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by Rika-Rika Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:40 pm

SOOO!! I have no idea who to ask... but a CHORUS itself and we are debate on this script i have... I think it's pretty fair and ALSO
WE ARE BEGINNERS!!
THIS IS OUR 2ND SONG! and please reply...
You can also improvise it too =))
Just give and advice for it? or something...

Song is Last Night Good night... here's the script

(All) (Annie's voice is a bit stronger): ...suyasuya yume wo miteru
(Annie): kimi no yokogao
(Annie): kizukazu koboreta namida
(Annie): hoo wo tsutau

(Annie): setsuna no tokimeki wo
(Annie): kono mune ni kakushiteta no

(Annie and Mai Lee sing's together): Last night, Good night
(Then Annies voice fades and Mai lee is the leader singer): Last night, Good night
(Mai Lee): kono yoru kimi no te
(Mai Lee): nigitte nemuru yo
(Mai Lee): oyasumi

(All of us sing but real soft) )( Mai Lee's voice is clearly stronger than the rest of us): ...suteki na asa wo mou ichi-do
(Mai lee voice then gets weaker here and Tammy's voice is stronger ): kimi to sugosetara
(Then Tammy takes the lead of singing): chiisa na sonna kibou sae
(Tammy): omou dake no kiseki

(Tammy): nani mo tsutaenai mama
(Tammy and Koma sing together): sayonara wa ienai yo

(Tammy and Koma sing together): Last night, Good night
(Then Koma takes the lead as singing): Last night, Good night
(Koma): kono koe karete mo
(Koma): kienai merodii

(Koma): Last night, Good night
(All of us sing in harmony): Last night, Good night
(All of us sing in harmony): itsuka wa mukaeru
(Rika's voice takes the lead in singing): saigo wo omou yo
(Rika) : yozora ni negau no
(Rika): tokiwa no egao wo
(Rika's voice fades into all of us singing in harmony and then Rika's voice lingers in the end as everyone has stopped): oyasumi

Thanks for the people who replied. We got our info =DDD
So how do you delete this post? O_O

by YinDynasty Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:52 pm

This is a fair script indeed. However, there are so many split lines ~.~ You guys should trio sometimes. The song shouldn't be mostly solos~ Just my input though >3< And somewhat personal preference *shot*

by Imagase Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:42 am

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What Yinchan says. Scripting should be based how well your voices blend. though its a fair number of lines, you have to take into considers how well your voices "sounds" together. Also add harmony or duet/trio lines in it too.

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