[CRITICS PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!] kooh's stuff!

Hey, Kooh here~ I wanted to make my own thread because I'm probably going to ask for critics for every video I make. I really, really, really want to improve! I NEED feedback.

To start, this is my first cover...



I didn't do anything to the vocals yet. Just recorded and then stuck the raw vocals into Sony Vegas and put the piano MP3 in there. Don't judge my pronunciation! I know it's bad... I can fix that. Timing too. I was really sloppy, I know. No, I'm just looking for opinions on singing for now. I was also wondering, what's my vocal type, do you think? And how long will it take me to be super awesome? How much will I have to practice? What songs would suit my voice?

Tell me, how was it? How can I make it better? As a super cute shota once said, "make it painful. Carve the pain of my life… into my soul."

Because I enjoy humiliating myself. also a shameless bump

Oh, you don't have to critic this. If you must, save it for last.