Critique, pleaseeeee? I covered Lynne<3

So, I recently covered a Hachi song, Lynne.

And I have mixed feelings about it.

So I'd like some critique.

The horrible, awful scream and my voice cracking were both intentional.

c: Thank you xDD

Overall, I'd say it's really beautiful. Your vocals are really strong, and I like it. It expresses the song very well. But I think what I'm about to criticize on is mostly the mixing, not your singing. xD

Anyway, sometimes you should get away from the mic a little; because you can get a little too loud. And maybe when you did the scream, it's better to add some EQ effect, making it sound like it's from the telephone/compressed. But I guess that's just me.

OVERALL - PERFECT.

I don't know the song but...

Wow, your voice is beautiful. I'm so jealous. It's like powerful, but like something genuine or at least filled with emotion about it. That's incredibly hard to do, and you got it down.

Mixing wise, I think maybe a tad bit more reverb/stereo expansion to make you blend a little more with the instrumental. If you don't have enough sometiems it feels like the vocals kind of float on top of the music rather become one with them. Timing was solid though

I heard this from you before,

and no problems with your vocals, your voice is powerful, and as Buggy said, add more reverbs in your vocals to make it sound better. x3

wow,your voice is STRONG....
I don't even know if you need critiques....
the only thing bad about it was the quality,
this is not complimenting,its critiqzizing: ur good
ur already at the level of ppl like usa,dasoku,yamai,nagi/gazelle e.t.c....
btw:i'm new