ENGLISH CHORUS [OPEN] [NO DEADLINE][SINGERS WANTED] Taio Cru - Dynamite

LucidChains wrote:I had time today~ But this one is...a bit awkward at some parts. It's just that I'll be busy over the week, so if I don't have the time to re-record then I at least turned in something ^_^ so, all-in-all, my audition~

Wow..
is Great!!
**criticiqueModeOn*
but, yes, at some part, is somehow.... *cough*
but not that bad
**off*
and You don't have to redo it if U don't have time
cuz is good enough IMO
and yeah stagename pls ?

Sakura wrote:I'm sooooooooo in~~

Yaaaay~! ~!
Looking forward to it~! ^.-~
and TYT~!
**BTW, I heard Ur audition *

Azure wrote:I will gladly post an audition when I can. C;

~~~ I hope you'll have free times so you can post it up~!

KyraDesu wrote:Here's my audition :D

http://www.box.net/shared/r0gz7zhv34

I hope boxnet is okay. Or else i'll upload it elsewhere.

Yes is fine~! <<<BoxNet
**critiquesModeOn*
Hm...
let's see~~
what I think is that....
you were trying to hold yourself back
what I meant is,
you did not let the song own you **LOL, I'm sure that sentence's grammar was a FAIL xD!!*
which is.... when you were into the song, suddenly you pull yourself out of it....
cuz U C... I think there R parts that would sounds more awesome if you make it LOUDER like...
SCREEEEEEEEEEAM!!!
yes~~!
SCREEEEEEEEEEEEAM!!
that's what I meant
but scream in a good way <<i.e., don't kill your voice, let it flow and go outside smoothly and widely-along with it's power. But don't let it b-u-r-s-t *Off*
other than that, Is ~!
Good job~!
PS: stagename pls =3??

Sakura wrote:Here's my audition~~~~

Hope you like it

**critiqueModeOn*
at first, it sounds like you were lost OxO
but, by the end~~!
you improved!!
and I love he way you made the "air" sounds a-a-a-a-a-air!!
~~~back to the beginning of the song~
!! O.O!! "and it goes on and on ~~" <<the voice changed?.? **this is not a big matter if you are in a chorus, but just a FYI, if you sing with the same voice from the beginning till the end, it would sounds more <<<when U sing "solo" <<and this is just a FYI and IMO *
~~~~~~*off*
all-in-all, U've did a good job!!
and StageName pls ??

12enma12 wrote:
**critiqueModeOn*
at first, it sounds like you were lost OxO
but, by the end~~!
you improved!!
and I love he way you made the "air" sounds a-a-a-a-a-air!!
~~~back to the beginning of the song~
!! O.O!! "and it goes on and on ~~" <<the voice changed?.? **this is not a big matter if you are in a chorus, but just a FYI, if you sing with the same voice from the beginning till the end, it would sounds more <<<when U sing "solo" <<and this is just a FYI and IMO *
~~~~~~*off*
all-in-all, U've did a good job!!
and StageName pls ??

I sounded like I was lost? O.o
Why is that? I mixed it the wrong way?
I'm glad you like the "air"
Yeah, I changed cause it was too loud to continue, but I can redo it without changing it, I'll seend it tomorrow (:
One more thing...whats FYI and IMO?

Stagename: Lu [Lullaby]

Sakura wrote:

I sounded like I was lost? O.o
Why is that? I mixed it the wrong way?
I'm glad you like the "air"
Yeah, I changed cause it was too loud to continue, but I can redo it without changing it, I'll seend it tomorrow (:
One more thing...whats FYI and IMO?

Stagename: Lu [Lullaby][/quote]

Hmm....
!!
yeshhh~!
I think it might be cuz of the mixing.... but I'm not sure *SHOT*
cuz, U C, U started to early =X
but when it reach, the "I'm gonna take it~~~" part til the end, things R
Yeaaah~~!
and LOLOL~ that's gr8 to hear
~~~~
Hmm, well, is Ur choice~ ^u^
but if I were U, I would redo my audition near-by the deadline **I'll be posting it after I find at least 3boys and 3girls and 1animator*, cuz by that, I would be able to hear other's entry, and this will let me know how much I should go further
I hope I did explain it correctly ~~
i.e.,~
take Ur time to feel the song MORE!!! so things would be MORE good!!
I know you can! just TYT and U'll be

~~~~
FYI : ForYourInformation
IMO : InMyOpinion
^u ^

12enma12 wrote:
Hmm....
!!
yeshhh~!
I think it might be cuz of the mixing.... but I'm not sure *SHOT*
cuz, U C, U started to early =X
but when it reach, the "I'm gonna take it~~~" part til the end, things R
Yeaaah~~!
and LOLOL~ that's gr8 to hear
~~~~
Hmm, well, is Ur choice~ ^u^
but if I were U, I would redo my audition near-by the deadline **I'll be posting it after I find at least 3boys and 3girls and 1animator*, cuz by that, I would be able to hear other's entry, and this will let me know how much I should go further
I hope I did explain it correctly ~~
i.e.,~
take Ur time to feel the song MORE!!! so things would be MORE good!!
I know you can! just TYT and U'll be

~~~~
FYI : ForYourInformation
IMO : InMyOpinion
^u ^

Than it's because of the mixing XD I really had a bad time to mix the begining
But I can send you when I redo it, the raw vocals, so you can see how it sounds.
I didn't understand why I should redo it near the deadline (sorry xD)
I'll feel more the song
~~~~
Thanks for the information ^^

@12enma12: yeah I kinda got that feeling when I sang it too ^_^" this is a really HIGH song and I haven't reached that level of HIGHNESS yet >////< *is *isafraidhermicwillburstifshescreams//ShotXP* but thanks so much for the honest critique :D since there isn't a deadline yet I'm gonna redo it and try to improve ^_^ Practice makes perfect desu~

Sakura wrote:
Than it's because of the mixing XD I really had a bad time to mix the begining
But I can send you when I redo it, the raw vocals, so you can see how it sounds.
I didn't understand why I should redo it near the deadline (sorry xD)
I'll feel more the song
~~~~
Thanks for the information ^^

OwO~ I C~
What program did U use to mix the vocal ^u^?
And yes pls «««when U redo it ^u^
Lololol~ is ok if U can't get it, it should be the vice versa LOL, sorry for not being able to explain things well *SHOT*
But C, what I want you to understand is that to TYT and yes !! Feel! and ••••• *SHOT*««IDK what do U call it in English

KyraDesu wrote:
@12enma12: yeah I kinda got that feeling when I sang it too ^_^" this is a really HIGH song and I haven't reached that level of HIGHNESS yet >////< *is *isafraidhermicwillburstifshescreams//ShotXP* but thanks so much for the honest critique :D since there isn't a deadline yet I'm gonna redo it and try to improve ^_^ Practice makes perfect desu~

OAO.... I hate it a lot....««««When the mic./m'voice burst ~~
And LOLOLOL xD!!! Wlcme =3 but if I went to harsh, pls forgive me cuz U C, I might sound mean/harsh when I am ON that mode *critique/criticize/wtv do U call it* ~~
So pls do pardon me ^.^"
^0^~!
TYT and I'm looking forward to Ur improvement

#EDIT#
;A;....
my mobile hates me....
it made me post the same thing twice *SHOT*

No no no it's totally fine :D honest critique is the best way to find out how to improve no? ^w^ TYVM~

I agree!! Though, I must say that in all honesty my friend was completely brutal. xP His words stung me more (though partially my fault since I asked for his opinion...) Oh! And my stagename is Luci...hehe... Once I get the chance, I'll redo it :] I'll focus on pronunciation...Blargh. My lisp hates me D=

12enma12 wrote:
OwO~ I C~
What program did U use to mix the vocal ^u^?
And yes pls «««when U redo it ^u^
Lololol~ is ok if U can't get it, it should be the vice versa LOL, sorry for not being able to explain things well *SHOT*
But C, what I want you to understand is that to TYT and yes !! Feel! and ••••• *SHOT*««IDK what do U call it in English

Eto.. Sony vegas XD *shot*
But the main problem was that I singed with the videoclip playing,and the original song (the one that passes on the radio) is diferent, that's why I wasn't able to mix it the right way
Sorry
Ahaha ok ^^

How does this sound now?
Dynamite Mix
Dynamite Raw Vocals

KyraDesu wrote:No no no it's totally fine :D honest critique is the best way to find out how to improve no? ^w^ TYVM~

ThankYouu~
and yes, it is

LucidChains wrote:I agree!! Though, I must say that in all honesty my friend was completely brutal. xP His words stung me more (though partially my fault since I asked for his opinion...) Oh! And my stagename is Luci...hehe... Once I get the chance, I'll redo it :] I'll focus on pronunciation...Blargh. My lisp hates me D=

xD!!
LOLOL!
Asked his opi. for..... ?.? can I know??
~~~~~~~
Don't worry ~!
You'll have time and I'll be waiting for it~!

Sakura wrote:
Eto.. Sony vegas XD *shot*
But the main problem was that I singed with the videoclip playing,and the original song (the one that passes on the radio) is diferent, that's why I wasn't able to mix it the right way
Sorry
Ahaha ok ^^

How does this sound now?
Dynamite Mix
Dynamite Raw Vocals

ON " Sony vegas"
OMG, if I were U, I would have easier programs and those that won't make my laptop/pc become slow *SHOT*
Hmm.....
if you want to know what program I use + I'll use for the mixing === mixcraft

yes, mixcraft, GGRKS it
I think is waaaaay easier than Audacity or Vegas
some people use "GarageBand" though <<me, never use it before, but I'll try *one day*

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~!! this is Better!!
is way better than the old one *clap*clap*clap*
U've improved and I am proud
**critique=on*
but at one of the "on" near 0:27.....
when U were singing it....
did you feel anything wrong with your throat/vocal(?)cord(?) ?? *off*
cuz me, usually, if I sing hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh, my throat will hurt me, and this is bad **as what I know*SHOT*
~~~~~~~~
But well, I'm really proud of U
Ur mixing skill improved, and so your singing
Keep moving on Hun~!

12enma12 wrote:

iColour wrote:lol nope xDD I find it very hard to for some reason, and yes I will re-do it, later xDD

Cool~!!
>W<!!!
Soooo~~
Uw....
should I put Ur name in the slot now, or after you redo??
and BTW, stagename pls =3?

Umm...it doesn't matter, and it's Mia ~

iColour wrote:
Umm...it doesn't matter, and it's Mia ~

8D
Gotcha Mia =3

@ Enma
Well, in short, he simply said I was pitchy and awkward. Then he couldn't understand some parts around "the last one standing" and etc. However...this is me censoring his...er...pretty language

And I'll try to see if I can get my homework in early enough. If the deadline isn't that soon, I'll definitely will be working on it. xD

LucidChains wrote:@ Enma
Well, in short, he simply said I was pitchy and awkward. Then he couldn't understand some parts around "the last one standing" and etc. However...this is me censoring his...er...pretty language

And I'll try to see if I can get my homework in early enough. If the deadline isn't that soon, I'll definitely will be working on it. xD

O0O~~
he is sooo... direct... <<like the way he says things is waaay diff. than me O.O!!
he put it so blunt and simple...
yet me.... xD!!! I'm so noisy xD!!
LOL~
xD!!
LOLOL~
~~~~~
=3 don't worry, TYT, like, for now, the deadline might be next month =3
but now~~
I have to promote this audition to male singers ~
cuz I need 3 males + 3 females ^u ^

xD My little freshmen picks on me all the time (so he's not really scared T_T) *snickers* Now if I force him to sing... *concocts evil plans* Muahahaha... >:D

LucidChains wrote:xD My little freshmen picks on me all the time (so he's not really scared T_T) *snickers* Now if I force him to sing... *concocts evil plans* Muahahaha... >:D

who ??
the guy from before??
and what does "*snickers*" & "*concocts*"means ^.^"??

Oh nothing nothing~ Evil plans are just fun to make :D
And yup! My little freshman is that guy that I was mentioning...hehe...

LucidChains wrote:Oh nothing nothing~ Evil plans are just fun to make :D
And yup! My little freshman is that guy that I was mentioning...hehe...

xD!!
LOLOLOL~
Ok2

12enma12 wrote:
ON " Sony vegas"
OMG, if I were U, I would have easier programs and those that won't make my laptop/pc become slow *SHOT*
Hmm.....
if you want to know what program I use + I'll use for the mixing === mixcraft

yes, mixcraft, GGRKS it
I think is waaaaay easier than Audacity or Vegas
some people use "GarageBand" though <<me, never use it before, but I'll try *one day*

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~!! this is Better!!
is way better than the old one *clap*clap*clap*
U've improved and I am proud
**critique=on*
but at one of the "on" near 0:27.....
when U were singing it....
did you feel anything wrong with your throat/vocal(?)cord(?) ?? *off*
cuz me, usually, if I sing hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh, my throat will hurt me, and this is bad **as what I know*SHOT*
~~~~~~~~
But well, I'm really proud of U
Ur mixing skill improved, and so your singing
Keep moving on Hun~!

I'll download mixcraft then xD
Hummm..at 0.37?
No, my throat was fine ^^
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~

Sakura wrote:
I'll download mixcraft then xD
Hummm..at 0.37?
No, my throat was fine ^^
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~

LOLOL~
don't worry~
it won't take more than 20mt. if Ur laptop is not slow =3<<though mine + my sist's took about 10mt.~ ^u^
but after that,
you'll want to get a codec OwO~
or otherwise, you'll only get the trial ver. *SHOT*
glad to hear that~! and no prob LOL~

waaa why didn't I see this thread? (was curious about your sig xD so I clicked!)

still open for auditions? I love this song~ though it's technically not something I can mix xD

shinouyuki wrote:waaa why didn't I see this thread? (was curious about your sig xD so I clicked!)

still open for auditions? I love this song~ though it's technically not something I can mix xD

O0O~
hmm...
thx for the feedback, me iz goin to make a vid to promote thiz thread after my midterms ^u^

and yez *w*!!
still open ^0^~~!
and no deadline yet =3
so you can TYT ^u ^
and *shook_head*
you won't hve to mix Ur vocal =D!
you can just give me the very RAW one ^u^
and then, me and other judges will judge on which to choose then I'll contact the singer back and ask for another vocal *if the old one was to RAW *

sooo~~
I'll be glad if U can join =D!

my internet is weird this past few weeks, but today, I can't even upload to box.net ;A;

here's my 4shared link anyway: http://www.4shared.com/audio/1C7v9Kyh/dynamite_shinouyuki_trial.html

I mixed it because it will sound horrible without edits xDDDDD or rather, it'll sound awkward xD you use mixcraft too, right? I just put in the thicker acoustica chorus effects :D and some lite reverb for the bridge part

I hate the first line LOL but I'm still practicing it anyway xD I rushed that because my sister unexpectedly came home early O.O I'll re-do it some time next week I think~

shinouyuki wrote:my internet is weird this past few weeks, but today, I can't even upload to box.net ;A;

here's my 4shared link anyway: http://www.4shared.com/audio/1C7v9Kyh/dynamite_shinouyuki_trial.html

I mixed it because it will sound horrible without edits xDDDDD or rather, it'll sound awkward xD you use mixcraft too, right? I just put in the thicker acoustica chorus effects :D and some lite reverb for the bridge part

I hate the first line LOL but I'm still practicing it anyway xD I rushed that because my sister unexpectedly came home early O.O I'll re-do it some time next week I think~

LOLOL mine was like that twice t00 xD!!
Ι̥ guess the net iz overloaded O.O?? XD!!!
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Hoeee...
N0w that makes things even weirder
~~~
Hmm~
Ι̥ heard Urs and found out that....
*critiques = ON*
Ι̥ think U need tọ̥ put MORE power and push the "On and On" 8D!!
And Ur mixing iz good ^.-~
*0FF*
*cough*cough*
I'm not a good commentator so pls forgive me ωhǝη ι̥ went tọ̥ far *SHOT* X_X
And BTW, U won't sounds awkward «««me, d0nt even kn0w what does it mean xD!! *SHOT*, but Ι̥ guess is sth like... OAO?!!? .... Maybe?»»It was good anyway ^u^

And Yez, Ι̥ use mixcraft ^u^ O0O....

~~~
Yọ̥υ rushed O.O..?
Me, didn't realise it OAO...
And IMO Yọ̥υ don't really have t0 re-do it OwO~
Except some parts O3O~~~
But as U like ^u^
And thx for participating >w<!!

Mά̲̣̥y Ι̥ kn0w Ur stagename?