Re: 【Mixing】 Time Machine 【6人合唱】Choose poses !

by BaiiTenshii Mon Dec 19, 2011 3:17 am

Rumine -- IN
ICHA -- IN
Mochi -- IN (Please do the pronounciations just before the chorus properly, and at 1minute, that high pitched part, i hope you could improve it ~ Other than that you're all right)
Jordy -- Pending Until I hear another one (Things to improve: Timing at certain parts, your skills are commendable, and at the going chorus, i think you can imrpove the higher pitches)
Mango -- I could not listen to yours.. some problem.. :\ try submitting in a different site? like box or something +_+
Merurin -- Pending until i hear another one (Try to put in background music so i can hear the effects being played nicely. Another important thing, a big problem with the erm, original at 0:10~0:15. Its going erm, slightly off the tracks, other than that, you've controlled your vibrato pretty well)
Chinatsu -- OUT (Sorry, there were major problems with timing >< But i could give another chance if it was done better)
Kyo --IN (Sharp and flat at certain parts, unable to control voice with ease, and sounded as if u had problems with singing the song slightly... Work on that ya)
Elnawen -- IN (There are some parts where it went loud and soft loud and soft, like a wave.. but i guess its fine~ try not to strain your voice too much at the end)

by jordy905 Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:11 am

So~~ I still have a chance to join rite? I mean u only need me to redo and fix certain parts?

by Guest Mon Dec 19, 2011 8:21 am

Thank you for accepting me! I will try to work on tha, though I have a lot of difficulties with high notes. But when I try to go deeper, I can always only get every second line of the first two paragraphs plus chorus right T^T. (To show you visually what I mean - bold parts can be sung with deeper voice:

tokuigeni tsubuyaita shinpainaikarato
hito no sukunai hoomu de hetakuso ni tsuyogatta

toutotsu ni narihibiku boku wo yobuwakare no oto
minareta sono nakigao mo shibaraku wa mirenaine

koe ga saegirareteiku miburiteburi de tsutaeru
"itterasshai" no sain

sukoshi zutsu chiisakunatteku zenbu oitamama
kanashi kunankanaisato iyahon de tojikometayo)

The not bold part just goes way to deep >///< If you could please take that into consideration, I would be grateful. I can also try to record an example for you, if you need one~

by Icha626 Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:49 pm

Wahh~ Thanks for accepting mehh~ sweet

No critiques for mehh? ;w; -hidesaway-

by BaiiTenshii Tue Dec 20, 2011 1:53 am

jordy905 wrote:So~~ I still have a chance to join rite? I mean u only need me to redo and fix certain parts?

Yes. Becuase if those parts CAN be fixed, then i'll put you in, but if even after trying a second time, and those parts are still not fixed, im really sorry :\

KyoHyon wrote:Thank you for accepting me! I will try to work on tha, though I have a lot of difficulties with high notes. But when I try to go deeper, I can always only get every second line of the first two paragraphs plus chorus right T^T. (To show you visually what I mean - bold parts can be sung with deeper voice:

tokuigeni tsubuyaita shinpainaikarato
hito no sukunai hoomu de hetakuso ni tsuyogatta

toutotsu ni narihibiku boku wo yobuwakare no oto
minareta sono nakigao mo shibaraku wa mirenaine

koe ga saegirareteiku miburiteburi de tsutaeru
"itterasshai" no sain

sukoshi zutsu chiisakunatteku zenbu oitamama
kanashi kunankanaisato iyahon de tojikometayo)

The not bold part just goes way to deep >///< If you could please take that into consideration, I would be grateful. I can also try to record an example for you, if you need one~

Kyohyon, i'll be working closely with you when we're on skype (^_^ so please relax. I'll instruct you the ways

Icha626 wrote:Wahh~ Thanks for accepting mehh~
No critiques for mehh? ;w; -hidesaway-

Nope, because you've got nothing i could critique on 8D
Because im being very not strict, since this is a chorus and its for fun.
I do not wish to make it a very solid and strict place. Sad

by Icha626 Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:10 am

@Tenshi: Ahh~ Okay then~ Thanks again~ Hyper

by BaiiTenshii Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:16 am

No problem.

I will talk to u guys via skype

by jordy905 Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:16 am

Kk so basically timing, and do better with the higher pitches?

by EternelMoon Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:41 pm

BaiiTenshii wrote:Rumine -- IN
ICHA -- IN
Mochi -- IN (Please do the pronounciations just before the chorus properly, and at 1minute, that high pitched part, i hope you could improve it ~ Other than that you're all right)
Jordy -- Pending Until I hear another one (Things to improve: Timing at certain parts, your skills are commendable, and at the going chorus, i think you can imrpove the higher pitches)
Mango -- I could not listen to yours.. some problem.. :\ try submitting in a different site? like box or something +_+
Merurin -- Pending until i hear another one (Try to put in background music so i can hear the effects being played nicely. Another important thing, a big problem with the erm, original at 0:10~0:15. Its going erm, slightly off the tracks, other than that, you've controlled your vibrato pretty well)
Chinatsu -- OUT (Sorry, there were major problems with timing >< But i could give another chance if it was done better)
Kyo --IN (Sharp and flat at certain parts, unable to control voice with ease, and sounded as if u had problems with singing the song slightly... Work on that ya)
Elnawen -- IN (There are some parts where it went loud and soft loud and soft, like a wave.. but i guess its fine~ try not to strain your voice too much at the end)

Okey no Problem for the animation and the lines, I will send you that by saturday ^^
But about the animation that won't be for now because I've my exams soon (medecine) >////<

by BaiiTenshii Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:28 pm

@jordy: yeah. Whatever I've stated Smile

) if the higher pitches are too difficult. Start with an octave lower.

@merurin: OK. for animations I pass to kyo to do. Is it fine with u

by RumineTt Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:21 am

Uwahhh thank you so much for having me in >w<
btw when do you want me to hand in my lines? : D

by BaiiTenshii Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:38 am

RumineTt wrote:Uwahhh thank you so much for having me in >w<
btw when do you want me to hand in my lines? : D

Anytime (^_^

I will need to decide who is a mixer first.. if not i'll have to find my personal mixer to do the job

by EternelMoon Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:56 pm

Here is my second audtion : http://www.box.com/s/4230abtzybeqr9fyh7oa

by BaiiTenshii Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:06 am

EternelMoon wrote:Here is my second audtion : http://www.box.com/s/4230abtzybeqr9fyh7oa

The timing is the problem now. the pitching and all is very good though. >_< ....
Im really sorry... but i cant cast u in. >< D:

by EternelMoon Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:23 am

Okey !

by jordy905 Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:36 am

Tenshii, here is my redo, I only di 1:40 min of the song tho, if u need me to redo the full song just tell me, and I added u on skype!

http://www.4shared.com/mp3/darxl0wZ/Time_Machine_audition_redo.html

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