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Post by yuriques on Tue Nov 04, 2014 9:38 pm

I listened to your Karakuri Pierrot cover too~ Piano arrangements <3
I'm jealous at your low notes, you do them perfectly >w<

The thing I noticed was that your voice is clear and powerful ^^ That's great however since this is a piano instrumental, I suggest you soften your voice as this piano arrangement sounds very delicate. Your voice feels like it's overpowering the instrumental at some parts like the beginning but the volume is fine for the chorus where it's louder. Like Aerith pointed out as well, some parts are bit too harsh in comparison to the instrumental. 

Other than that, there is some slight timing differences.

Great job~ :D
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Post by KaRei on Wed Nov 05, 2014 3:06 am

yuriques wrote:I listened to your Karakuri Pierrot cover too~ Piano arrangements <3
I'm jealous at your low notes, you do them perfectly >w<

The thing I noticed was that your voice is clear and powerful ^^ That's great however since this is a piano instrumental, I suggest you soften your voice as this piano arrangement sounds very delicate. Your voice feels like it's overpowering the instrumental at some parts like the beginning but the volume is fine for the chorus where it's louder. Like Aerith pointed out as well, some parts are bit too harsh in comparison to the instrumental. 

Other than that, there is some slight timing differences.

Great job~ :D

thank you!  i agree with you >___<  i'll try to work on those issues for next time!

thanks again for the feedback! <3
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Post by Aisuu aka RiEDe on Sun Nov 09, 2014 5:08 am

In the aZAwaratetta part, the 'Za' was a little bit off, ;o; you can try pitching it a little or sing that small part again. i know it's troublesome ugh

The tomete-e-e, or what Aer labelled as voice twists were good too. It *emphasizes* the emotions and the lyrics as well as the melody of the song.

I love how you did the 'PIERO' part with a little bit of whine, there was a little bit of switch between the bridge and the belting voice. That adds variety. As this is a piano arrange, you can try blending with the bgm with a softer voice at some parts, not completely but like, mix in a little bit of that bridge or head voice/falsetto. Again, to add ~*variety*~~**~~**

As usual, ai-suuwillalwaysnagaboutadlibsandharmos adding some harmonies and adlibs would be good too. ONCE AGAIN THIS ADDS, ****V-A-R-I-E-T-Y***** because it not only makes people enjoy your voice more, but it also boosts up your vocals, letting people hear the range of your voice as well as testing how creative you can be with d*~*~*~*~*Voice Twists*~*~*~*b. Even better when this is a piano arrange because harmonies and adlibs blend bettter with ballads....most of the time at least *O*

I just realised I mentioned variety three times omf


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Post by KaRei on Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:03 am

Ice Elf wrote:In the aZAwaratetta part, the 'Za' was a little bit off, ;o; you can try pitching it a little or sing that small part again. i know it's troublesome ugh

The tomete-e-e, or what Aer labelled as voice twists were good too. It *emphasizes* the emotions and the lyrics as well as the melody of the song.

I love how you did the 'PIERO' part with a little bit of whine, there was a little bit of switch between the bridge and the belting voice. That adds variety. As this is a piano arrange, you can try blending with the bgm with a softer voice at some parts, not completely but like, mix in a little bit of that bridge or head voice/falsetto. Again, to add ~*variety*~~**~~**

As usual, ai-suuwillalwaysnagaboutadlibsandharmos adding some harmonies and adlibs would be good too. ONCE AGAIN THIS ADDS, ****V-A-R-I-E-T-Y***** because it not only makes people enjoy your voice more, but it also boosts up your vocals, letting people hear the range of your voice as well as testing how creative you can be with d*~*~*~*~*Voice Twists*~*~*~*b. Even better when this is a piano arrange because harmonies and adlibs blend bettter with ballads....most of the time at least *O*

I just realised I mentioned variety three times omf

yeah, some of my pronunciation was a little off, but i'd already done a few retakes and i don't have a lot of time to record and didn't want to lose what little window of time i had left QwQ  so i had to go with the best take i had and unfortunately, this was it OTL

i agree with you, but i'm not very confident with adlibs and i'm not good with harmonies QwQ  sometimes i listen back to my adlibs and omg i swear, you'd think i was tone deaf or something 8'D  i'm trying to work on improving my adlibbing though!  as far as harmonies go, i usually don't do them if i don't have a harmony guide >___>  the frustrating thing is that i learned how to play keyboard and clarinet in school and so i knew my chords and arpeggios, basic stuff like that.  i could read music.  i'm rusty now and have forgotten some, but i can still read most notes.  but for the life of me, i never learned how to differentiate which note was which by ear?  so i think that plays a huge part in my harmony troubles.  some people learn how to do it by ear, but i always mess it up OTL  it feels like i have a problem HEARING how notes blend or sound while i'm singing and when i listen to it afterwards, it's very clear that i sang the wrong notes?  i don't know if that makes sense.  again, another thing i'm trying to work on but having no success with so far QwQ

thank you for the feedback!  looking back at my posts, i probably come off as a very negative and self-deprecating person xD
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Post by KaRei on Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:56 am

new cover!  i took what was said to heart and really tried to apply it to this cover >___<

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Post by KaRei on Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:40 am

it feels like i've been dead (my activity anyway xD) for a whole month, so i've updated my original post.  new quickie cover!  (also this month's event entry)

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Post by KaRei on Fri Feb 20, 2015 7:05 am

this month's event entry OwO

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Post by KaRei on Tue Mar 10, 2015 2:56 am

new cover~

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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*

Post by KaRei on Wed Apr 15, 2015 2:19 am

OwO

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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*

Post by Yohika on Wed Apr 15, 2015 5:59 am

Wow first time I'm listening to you (with Summer Record) and I really love your voice !
It's like a little husky, with some soft parts and it's... it's.. so special, but in a good way.
Your pronunciation's nice too
But you don't articulate (=> Is this english?) enough sometimes but that's okey !
And I don't know if it's just me, but I think your "second vocal" sounds like a wrong note (like in 2.14)

(Sorry my music vocabulary in english is really bad)

Please do more !


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Post by KaRei on Wed Apr 15, 2015 8:22 am

Ihika wrote:Wow first time I'm listening to you (with Summer Record) and I really love your voice !
It's like a little husky, with some soft parts and it's... it's.. so special, but in a good way.
Your pronunciation's nice too
But you don't articulate (=> Is this english?) enough sometimes but that's okey !
And I don't know if it's just me, but I think your "second vocal" sounds like a wrong note (like in 2.14)

(Sorry my music vocabulary in english is really bad)

Please do more !

thank you so much!  enunciation has always been one of my weak points, but i am trying to improve it!  you are right that 2.14 is off (like in some other places) - i blame that on bad harmonies, sadly another weakness of mine xD it's not just you :D

and don't worry, your vocab wasn't bad!  thanks again :3
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Post by KaRei on Sat Apr 25, 2015 7:52 am

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Post by KaRei on Fri May 15, 2015 1:23 pm

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Post by KaRei on Mon Jun 01, 2015 4:04 pm

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Post by chokoreetokun on Wed Jun 03, 2015 11:38 am

Wow you can genderbend o;
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Post by KaRei on Wed Jun 03, 2015 5:50 pm

chokoreetokun wrote:Wow you can genderbend o;

aha if you want to call it that xD
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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*

Post by KaRei on Fri Jul 24, 2015 7:04 am

i keep forgetting to update this!  ahaha.  i'll just post some of my more recent covers and i'll also update my first post.





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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*

Post by KaRei on Mon Sep 14, 2015 7:04 am

latest cover~

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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*

Post by KaRei on Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:06 pm

quick cover!



first post also updated!
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