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The Tale of 2 lovers

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Post by Onion Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:05 am

Here is the tale of 2 lovers. You are the one to determine the faith of these 2, whether they run off and get married, or get run over by a steam roller.
Story: Is pretty much what a basic love story contains. A boy falls in love with a girl but is too shy to ask her out. Said girl falls in love with said boy, but is too shy to confess. This said love has been going on for about 2 years without either of them confessing or anything. Then comes you, the gods of the love story who are here to determine what will happen.
Characters: Boy: He's your average guy. He has no talents and can stand his own ground when he needs to. Said Boy is shy and doesn't like to stand out of the crowd. He has a normal family, normal working dad, normal housewife mom and a normal dog who sleeps alot. Only guys (and some chosen girls) may control the fate of him.
Girl: Your basic girl. Shorter than all the guys and gets higher than average grades. Has a normal family. Her mom is a business traveler, usually going off on a trip for a long time. Her dad is deceased, who died from heart failure. She usually is left alone in her and her mom's basic apartment. She has many talents from math to running track. She hates heights. She likes to make her own choices but is very quiet, often working by herself than in a group. She doesn't like depending on others because she doesn't like causing trouble. Her hobbies are paper folding (origami) and gardening. Her fate/decisions can only be controlled by girls
History between Boy and Girl: On the opening ceremony of their school, boy helped girl and girl felt like she was indebted to him, over time she fell in love with him. Boy kept thinking about girl and how kind and pretty she was and fell in love with her. Both do not know about said love.
Participants: (will be labelled blue for boy and red for girl)
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Rules: Please read or else
Do not control the girl if you can only control the guy
Do not control the guy if you can only control the girl
The story is told in 1st person, depending on who you control, it will be torld from the point of Boy or Girl
No fluff. No stuff like a 1 in a chance meeting or some crap like that. Keep it realistic and as close to what a love should be. I will allow them to be, at most, in the same class together. Thats as close as a 1 in a chance meeting.
No super powers. Period.
Do not give hints to that boy loves girl or girl loves boy Ex: Some random best freind character goes like "Hey I heard a rumor that Girl likes you." Just no.
Do not have super short posts or whatever.
Keep the pace flowing. Keep it going on into how each will interacted. Don't flow off topic. If the past part about girl says shes at a river, I'm pretty sure she'll still be at a river or walking away from a river and not at a beach somewhere.
If you just say "Wanna go out?" "Yes." and say story over, we will all ignore it and I will remove you from the list of participants.
I don't mind you guys adding your own characters into the fray, that have to be realistic and human. Ya know, with flaws and fears.
Don't break out into a random pokemon battles or yugioh.
Enjoy yourselves. Telling a story about 2 lovers is suppose to be happy. Don't come in here and say "Everyone is dead cuz I killed them!"
No 1337 $p3@(K
Label who your controlling. Like before you post, write Girl above your post

With all that said I'll start.
Boy:
Standing out on a roof, gazing out into the massive crowd of students entering in. Staring, as if looking if looking for someone, I scout the ground below, until I see her. The girl I met about 2 years ago. The girl that had stolen every thought about girls in my mind. I sigh. I continue to look. Staring out into the crowd, I continue to look down at her, until she disappears into the building. I sigh again and head back down the stairs into the school.


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The Tale of 2 lovers Empty Re: The Tale of 2 lovers

Post by Hikki-chan Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:00 pm

G I R L

      "Huff huff huff"
      I was late for the first time in forever. I had never missed the bus. This day didn't seem like it was getting off to a good start. Covering my mouth because I was feeling a bit sick from the claustrophobia, I pushed strongly against the sea of students trying to make my way to the door. I looked up as if trying to get a breath of fresh air and I saw him. Or at least I thought it was him. He was turned away, and I could only recognize him by his back. Was that pathetic? Being able to recognize a person you had a school crush on just by the way his back looked?

      I shook my head quickly. "No! No! No! He doesn't even know I exist." I told myself quickly. It was highschool. I should be focused on my studies! Before I knew it, I found myself facing my locker. All that self-talk must've been longer than I thought.

      [[ooc: I hope this is alright. > x <; ]]
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