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when penguins squawk
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when penguins squawk
YOho
Um....this is awkward.. Im pengui. um... i like to sing and draw. I would really like to improve on art and singing since //cough " I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST " I really like songs that are electro/fast-paced/rock but find that i cant sing them with sounding like a dying seal why voice why you have to be so weak //cries i would love it if youll be able to listen to my cover and give me feedback. THANKS
god that was awkard ... someone send help i think i died
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"I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST ... LIKE NOONE EVER WAY DUN DUN DUN"
Um....
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"I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST ... LIKE NOONE EVER WAY DUN DUN DUN"
Last edited by Pengui on Thu Feb 12, 2015 1:27 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: when penguins squawk
Yess, unravel! I like your song choice, piano is awesome.
It was a great cover, I like your harmonies! (although you could have lowered their volume)
You have a great voice; however, you should try taking a bigger breath before letting your notes out. Try speeding up your air flow and you should be able to hit those higher notes you couldn't hit in unravel.
You should let your voice out more. It will sound more full and confident. For pitching, i suggest more air flow and bigger breathes.
If you practice the things I recommended above, I'm sure you'll improve a lot by the next time I hear from you!
Hope to hear more covers from you soon!
It was a great cover, I like your harmonies! (although you could have lowered their volume)
You have a great voice; however, you should try taking a bigger breath before letting your notes out. Try speeding up your air flow and you should be able to hit those higher notes you couldn't hit in unravel.
You should let your voice out more. It will sound more full and confident. For pitching, i suggest more air flow and bigger breathes.
If you practice the things I recommended above, I'm sure you'll improve a lot by the next time I hear from you!
Hope to hear more covers from you soon!
Last edited by Aerlith on Sat Jan 31, 2015 11:37 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : +2 for unrequested intermediate feedback.)
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Re: when penguins squawk
Pengui to be honest I AM SO PROUD OF YOU YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT SINCE YOU FIRST SIGNED UP HERE STALKERMATE LEMME HUG YOU
Informalities aside, I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR ADLIBS IN THE UNRAVELUL THE SHEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOSHEEEEOOOOO AHHHHHHHHHH MAKES YOU VERY PENGUIIIII ADDS A LOT OF SPRUCE UP YO COVER
I like how you also played witht he volumes like "boku no naKA NIIIIII, dareka irU NOOOOOO". Your voice is so cute hnng 14 year olds are such cuties going through puberty ahh
You can also add a little reverb when you pull off the long notes like "NANI MO MIEZU NIII".
It's a little difficult to sing Japanese at first because I can hear the parts where it was a little awkward like "saye" should be 'sae' BUT YOU'LL LEARN EVENTUALLY I TRUST YOU. And Unravel is naturally a very high song, don't be afraid to switch to the falsettos when you can't hit the belting parts. Even the original singer from Ling Tosite Shigure also switched a little to his falsetto around the high parts.
And like zz said, take in more air, if you have to, BREATH WITH YOU MOUTH LIKE HU HA HU HA. <- that's what i do lmao but rest it well afterwards. Also, keep looking up when you need to belt, or just keep your head held high so you can breathe better <- that's what i do too.
Informalities aside, I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR ADLIBS IN THE UNRAVELUL THE SHEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOSHEEEEOOOOO AHHHHHHHHHH MAKES YOU VERY PENGUIIIII ADDS A LOT OF SPRUCE UP YO COVER
I like how you also played witht he volumes like "boku no naKA NIIIIII, dareka irU NOOOOOO". Your voice is so cute hnng 14 year olds are such cuties going through puberty ahh
You can also add a little reverb when you pull off the long notes like "NANI MO MIEZU NIII".
It's a little difficult to sing Japanese at first because I can hear the parts where it was a little awkward like "saye" should be 'sae' BUT YOU'LL LEARN EVENTUALLY I TRUST YOU. And Unravel is naturally a very high song, don't be afraid to switch to the falsettos when you can't hit the belting parts. Even the original singer from Ling Tosite Shigure also switched a little to his falsetto around the high parts.
And like zz said, take in more air, if you have to, BREATH WITH YOU MOUTH LIKE HU HA HU HA. <- that's what i do lmao but rest it well afterwards. Also, keep looking up when you need to belt, or just keep your head held high so you can breathe better <- that's what i do too.
Last edited by Aerlith on Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:05 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : +1 for unrequested basic feedback.)
Re: when penguins squawk
Ice Elf wrote:Pengui to be honest I AM SO PROUD OF YOU YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT SINCE YOU FIRST SIGNED UP HERE STALKERMATE LEMME HUG YOU
Informalities aside, I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR ADLIBS IN THE UNRAVELUL THE SHEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOSHEEEEOOOOO AHHHHHHHHHH MAKES YOU VERY PENGUIIIII ADDS A LOT OF SPRUCE UP YO COVER
I like how you also played witht he volumes like "boku no naKA NIIIIII, dareka irU NOOOOOO". Your voice is so cute hnng 14 year olds are such cuties going through puberty ahh
You can also add a little reverb when you pull off the long notes like "NANI MO MIEZU NIII".
It's a little difficult to sing Japanese at first because I can hear the parts where it was a little awkward like "saye" should be 'sae' BUT YOU'LL LEARN EVENTUALLY I TRUST YOU. And Unravel is naturally a very high song, don't be afraid to switch to the falsettos when you can't hit the belting parts. Even the original singer from Ling Tosite Shigure also switched a little to his falsetto around the high parts.
And like zz said, take in more air, if you have to, BREATH WITH YOU MOUTH LIKE HU HA HU HA. <- that's what i do lmao but rest it well afterwards. Also, keep looking up when you need to belt, or just keep your head held high so you can breathe better <- that's what i do too.
aisuuu this made my day //screams
OKAY//NODS
Re: when penguins squawk
UM..... im just post more trash now
pls give me more criticisms
hahahaha
also more trash
pls accept my trash
(dont be afraid to bash my work djahahdhjasdboad//)
pls give me more criticisms
hahahaha
also more trash
pls accept my trash
(dont be afraid to bash my work djahahdhjasdboad//)
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