some scraps, you see..

well.. yeah, just want to show off my recent works since I stumbled into drawings first than singing. need more improvement, I know.

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those are my newest drawings. there are more actually but they're not better that this one.
in case if you want to know, I'm using Paint Tool SAI.

err.. any comment?

Oh wow
You`re skilled o.o
You have your own style and it is very expressful. The only critique I could say is that the anatomy is a bit off.
Good job on doing these btw

ah thank you. I'm still on my way looking for the styles thou.

anatomy? right, I'm practicing it. maybe you could be more specific for some feedbacks?

Wow, you're really good. I really like the style. On the first one, you really put the colors and textures to good use. Some CC would be to add folds on clothes. While I looked at the drawing, I thought they felt a bit flat and more 2d. It's important especially on the second picture. She's bending, so she needs folds on her shirt. As said before, a bit bit of anatomy work would help. But other than that, I love your drawings. They're cute, and I'd like to see more from you.

furuki ayame wrote:ah thank you. I'm still on my way looking for the styles thou.

anatomy? right, I'm practicing it. maybe you could be more specific for some feedbacks?

Well, in the first pic, her legs are a bit too slim and in the second pic the guy who is leaning is kind of off-proportioned considering his height (I think you should have moved his torso up and making the legs longer).

Oh, also, work more on the hands ^^

@Xerobeats : thank you. and yes, I do need more practice--both about the color and anatomy. about the shirt, I meant to show that it's a little bigger than her usual size so it falls but yeah, adding some creases and folds would be better.

@SlashEX : well I was kinda confused. when I drew the legs bigger, my siblings said they're too big so I made them smaller. urm.. guy? which guy? if you mean the guy in the 2nd picture, they're all girls ;_; (now I realize how bad my drawings are.. orz) maybe you mentioned the green-haired one? make her legs longer? I think they look shorter because her shirt covers some of her legs. but I'll try next time. thank you for the comments.

uwaa they look like guys to me!??!

sorry x.x
It is just that their face looks too much like a boy

Yes and I mentioned the green eyed girl

I really like the colouring. But then as SlashEX mentioned, the anatomy.

In my PoV...
Picture 1: Fingers do not have this kind of shape (right hand), and the left hand's wrist is slightly funny. :\

Picture 2: Anything above the waist looks good, but it doesnt look proportionate from the waist downwards.

Thank you for commenting~