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KaRei's Covers *OwO*
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KaRei's Covers *OwO*
Hi, everyone, KaRei here :D I'll be posting my future covers in this thread. I sing mainly Japanese covers, but I also sing occasionally in Cantonese, Mandarin and English. I really want to improve, so any feedback or constructive criticism would be most appreciated!
I'll start off with my latest cover :D
Some older covers (in reverse chronological order)~
Koi wa Sensou
Killer Lady
Senbonzakura (Piano ballad)
Magenta
Nisoku Hokou
Hitorinbo Envy
Outer Science
aLIEz (dj-jo remix)
Summertime Record (Acoustic)
Persecution Complex Cellphone Girl (lol)
Spice! (retake)
Glide (Duet with Aerlith)
Rise (100+ Sub)
Koi Wa Sensou (Piano ver)
Magia (Orchestra ver)
Donut Hole (Acoustic Arrange)
Jutenija
Addictive World
Mozaik Role
Sayoko Piano Ver
Jougen no Tsuki
I'll start off with my latest cover :D
Some older covers (in reverse chronological order)~
Koi wa Sensou
Killer Lady
Senbonzakura (Piano ballad)
Magenta
Nisoku Hokou
Hitorinbo Envy
Outer Science
aLIEz (dj-jo remix)
Summertime Record (Acoustic)
Persecution Complex Cellphone Girl (lol)
Spice! (retake)
Glide (Duet with Aerlith)
Rise (100+ Sub)
Koi Wa Sensou (Piano ver)
Magia (Orchestra ver)
Donut Hole (Acoustic Arrange)
Jutenija
Addictive World
Mozaik Role
Sayoko Piano Ver
Jougen no Tsuki
Last edited by KaRei on Sun Aug 27, 2017 9:09 pm; edited 11 times in total
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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*
thank you! <3SAE wrote:Uwahhh~! Cx i love this song a lot. You did amazing on it c:
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First Chinese cover of a song that I've wanted to sing for years. I searched for an off vocal, but just couldn't find one D:
There are multiple versions of this song, but the one I went with is the Cantonese and Mandarin version, so I switch back and forth between the two xD
Song is 講不出的告別 (rough translation: unsaid farewell? >w<)
Original singers are 谭咏麟 (Alan Tam) and 刀郎 (Dao Lang)
https://soundcloud.com/karei-1
There are multiple versions of this song, but the one I went with is the Cantonese and Mandarin version, so I switch back and forth between the two xD
Song is 講不出的告別 (rough translation: unsaid farewell? >w<)
Original singers are 谭咏麟 (Alan Tam) and 刀郎 (Dao Lang)
https://soundcloud.com/karei-1
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That genderbend is amazing! And your higher voice is pretty, too! Great job! ^__^
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Aerlith wrote:That genderbend is amazing! And your higher voice is pretty, too! Great job! ^__^
thank you! 8D
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Very rough acapella. i was bored and couldn't do a proper recording, so this happened instead XD
https://soundcloud.com/karei-1/acapella
https://soundcloud.com/karei-1/acapella
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piano arrange cover of sayoko...such a pretty and sad song QwQ i couldn't resist OTL
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so....as it turns out, i'm a huge sucker for piano arranges. throw jougen no tsuki into the mix and OMG I HAVE TO SING IT 8D i thought i'd do something a little different and make it a "live" cover too OwO
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new cover! also, i think it's time to clean up my first post a bit xD
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one shot! even though it was really quick and spur of the moment, i had a lot of fun with this :D
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new cover! another kuroshitsuji character song, but this time it's lau's "addictive world" :D also, i shall update my first post~
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I love your covers *-* I love the way how low you can sing ;^;
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Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*
SaikoYume wrote:I love your covers *-* I love the way how low you can sing ;^;
oh, thank you so much >/////<
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Hiii~ So I checked out your newest cover, Karakuri Pierrot! Just going to leave you some feedback.
First off, I think you may have used a biiiit too much reverb on your voice. It makes you sound super echo-y, which doesn't fit the piano of the song and also a bit distracting. Something that puts your voice both closer to the sound and warmer would probably work better.
I like the little voice twists (? if that's what you call them)! They were a nice touch. An example of what I'm talking about is at about umm 1:11. There were a few other places, too. They put a nice KaRei flair to them.
I would also soften your attack on certain syllables, like "boku wo noseTE" and "shiraNAI" at the middle of the song. They came across a bit harsh. I think it would put more emotional impact into the song if you were to soften them up a bit. >w<b It'll vary up your voice a bit, too! Right now, it's coming across a bit monotone.
3:35 "kimi no matsu" what you did there = worked really well! :Db
Also, I'm not sure if it's something you can't fix or not, but some of your syllables sound really slurred together? Especially in the last chorus. Are you able to enunciate more? I have that issue sometimes myself, too, where I think I'm doing okay, but then I go back and hear it and it's like, whoawhatwasIsaying @_@.
There were also a few mild pitch issues, too, but it wasn't super noticeable, except in a few parts. If you want me to point them out though, I can edit my post for you. Either way. Pitch. Ew. How to sing on pitch. Someone please teach me.
Anyway. Hoooooooopefully this was of use! Keep it up! :D
First off, I think you may have used a biiiit too much reverb on your voice. It makes you sound super echo-y, which doesn't fit the piano of the song and also a bit distracting. Something that puts your voice both closer to the sound and warmer would probably work better.
I like the little voice twists (? if that's what you call them)! They were a nice touch. An example of what I'm talking about is at about umm 1:11. There were a few other places, too. They put a nice KaRei flair to them.
I would also soften your attack on certain syllables, like "boku wo noseTE" and "shiraNAI" at the middle of the song. They came across a bit harsh. I think it would put more emotional impact into the song if you were to soften them up a bit. >w<b It'll vary up your voice a bit, too! Right now, it's coming across a bit monotone.
3:35 "kimi no matsu" what you did there = worked really well! :Db
Also, I'm not sure if it's something you can't fix or not, but some of your syllables sound really slurred together? Especially in the last chorus. Are you able to enunciate more? I have that issue sometimes myself, too, where I think I'm doing okay, but then I go back and hear it and it's like, whoawhatwasIsaying @_@.
There were also a few mild pitch issues, too, but it wasn't super noticeable, except in a few parts. If you want me to point them out though, I can edit my post for you. Either way. Pitch. Ew. How to sing on pitch. Someone please teach me.
Anyway. Hoooooooopefully this was of use! Keep it up! :D
Last edited by Aerlith on Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:30 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : +3 for an in-depth critique.)
Re: KaRei's Covers *OwO*
Aerlith wrote:Hiii~ So I checked out your newest cover, Karakuri Pierrot! Just going to leave you some feedback.
ahhhhhhh thank you for such detailed feedback <3
First off, I think you may have used a biiiit too much reverb on your voice. It makes you sound super echo-y, which doesn't fit the piano of the song and also a bit distracting. Something that puts your voice both closer to the sound and warmer would probably work better.
i've always thought that something sounded a little off to me (it didn't sound like my voice was blending well with the off vocal, in a way?) with the final mix, but i couldn't put my finger on it? xD and now that you've pointed out, it could've been the reverb xD i have to admit, this was a rather quick cover, so i just slapped on a lot of reverb and some compression and that was that >___< i'll try to keep an eye on that next time though!
I like the little voice twists (? if that's what you call them)! They were a nice touch. An example of what I'm talking about is at about umm 1:11. There were a few other places, too. They put a nice KaRei flair to them.
ahh i don't know what they're (the voice twists) called either XD but thank you!
I would also soften your attack on certain syllables, like "boku wo noseTE" and "shiraNAI" at the middle of the song. They came across a bit harsh. I think it would put more emotional impact into the song if you were to soften them up a bit. >w<b It'll vary up your voice a bit, too! Right now, it's coming across a bit monotone.
i didn't notice that before, but i do now >___< i think it probably ties in a little with my enunciation problem x.x maybe knowing that i have trouble enunciating, i overcompensate on other syllables? D: whatever the reason, now that i know i do that, i'll add that to the list of things i have to work on! *^*9
3:35 "kimi no matsu" what you did there = worked really well! :Db
thank you!
Also, I'm not sure if it's something you can't fix or not, but some of your syllables sound really slurred together? Especially in the last chorus. Are you able to enunciate more? I have that issue sometimes myself, too, where I think I'm doing okay, but then I go back and hear it and it's like, whoawhatwasIsaying @_@.
aaaaaand here is a huge problem i know i have >___< i noticed a long time ago that although i have no problem (that i'm aware of) speaking irl, whenever i speak or sing into a mic, i find that i can't enunciate properly D: when i sing in english, i find it EXTREMELY noticeable. i think it's less obvious when i sing in japanese or chinese, but you can still hear it in places. if you have an idea on how i can improve my enunciation, please do tell QwQ
There were also a few mild pitch issues, too, but it wasn't super noticeable, except in a few parts. If you want me to point them out though, I can edit my post for you. Either way. Pitch. Ew. How to sing on pitch. Someone please teach me.
yes, pitch >__< another enemy of mine xD it feels like i've been trying to improve this for some time now but i never feel like i'm getting anywhere D: i think i really need a vocal coach but i can't afford lessons right now QwQ
Anyway. Hoooooooopefully this was of use! Keep it up! :D
this was very welcome and much needed feedback, thank you again! <3
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