My first complete cover -Akahitoha

I know that I can't mix so sorry if it doesn't sound so good >.< and I think i missed a couple notes...anyways....
Comments and criticism appreciated!

Btw im new here....so....hi :D

Hai thar!
It's pretty good.

Yes, you have pronunciation down! (My huge pet peeve~)
Now either my hearing has been lost to the point of no return,
or you sound a little flat, emotionally speaking.
Just enjoy the song, eh?

Yes, there were a couple of slightly "iff" notes,
but I liked your high notes. (Which I have to work like crazy on, nyargh.)

Anyhow..
Welcome to YTChorus, and keep singing, Nami!
*starts stalking, huhu*

Yo, and welcome to YTC! *obligatory statement orz*

Anyway, you have a really pretty voice! Much better than most people I've heard here (....it's true, sorry >_>; ). Just a question, were you nervous while singing? Because your voice shakes at some parts. You go slightly off at some notes too, but it's not that bad. Try to put more emotion when you sing, I'm not saying you sound straight here, but you can do so much better! You should also learn a song properly before you sing it, but everyone makes this mistake when they first start out, so it's no biggie until you start uploading more. Also, is it just me or did you pitch the instrumental lower? /o/

Anyway, I'll be looking out for more of your covers! If you ever need help, feel free to contact me. Good luck!

~Una

No the instrumental should be at the original pitch. I just took it from youtube and yeah I do notice my off-notes >.< I don't really have a problem with pronunciation; because I speak Japanese daily. I guess I was a little nervous because I didn't want to make mistakes while recording (Especially because I just got a new mic and didn't want to accidentally spit in it lawl.)Thank you very muchfor the comments and criticism and i'll try to put more feeling into it! I am very much appreciated. ^^

I didnt even notice that I got comments on this page until now xDD Ill post the newer version~ all I really did was actually try to mix it. Im thinking of re-singing some of my off notes later ><