【CLOSED】『Tori No Uta』　《7 People Chorus》 SCRIPT UP~LINES NEEDED DEADLINE EXTENDED: SEPTEMBER 16TH !!!

FlyingZebra wrote:I WANNA JOIN D":
CAN I?? this song is so epic <33
i love it so much~ i would like, listen to only this years ago, heheh

Gotta audition for this

@HakuraSakura: i know, hahah : )
i'll do my best~

@AmyAnn, Aoko, Dreambelieva We'll need your auditions soon ^^

For those who want to audition
Please audition SOON since deadline is just 1 week AWAY !
So please turn them on before July 22th !
Please and thank you !

^ hey Pocki-chii wanna like out line my name in red big letters ;D saying that I'm your beloved seme

vampirebitesxx wrote:

Oh Okay D: Pity but i understand .3. -listens- I totally felt all the emotion put in this one and I'm loving it ! I love your notes too, nice kitto lol x3, but after the instrumental break there's just this one little part where your timing was just a bit off. Also near the end, you did sound a little weak but after that, you just fixed it up with you (lol kathy) Amazingly mediocre voice xD But overall I think it was perfect .3. -applaud- <<- lol word change

okay i'll fix the time.. of the section, the end i do something about that. http://www.box.net/shared/2d0clu4guslepnxx26x3

this time it sorta sounded weak and off tune and tired and you were straining your voice ):

HakuraSakura wrote:^ hey Pocki-chii wanna like out line my name in red big letters ;D saying that I'm your beloved seme

PSHHHHH .
You wish !
Lol .

this time it sorta sounded weak and off tune and tired and you were straining your voice ):

I didnt re-sing this at all. The recording is the same as "Tori no Utav3" but only went to fix the timing.

oh fail me -jumps off a cliff- I GOT LOST IM SORRY -is in a lot of choruses- -heabgang-
ReEdit: wth heabgang ? o.o; -shot barrage- I'm an absolute failure

This song is like one of the prettiest out there ^.^ Must audition!!!! <3

Hazel wrote:This song is like one of the prettiest out there ^.^ Must audition!!!! <3

Remember the deadline is less than a week ! -Looks forward to your audition-

HakuraSakura wrote: Remember the deadline is less than a week ! -Looks forward to your audition-

Eheh. Watch me get it in by the end of Monday (if not sooner ;D)

Hazel wrote:

HakuraSakura wrote: Remember the deadline is less than a week ! -Looks forward to your audition-

Eheh. Watch me get it in by the end of Monday (if not sooner ;D)

Oh alright ^^ -looks forward to your audit even more-

Nyahho~
It's my re-sing/re-audition...
If my singing is still sucks, I'm not gonna re-sing again...
I'm very busy for my university admission so not much time for recording

And here it is~ There's like two parts that sound...I don't know how you call it. It's when I hit the high notes and sounds like clipping =x Other than that...here 'tis

http://www.box.net/shared/8qvi88d2ouqo03q7rg36

haneWing wrote:Nyahho~
It's my re-sing/re-audition...
If my singing is still sucks, I'm not gonna re-sing again...
I'm very busy for my university admission so not much time for recording

QUESTION! If you had no time to record after this, then if you got accepted, how would you record if you had no time ? CRITIQUE~When you were singing you were a bit too soft and flat in the beginning and through out the song, the song was sort of overpowering your voice ):

Hazel wrote:And here it is~ There's like two parts that sound...I don't know how you call it. It's when I hit the high notes and sounds like clipping =x Other than that...here 'tis

http://www.box.net/shared/8qvi88d2ouqo03q7rg36

Your voice was just A TAD liek OTL LIEK A TAD bit soft and TAD (OTL) flat, also when you were singing in the beginning it sounded a little bit but i think it was really good ^^ your timing your mic LOL OTL almost everything overall -claps-

HakuraSakura wrote:

Hazel wrote:And here it is~ There's like two parts that sound...I don't know how you call it. It's when I hit the high notes and sounds like clipping =x Other than that...here 'tis

http://www.box.net/shared/8qvi88d2ouqo03q7rg36

Your voice was just A TAD liek OTL LIEK A TAD bit soft and TAD (OTL) flat, also when you were singing in the beginning it sounded a little bit but i think it was really good ^^ your timing your mic LOL OTL almost everything overall -claps-

OTL? o-o

@Hazel: LOL, hakurasakura asked the same thing a while back xD
OTL is a person kneeling down in failure, O=the head T=body and L=legs
hope that makes sense >m<

[quote="HakuraSakura"]

haneWing wrote:Nyahho~
It's my re-sing/re-audition...
If my singing is still sucks, I'm not gonna re-sing again...
I'm very busy for my university admission so not much time for recording

QUESTION! If you had no time to record after this, then if you got accepted, how would you record if you had no time ? CRITIQUE~When you were singing you were a bit too soft and flat in the beginning and through out the song, the song was sort of overpowering your voice ):

ANSWER: I'm just busy these days not for a month long. just a few weeks. Because I got medical check ups, x-rays and forms to be verified by the school If I get accepted, I still have time to record.
Hmmm.... how to improved my that-kind-of-singing? It applies to all songs that I've sung....orz
Okay then~ Thanks!!!

FlyingZebra wrote:@Hazel: LOL, hakurasakura asked the same thing a while back xD
OTL is a person kneeling down in failure, O=the head T=body and L=legs
hope that makes sense >m<

STOP TRYING TO BE COOL D:< lol jkz <3
[quote="haneWing"]

HakuraSakura wrote:

haneWing wrote:Nyahho~
It's my re-sing/re-audition...
If my singing is still sucks, I'm not gonna re-sing again...
I'm very busy for my university admission so not much time for recording

QUESTION! If you had no time to record after this, then if you got accepted, how would you record if you had no time ? CRITIQUE~When you were singing you were a bit too soft and flat in the beginning and through out the song, the song was sort of overpowering your voice ):

ANSWER: I'm just busy these days not for a month long. just a few weeks. Because I got medical check ups, x-rays and forms to be verified by the school If I get accepted, I still have time to record.
Hmmm.... how to improved my that-kind-of-singing? It applies to all songs that I've sung....orz
Okay then~ Thanks!!!

Oh okay .3.

FlyingZebra wrote:@Hazel: LOL, hakurasakura asked the same thing a while back xD
OTL is a person kneeling down in failure, O=the head T=body and L=legs
hope that makes sense >m<

o-o So from what I'm understanding my audition was that bad? -starts on redo >>;;-

@Hazel: LOL no xD OTL is not necessarily a bad thing ;]
but she said overall she thought it was really good, just same spots that need fixing, haha

I DIDNT SAY IT WAS BAD D: THE OTL WAS DIRECTED TO ME >: LOL
OTL <-- to me ( just incase)

Kinda bad. Blame our 100 degree weather and almost 120 degree index, making it hard to breathe. Or blame nothing, your choice.

Anyway, here.
Those darn low notes, straining my voice.

-is able to be on today and idk when the hell i will be again~
CRITIQUE~
@RED AHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT WAS THAT WEIRD SOUND THINGY IN THE BEGINNING ?!?!!??!?!?!?!? -deduct all you points- JK LOL ~~~ But seriously i heard something weird... You started off really soft and low in the beginning and then you gradually increased your volume. What i need is you to have this consistency in your voice. Also, the only thing you didn't finish in the beginning was the 'a' in that 'miokutta'i think. But it was better than before because now i could feel the breathe that your taking in and out it comes ~ 8D but, you still need to work on the control of your vibrato and where its necessary and unnecessary. IN ADDITION~ (sorry for being so harsh its just that there's only two guys xD and i really want an AWESMAZING GUY SINGER -shot-) After 'hanasu' it sort of died, you sounded bored, weak, idk, LIFELESS ? D: it really killed it D: You where going to slow in the pronounciation and the timing it just trailed off. I know its the heat wave and everything and its just like, IM TRYING TO RECORD MY GODAMN AUDITION, CAN YOU TONE DOWN THE HEAT WEATHER ? But if you still want to try out I'm gunna have to ask you to re-audition.

P.S. REMEMBER TO DO YOU HOMEWORK IF YOU DONT D:< I'M GUNNA BLOW UP AND RAGE AROUND THE WORLD -is in an amazingly bad mood- ~HOW IS IT AMAZING ?~ OTL OTL OTL OTL OTL -dies-
Btw did you do your exercises before you did your audition ? D: