.
([/b][/i]Moonlight : I could sing/rap this part. I’ve got it all planned out): [Revolve~ Revolve~ around the world and share your passion~ Oh-oo~.
(rap) We’re together in this life sharing everything we’ve got-
Let’s expand our wing and reach a brightened future full of song.
From the lights of Mexico to Spain to Germany, Thailand, the Philippines, Korea, China and the USA—
Let’s come together in a place were we belong—
We’re here on YTC and together sing this song!]
CHORUS5: (in English. With no bg music)
(fade out)
...I'd like to know what everybody thinks. After all, we're all singing this song, right? It's okay if you can't write or compose, just say what you think. Thanks~! 8D
( We're also missing a sentence to sing in every language. Suggestions? owo )
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
This part:
"Time has flown by and there comes you
You showed me sunshine and not just few
When we're together I always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you"
is a little odd. XD;
How about:
"Time has flown by but you're still you
You showed me the sunshine that is our truth
And when we were together I always knew
I'd be singing this song from my heart with you"
???
"Time has flown by and there comes you
You showed me sunshine and not just few
When we're together I always knew
I'll be singing this song from my heart with you"
is a little odd. XD;
How about:
"Time has flown by but you're still you
You showed me the sunshine that is our truth
And when we were together I always knew
I'd be singing this song from my heart with you"
???
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
The song sounds great. =D The lyrics anyways. Maybe the extra sentence for the languages to say could be something like, Together we are the world/future, let's let our voices be heard. Something along the lines of that. ^^;
Also, I have an idea. At the end, we could either have a bit of instrumental, where there are sections where we could sing "thank you" in all the different languages at intervals, until it fades out. Either that or we could sing the chorus until it fades out, then we all say 'thank you' in all the languages at the same time, which will sound kinda chaotic, but fun and nice. In the background of this, there could be a little rap going on. I've noticed that th bridge makes a reall nice rap (I've tried), and we could tag a bit of English to the end of that for the 'ending rap'. I've got two lines to suggest. "Here we are in this world full of pain and sorrow; but ev'rytime the sun sets there is a new tomorrow". (Yeah, I'm still working on it...)
Also, I have an idea. At the end, we could either have a bit of instrumental, where there are sections where we could sing "thank you" in all the different languages at intervals, until it fades out. Either that or we could sing the chorus until it fades out, then we all say 'thank you' in all the languages at the same time, which will sound kinda chaotic, but fun and nice. In the background of this, there could be a little rap going on. I've noticed that th bridge makes a reall nice rap (I've tried), and we could tag a bit of English to the end of that for the 'ending rap'. I've got two lines to suggest. "Here we are in this world full of pain and sorrow; but ev'rytime the sun sets there is a new tomorrow". (Yeah, I'm still working on it...)
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Yea, I've suggested that before :3 I think having everybody say "Thank you" in the end would sound nice and fun too~!
How about singing the bridge, and have some people rap it at the same time? (We'd add a few lyrics to rap then)
I guess everybody can go like FREESTYLE in the end xD
If you're still working on it, you can submit your lyrics here when you're finished >w< If everybody agrees, I'll add them to what we already have~! Thanks for helping, hehe.
How about singing the bridge, and have some people rap it at the same time? (We'd add a few lyrics to rap then)
I guess everybody can go like FREESTYLE in the end xD
If you're still working on it, you can submit your lyrics here when you're finished >w< If everybody agrees, I'll add them to what we already have~! Thanks for helping, hehe.
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Yeah, I actually kinda built off your idea, just suggesting different ways we could do it, Aelve-senpai. ^^; Thank you! (Freestyle sounds fun. xD)
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
It looks great so far and the ideas incorporated are rather genius, I think. Keep in mind though that whoever composes the song may have some difficulty keeping exactly to the finalized lyrics. Other issues may also come up, like harmonies, choruses in different languages and how it's going to work without sounding like a mishmash, etc.
All that lovely stuff. Meanwhile, we need some more songwriters, yo. If need be, I have a friend who composes beats, which could be helpful.
All that lovely stuff. Meanwhile, we need some more songwriters, yo. If need be, I have a friend who composes beats, which could be helpful.
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Oh. Hey there. o u o I've read over the lyrics, and they sound really nice! I agree with miyuki-haruka's edit, it does sound a bit better. Um, if we keep to these lyrics, then I have some small edits to suggest, just to make it sound more natural.
The parentheses are where I added my own thoughts. Look over the edits, I tried not to change anything to dramatically, just trying to make it sound more natural. Sorry if someone doesn't like something. OTL;; But I really do like the song and the vibe it gives. It's very warm and welcoming and I love it. C:
- Spoiler:
- From little pieces of fragments I came to be
In the beginning there was only me
I don't really know where to start
Searchin' for someone to light my heart
CHORUS1: (spanish, malay, french) You and me, We are one +then they will sing in english together+
Time has flown by but you're still you
You showed me the sunshine that is our truth
And when we were together I always knew
I'd be singing this song from my heart with you
CHORUS2: (thai, filipino, german) +then they'll sing together in english+
I'm the kind of person that gets what I want
but I always complain, there's somethin' I ain't got
My room is silent, tryin' to think what it could be
Sang our melody and it's true! It is [all]Y-O-U!
CHORUS3: (korean,sweddish,mandarin) YOU and me, we are one (together:english)
I get home, take my laptop and turn it on
Excited 'cause I know where I'm going
Browse my bookmarks and tell me what you see
Most of it is about you, YTC. [yeah!]
BRIDGE:
みんなで心を込めて歌って
minna de kokoro komete utatte
手を取って明日へ歩こう
te wo totte ashita he arukou
昨日のメロディ今輝いてる
kinou no merodi ima kagayaiteru
言葉で静けさ啓発しながら
kotoba de shizukesa keihatsu shinagara,
[all] yeah yeah yeah!
Here we are, it's not a perfect world
various languages,diff'rent cultures
singing one song with our reflection~~ [yeaaahh..o-oh o-oh] (What exactly do you want this line to say? It just sounds a little bit awkward to say we're singing with our reflection, so I don't know if you meant something different.)
CHORUS4: (chinese, cantonese, khmer) then, together.
([/b][/i]Moonlight : I could sing/rap this part. I’ve got it all planned out): [Revolve~ Revolve~ around the world and share your passion~ Oh-oo~.
(rap) We’re together in this life sharing everything we’ve got-
Let’s expand our wings and reach a bright future full of song.
From the lights of Mexico to Spain to Germany, Thailand, the Philippines, Korea, China and the USA—
Let’s come together in a place were we belong—
We’re here on YTC and together we sing this song! (I love this line~)
The parentheses are where I added my own thoughts. Look over the edits, I tried not to change anything to dramatically, just trying to make it sound more natural. Sorry if someone doesn't like something. OTL;; But I really do like the song and the vibe it gives. It's very warm and welcoming and I love it. C:
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
We?Who "We" ?Kagamine_Len wrote:Um, can we write the Russian chorus?
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
The chorus exists out of "you and me, we are one" in different languages.. so all you really have to do for the chorus is translate that into your own language (Russian in this case) :3Kagamine_Len wrote:Um, can we write the Russian chorus?
Also, there are still some languages missing in the chorus parts right? (or did I just miss them? )
Caramel- Conversationalist
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Well, the lyrics look pretty complete, but I'm sure there are more languages the chorus could be translated into. Like Portuguese... *cough* *speaks Portuguese* c: It all depends on how many choruses the song will have, I guess?
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
I'm okay with the edited lyrics.!
I hope this'll get finalized ASAP.
I'm excited!! Woohoo! XD
I hope this'll get finalized ASAP.
I'm excited!! Woohoo! XD
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
BTW peoples, while we're finalizing lyrics and translating into more languages, think about what style song we want. Then the composing process can get started.
In fact, we need more songwriters.
In fact, we need more songwriters.
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
@everyone
Shall i open a new thread asking for people to play instruments? oWo
Shall i open a new thread asking for people to play instruments? oWo
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
I think that would be useful, yes :3 Else we might get confused and stuff..
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
@Luna: Yes, that would be useful.
I'm happy my edit is liked. :3 I really like how these lyrics are shaping up!Effyness wrote:Oh. Hey there. o u o I've read over the lyrics, and they sound really nice! I agree with miyuki-haruka's edit, it does sound a bit better. Um, if we keep to these lyrics, then I have some small edits to suggest, just to make it sound more natural.
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
=D
I recorded a sample of what I think the song sounds like in my head. XD
I recorded a sample of what I think the song sounds like in my head. XD
Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
I wanna hear it~! <3
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
So are we singing this all in english and the chorus in our languages ?
:O
:O
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
hi hi~! is this topic dead and over with?
if noooot, is this the lyrics so far?
Can whoever is translating the chorus lines put them into the lyrics just so that everyone singing those lines sings the same thing? 'cuz theres probly multiple ways to translate the same thing.
uhm.. this'd sound terrible in canto in my opinion.: Nay tong ngo, ngo day hai yut goa
D: feels like i shouldnt be translating it literally. or maybe add something after the "goa"
same goes for mando. Ni he wo, wo men shi yi ge
i think the feeling for the song is more like, "we are in the same mindset/heart" or "we have the same feeling" not what i translated it as.
MY SUGGESTION?
make a chorus that just splits into different languages. not the same line over and over translated, but something that'd make sense if you knew every language, but still makes sense without knowing all of them too. XD don't really know how to explain it. D:
i'm hoping this topic hasnt died..... and im actually typing this for people to read..
if noooot, is this the lyrics so far?
- Spoiler:
- From little pieces of fragments I came to be
In the beginning there was only me
I don't really know where to start
Searchin' for someone to light my heart
CHORUS1: (You and me, We are one +then they will sing in english together+)
Spanish:
Malay:
French: Toi et moi, nous ne sommes qu'un
Time has flown by but you're still you
You showed me the sunshine that is our truth
And when we were together I always knew
I'd be singing this song from my heart with you
CHORUS2: (thai, filipino, german) +then they'll sing together in english+
I'm the kind of person that gets what I want
but I always complain, there's somethin' I ain't got
My room is silent, tryin' to think what it could be
Sang our melody and it's true! It is [all]Y-O-U!
CHORUS3: (korean,sweddish,mandarin) YOU and me, we are one (together:english)
I get home, take my laptop and turn it on
Excited 'cause I know where I'm going
Browse my bookmarks and tell me what you see
Most of it is about you, YTC. [yeah!]
BRIDGE:
みんなで心を込めて歌って
minna de kokoro komete utatte
手を取って明日へ歩こう
te wo totte ashita he arukou
昨日のメロディ今輝いてる
kinou no merodi ima kagayaiteru
言葉で静けさ啓発しながら
kotoba de shizukesa keihatsu shinagara,
[all] yeah yeah yeah!
Here we are, it's not a perfect world
various languages,diff'rent cultures
singing one song with our reflection~~ [yeaaahh..o-oh o-oh] (What exactly do you want this line to say? It just sounds a little bit awkward to say we're singing with our reflection, so I don't know if you meant something different.)
CHORUS4: (chinese<mando?>, cantonese, khmer) then, together.
(Moonlight : I could sing/rap this part. I’ve got it all planned out): [Revolve~ Revolve~ around the world and share your passion~ Oh-oo~.
(rap) We’re together in this life sharing everything we’ve got-
Let’s expand our wings and reach a bright future full of song.
From the lights of Mexico to Spain to Germany, Thailand, the Philippines, Korea, China and the USA—
Let’s come together in a place were we belong—
We’re here on YTC and together we sing this song!
Can whoever is translating the chorus lines put them into the lyrics just so that everyone singing those lines sings the same thing? 'cuz theres probly multiple ways to translate the same thing.
uhm.. this'd sound terrible in canto in my opinion.: Nay tong ngo, ngo day hai yut goa
D: feels like i shouldnt be translating it literally. or maybe add something after the "goa"
same goes for mando. Ni he wo, wo men shi yi ge
i think the feeling for the song is more like, "we are in the same mindset/heart" or "we have the same feeling" not what i translated it as.
MY SUGGESTION?
make a chorus that just splits into different languages. not the same line over and over translated, but something that'd make sense if you knew every language, but still makes sense without knowing all of them too. XD don't really know how to explain it. D:
i'm hoping this topic hasnt died..... and im actually typing this for people to read..
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Where's VIETNAMESE ? *shot*
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
Guys, I'll start moving my A@# after exams. Sorry OTL
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Re: [Youtube Chorus Project] Creating a song [Lyrics]
@Aeon: for cantonese maybe it should be sort of like
我同你,一顆心
ngo tung nei, yat fo sam
you and me, one heart
somethign like that?
or maybe 我和你 (ngo wo nei) would sound more lyrical
我同你,一顆心
ngo tung nei, yat fo sam
you and me, one heart
somethign like that?
or maybe 我和你 (ngo wo nei) would sound more lyrical
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