[CLOSED] Renai Philosophia

Alrighty~

Thanks for the update !

Oops! I've already did a mixdown 
For now this is how it sounds: https://app.box.com/s/nvmkijclqy5566zuk9a1g3bz2ojwj35t
I accidentally exported with too much volume gain (now there's a few soft glitches during louder parts XP), but it should reflect how it sounds in general=w=
Tell me if there's anything you'd like to change!

Oh I'm so sorry that you have to do extra work! ; ^ ;

As for my constructive critique, I'll edit this when I'm back on the computer so I can give you specific lyrics and times, but since I'm on mobile...here's the generalization:

I really love how the melodies are well balanced and well transitioned between each singer (excluding my own because of the poor quality difference; I apologize for that. It's not as noticeable when I sing with someone else, but more apparent when solo ><;; I will fix that) 

What probably could use work is the balance between Melos and harmos. I thought you did well with DNA at the beginning, but for the rest of the song---I have to listen really hard for Decetan. I understand that harmonies should be in the background, but I don't think it should be a strain to listen to either for the melody's compliment. This is just my opinion, though, so I'm not sure if the others think the same/if you should change it. It's up to you and Decetan. 

Also, would it be too much trouble if you can tell me if I held "on my soul" long enough? I know I was short on the last one (on my role?), but I can't tell if it's me that is too short. The discrepancy in length kind of bugs me (since I notice it). 

Compared to the original mix down, however, I don't even recognize the mic difference I heard between Decetan and (oh shoot I forgot her name--I shall insert it here later). Nicely done! It sounds wonderful ;v; ily Cata-chan~~

AHHH IM CRYING TEARS OF JOY CATALYST YOURE TRULY AMAZING <3 

I listened to your mix about 10 times and didnt pick up anything wrong with it ;;
I think it's just fine 
I don't have a problem with the way the harmonies are?  I think I can hear them just well 

I'll post Mantou's opinion when she replies ^^

Mantou says the harmonies are fine 

Uhh but I'm listening to it more and maybe I'm being a bit too conscious about it but I think its the areas where we all sing that the harmonies should be louder?  maybe?  maybe not;;

My ears aren't the best at picking up these things ^^;;

but I mean I really like the mix overall

Hmm...so harms louder at chorus parts? No prob!
 (Actually if Riyumi's gonna do extra harms, I guess I'll leave Dece's harm at current volume, or maybe pan it a bit more?)

Sounds good (y)

Alrighty! Here they are :>  

The harmonies are in wav format and I also put the retake of the melody in wav.

https://app.box.com/s/3xtsydfbonhnrnra3ir6990mimds466u

Also about the art 
Our artist has been really busy but they should be done by June 3rd, a deadline we both setup. 

Here's a sketch of what she has so far...  It's gorgeous. <3
It's only of me and Mantou right now tho but I'll update again when there's more progress.

Her words:  "Ignore the diff sizes, slight disproportions, yadda yadda. I can fix that when i draw digitally"  -Our artist, Eula

Thank you Riyumi!

OMFG. so gorgeous *^* I can't wait to see the final product <3~ (also, did I ever give a ref? I can't remember)


No problem Catalyst ;D

Yeah I got a ref lol 
In a few pages before ^^

updated with riyumi's new lines and harm:
https://app.box.com/s/nvmkijclqy5566zuk9a1g3bz2ojwj35t

YOURE AMAZING CATALYSTTTT <333

Yes Catalyst is <333

Heyyyy 

Sorry it's been a while since an update

@Catalyst can you make Riyumi a little bit softer?  It's this one part at 0:27 "Chigaku" 
I don't know maybe its just me that thinks it needs to be adjusted? 

Also art is going to take a little while longer so stay tuned;;

No problem!
Here you go:
https://app.box.com/s/nvmkijclqy5566zuk9a1g3bz2ojwj35t

Cool THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

i'll use this as a final then~

Just waiting on art and I can animate (or find someone to animate for us)

thank youu <3

I'm so sorry I've been away for months (not really)

But what happened was the artist backed out once I reminded her after some time
Not blaming her 

SO!
What I'll do is during my upcoming winter break (in about a week and a half) I'll be working on the video
Just the original pv and maybe a few flashing names
Or I might render a few pics or something

But just letting you all known that this is still working out
Im so sorry ;;

Catalyst wrote:No problem!
Here you go:
https://app.box.com/s/nvmkijclqy5566zuk9a1g3bz2ojwj35t

Also, Catalyst I can't seem to download the mp3 track
Could you make it available for download?

//I used to have it but i recently got my laptop wiped clean so;;
Sorry and thank you ^^;;

Yay! Good to know that this is still going! ^ ^
And sorry my old box hit the bandwidth, it's supposed to reset each month but it won't, so none of the old files links work anymore orz
New link: https://app.box.com/s/uwfgcw4uksxac2zmri3kyvl4qd55vf5s

Sounds like a plan <3 Can't wait to see it!!

*pokes this thing alive*
Also....

Daaang! I forgot about this until you mentioned but 464 views?! OAO;; holy mother of pearls that spiked up XD 

On another note, I think Dece is just trying to get it all animated? If anything I can ask again, slap on the original video and figure out how to time something simple like names to light up...or just add a script in the description oAo;; I'm not that tech savvy (yet)

omg yeah sorry cat

still a thing

i keep pushing it bak im so sorry;;

i keep trying to find new artists but they keep dropping out after a while sigh..can't help it though;;

won't promise when this'll get done but i promise it will!

im not that tech savy either BUT I FEELLIKE SUCH A GOOD MIX DESERVES A REALLY GOOD VIDEO 

and idk where to get renders because i don't want to just steal art and its troublesome asking artists for permission (especially if there's a language barrier hhhh)

honestly i keep trying to doodle outfits for the three of us in my spare time but...

YEAH THIS'LL GET DONE (eventually im so sorry)