[English] Love Is War/Koi wa Sensou Chorus

So I was thinking it'd be interesting to try out the translyrics I wrote for this song in a Chorus...so here it is! I'd say that a 12 person limit would be good. Please send in an audition first, and I'll let you know if you are accepted. I'll do the mixing and the video. Submit an avatar/picture to me (does not have to be pre-cropped, but let me know which character if there are more than one characters in the picture) along with vocals.

EDIT: Limit changed to 6. 12's a bit crowded, and it'll take too long for me to render ^^;

Here's the Karaoke version if you prefer: http://www.mediafire.com/?mvqgwn4ncj2
I find it is easier to follow the on-vocal version.

And the translyrics. If the rhythm is hard to follow for enough people, I may record myself singing it (protect your ears if this happens D:) to lay it out:

No where left for these feelings to go; my emotion is burning for you

AH!

Monochrome clouds of grey are hovering around
The sky is changing its colour as the sunlight becomes a gloomy shadow
Ah, the world is blurring in my eyes
But even so, will I still stay liking you?
I understand; I’m confused as to what to do now
What should I do? How can I…?
I am such… a moron

Let’s go, time to begin; this is a war!
It hurts just to see you laughing with somebody else!
A love that is shy, it must be a sin
I vow to show you the feelings buried in my heart

I shout my sentiment
But the megaphone was broken from before
No matter what way I reach for you
You never seem to realize my passion for you
Ah, before I realized, the sky had cleared
It doesn’t suit my problem
I can’t hold them; my feelings for you are bursting
What should I do? How can I…?
I’m not crying, I will not cry over this

I love you

“Fight and shoot for the heart,” I told myself
I didn’t want to go this far to get at you
I’ll show you how my skirt is dancing with the wind
I will get you to turn your gaze upon me alone

Prepare for the clash
I’m fighting, but I know that I will not win
Love is blind, I’ve screened my sight
Your kiss will clear the veil that I have placed on my eyes

hmm.. I think I'll try it..

i'll try as well, but i really need a sung demo of your translyrics... sorry... ^^;

Yeah sure.
Yeah, I forgot to specify the length. One verse or chorus should be fine.

LOL but you speak in it every day ^^;

hm, i'll try to practice the song... if it doesn't work, then can i ask for a demo?

Lol I'm already making the demo...I might make it into a karaoke video though, because I realize I don't enunciate properly at all when singing as high as the chorus.

oh, okay, thank you so much!

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=WYSOE4OM

So that's my attempt there. The chorus isn't that great though. If you still can't decipher it, let me know.

thank you! i'll try and tell you as soon as possible!

I might try and sing this....
gimmie a bit for me to give a audition.(I'm not good with audacity yet so the quality might be kinda bad.


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lol I didn't think the lyrics were to flowing until I heard the demo but I think I can make them work with a little effort.
your demo was great lol, keep it up.

I tried without demo help XP

http://www.mediafire.com/?4f2dsmcauidbhyg

O: That was awesome! You're definitely in.
It's amazing that you made it through deciphering the rhythm, but is it okay if you listen to the demo and try to go with that rhythm? Since it seems most of whoever's interested so far is going to be listening to that for rhythm, it'd be off for your part alone.

Also, for the final, can you send the acapella?

Ohh cool! I might try out! :DDDDD

I absolutely can send it a-capella, and I'll rerecord for the final

Thanks :D