Shadow's Lyrics (Such originality)

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Shadow's Lyrics (Such originality)

Post by xXxLoneShadowxXx on Sun Apr 05, 2015 10:19 am

Hello~ Welcome to "Shadow's Lyrics"
Just so you know, I'm no expert at writing translyrics. But I still write them anyway~ I want to believe I'm decent haha. Anyways! I hope you like 'em cause I really worked hard at them. I haven't sang some of them but hey~


If you wanna use them, go ahead! Just credit me and tell me~ Would love to hear it get sang by other people :D

Hatsune Miku (Hoehoe P) - Depression of a Young Literati ENGLISH:


It needs to be done, for me to go far away
Shall I go alone or shall I just stay?
The school I go to, the friends who are true, the job I'm used to
It's almost like they- not just them, everything I'll condemn

Keio Station, there I am within, with men and their sins
Amidst the train there is a girl crying, unnoticed by her kin
But still the train slides in place and goes forevermore
Filthy humans fill the seats, none of them I adore
And then suddenly everything seems to be a lot better
Around the people that has neither the feeling nor pleasure

Among the ride somebody suddenly calls out my name
But why is it that I am feeling like I am in shame?
I need to fly away from this world just to get away
Need to  live inside my imagination that's not so gray
Before the tears come out today

My favorite author... I can tell that you like his books and look up to
He is no longer here... He went through woe and killed himself long ago

He said, "It just another very shameful useless life"
"Being spent only with a bunch of lies and bunch of strifes"
The filthy humans did nothing but just scoff at his dread
"What a gloomy guy," they said and it wont get out my head

Among the ride, without a warning I hear a sweet voice
And then suddenly the train jolts it's passengers by choice
It went of the track just to get by the dark side of the moon
And then it will rise to heaven where I can see you Soon
But then it brought me back to that day

Oh dear me, we are the same 'cause  Someday some place
You and I will die right? Will we become like the author? Erased?

He said, "It just another very shameful useless life"
"Never once I did told the truth just told a bunch of lies"
But no I will not ever leave you; I'll stay with you dear
Because my love for you is as big as my love for books

Among the ride somebody suddenly calls out my name
But why is it that I am feeling like I am in shame?
I need to fly away from this world just to get away
But please I beg for you to run away from all the dismay
Do not look back just run.... oh.... Just go ohhh

Girls' Generation (Japanese Ver.) Mr Taxi ENGLISH:


Tokyo, Seoul, London, New York
Across the world, we'll go out in a drive tonight
I will show of this very dazzling new style
I'm sure you have not seen this before, I thought with a smile

Hey you, look this way oh and be a bit more cautious
There's so much flying that I fear it's getting noxious

I'm so fast

[Mr taxi taxi taxi
Please go quickly quickly quickly

At the scale of speed I'm in
I doubt you can follow me

Mr taxi taxi taxi
Please go quickly quickly quickly

I'm shining bright like a star
Can't be touched like a racing car

Truly so supersonic and hypertonic
But still I wonder though
Why I hate that you're slow

Mr taxi taxi taxi
Please go quickly quickly quickly

I want you to catch me dear
But it won't be so easy]

The city lights are acting like they're shooting stars
Until we get to destination, they will be nonstop

Engine is buzzing like our war cry
"We'll meet again," We had promised with a short goodbye

Hey you, don't look away. I beg for you to take the risk
Both sides are dangerous so I say that you should become brisk

I'm so sure

[Repeat]

1 2 3 here we go awww

I can go anywhere
I can go everywhere
But I choose to be with you there
And not even elsewhere

But it's just a little wish right?
Why does it feel like it's not alright?
And I don't know why why
And I don't know why why (don't know why)

Will you stay with me? At least try
I don't wanna say good bye, good bye (Don't wanna say good bye)

Mr taxi taxi taxi
I'm going quickly quickly quickly

At the scale of speed I'm in
I doubt you can follow me

Mr taxi taxi taxi
I'm going quickly quickly quickly

I'm shining bright like a star
Can't be touched like a racing car

Truly so supersonic and hypertonic
But still I wonder though
Why now you're not that slow

Mr taxi taxi taxi
going quickly quickly quickly
Hey I'm so sorry
But you just cannot catch me

Your Lie In April (7!!) - Orange English:



We have both walked through the road,
Hand in hand, much like it's sewed
We laughed about the things in which we cannot just cling
As we looked onward toward the same old dream

If I listen carefully,
I'll hear that which sounds perfectly
It is your precious voice, that makes me feel rejoice
It stains orange to the city's gray

When you are not around, I become so bored; I'll not calm down
But still you will only laugh at me when I say I m lonely
Just gonna count the things that feels like it's left with me only
Those things are the ones that will shine brightly and never go

Just like the lovely sky after the rain let's up,
It clears up someones heart, like it says bye
Your smile, it stays stuck up here inside my head
I can not help but smile, our moments I'll compile
Surely, like days before, It won't feel like a chore
Feeling like kids, We wont do the forebids
We will run through out seasons, with a major reason
we want to see our many tomorrows

Whenever I am alone, I feel like Ill just bemoan
On nights I can not sleep, we'll always talk so deep
Now that you're far away, I 'll start to weep

I wonder what you'll go on  seeing from "here" to over there
And Its also same for me. But why? This is just so unfair
I will try to entrust all my tears to this place where I stay
To this city where the setting sun stains orange the gray

Unrequited Love's born among the rays of light; My love for you is in such a smite
If you will one day change, or maybe stay the same. I love you for you so I am not that scared

Someday we'll become mature, meet new people for sure
And at that time, I hope it's not a crime
to bring along our family to meet in reality
We will one day meet here we're we stayed

Just like the lovely sky after the rain let's up,
It clears up someones heart, like it says bye
Your smile, it stays stuck up here inside my head
I can not help but smile, our moments I'll compile
Unrequited Love's born among the rays of light; My love for you's is in such a smite
We will run through out seasons, with a major reason
we want to see our many tomorrows
Choosing from each of our many dreams

Hatsune Miku (Baika P) - I Think Back to Good Bye English:


The regrets that I have always ignored suddenly begins a song
Giving voice to my lingering feelings, echoing once more.
At the very core of my heart which slowly emptied of that attachment
Without a sound, the tiny flames of my love flickers back to existence

If I try to place us back into that nearly forgotten memory
It will trace out all that too cliché moments that we shared

I think back to our goodbyes, even the seasons reverse their flows
I am searching for you was so willing to leave me
Thinking back, It's always like that, spinning my wheels just to reach you
And yet I still keep the heartbreaking thoughts of us

If things go on so unchangingly, if is it even allowed to happen
Then can we find happiness together once again someday?
Right at the center of those memories that I have grown to hate and to despise
The thought of me and you back then are on the verge of disappearing

I think back to our goodbyes, even the seasons reverse their flows
Ill keep on loving you even though you're fine with leaving me
Thinking back, it's always like that, spinning my wheels just to reach you
And yet I still keep the heartbreaking thoughts of us

I think back to our goodbyes....
Wanting to say sorry...
I think back to our goodbyes...

Hatsune Miku (Faye P) - The Love-Struck Kitten Wont Be Discouraged English:


My soft kitty paws slowly patters,
Trying to pursue you in every possible way
Ignore me, catastrophe will happen

I wonder how this can happen
I meowed my kittiest voice, but still
I’m shunned and shunned

Senpai notice me, just forget those stuffs

Maybe I’m just on the wrong tree,
My dream of you and me,
Just refuse to be real

I think it’s not acceptable
My only wish is to get closer to you

Dear God, please hear this poor cat’s plea
I need magic here with me

Suddenly, things changed, too much positively
What a perfect place to be in right now for me
My old form, I forgot, was a cat, wasn’t it?

Who needs some pointy ears and tail anyway?

Onwards! Move Forward! No longer an alley cat!
Just run fast! Go sprint fast! To the place where you are now~
Stepping closer! No more whiskers on that one edge!

I’ve gotta say things can change when you fall in love
I’ll meet you, and will say hello with smile! It’s just for you!

My soft kitty paws, and your smooth hand
I compare them and they look so much identical
My heart is just so overwhelmed with such joy

I whisker all those important stuff away from here to there
Now they have gone  somewhere
I guess acting spoiled is a little bit well

Just one touch, and this will be history
My dream of you and me
Still refuse to be real

But it’s all fine, after all, I just wanted to be near you eternally
Oh, please almighty God, I beg you to pause this happy scene

Oh please, just a bit more!

And then it just happened so much suddenly for me
You were at the mid-road, in danger of a roadkill!
Have to save you right now! Extra lives are at hand!
That’s right, I am a cat, this is done smoothly!

I have really tipped the litter box, haven’t I?
I just can’t purr my way out of this pickle we made
I have to be a fool to think this will go on
Those unwanted catness of mine are going back

You noticed, and now I am afraid, so I just scampered away…

Ah the magic slowly fades away
And I still have not told you of all the happy and sad feelings
Oh! It’s so nice to feel sweet sorrows I have because of him

A flashback of the special day you have saved me
It will never disappear from my precious memory
I will now meowst these feelings that I’ve been holding for so long

Suddenly, things changed, too much positively
What a perfect place to be in right now for me
So now this is the chance!
For me to do a pounce!
This is how a love struck kitty chooses to live!

“I love you very much, seriously, I really do!”
That very day we have shared was very special, I know
Even if it’s all gone, from your mind, It’s all fine
This little stray was still glad to be found just by you

Those words was a littlebit of a lie from me, but
Sometimes God just does not make all the dreams to be real
This love kitten would always be near you, my dear
So there is no need to look everywhere for me
Because I will be always napping in the warm glow of your heart

I’ll meet you and say “Hello, again!” with a smile! It’s just for you!

Naruto (Ikimono Gakari) - Sakura English (not really sure how I feel about this one):


My Cherry Blossom is slowly falling down while fluttering
Just like the fluttering love that is well hidden in my chest
Even after all this time, I still dream and pray for you, dear
Cherry blossoms will never scatter,
Same as my feelings for you

From afar I have been watching you
I could see traces of our past
The road which that you always take, I cross it to pursue
Graduation, it came too fast
Finally you're going to leave
But still on the colorful river bank, I'll still see you, I believe x

Ever since that day, we took separate roads
then suddenly it seems like spring is no more
My future which was in full bloom now looks like it has no life ahead
This year once again, I see the sakuras, in full bloom like they were once back then
And in my heart I feel, like you are just there... I can hear your voice clearly

My Cherry Blossom is slowly falling down while fluttering
Just like the fluttering love that is well hidden in my chest
Even after all this time, I still dream and pray for you, dear
Cherry blossoms will never scatter,
Same as my feelings for you

A letter was a thing that I did for you
"I'm okay," is what the start says
I wonder if you can see through that lie... x
You probably didn't, right?

Even the town, is affected by  time x
The spring is now what it's taking
The flowers which I adored before
Is budding now once again

I know that I'll get through these days without you
And like you, I also will become mature
Will I be able to forgot memories of you, I wonder?
"My love for you is true and undying"
I touch the sakura's as I held my hands out x
Into the pinkish sky, now love and spring merged... They are once again combined

My Cherry Blossom is slowly falling down while fluttering
I embraced every bit of the love hidden deep in my chest
Until now, the words that you gave, they may be strong or they're weak...
In my heart, they still abide there... Cherry Blossoms dance around

My Cherry Blossom is slowly falling down while fluttering
I embraced every bit of the love hidden deep in my chest
And those fantasies that I had on a far distant spring day
Disappears into the light blue sky

The cherry blossoms is slowly falling down while fluttering
As I once again walked back into the season of the spring
I hang on onto the fantasy on which you have promised me
that the cherry blossoms will scatter.
Same as my feelings for you

Aldnoah.Zero - aLIEz English ( I basically butchered this haha ):


Even if I take the stand
And make noise that was so planned
My Cheap Pride
looks like it's tied with conceited vanity

Within the sad mirror
is a bitter thing that is deeply hidden inside my wardrobe

Displayed are the scars that I got conveniently from war
Displayed is the me that won in battles done long before
No matter how much I train myself, it just wears me down.
My thoughts so unsteady, I almost drowned

Love is Crier
Save the liar
Holy Rising Hell
My beloved game is world shame
Dont say war
Men in war
eyes see war
A-Z Looser Disease Wat is dat

yeah

Even if I do look down
Upon the shield of the clown
I've been given
I am looking at the ground, now I am bound

But that time I failed to note of the misquote
Inside of the mirror lost to the past breaking

 How long do I have to scream just to convey position
My breath gives out before I can even finish mission

Left left to fight reflexive against the warlock
A lot of the sins, a brazen horde

Love is Crier
Save the liar
Holy Rising Hell
I never reset the negative life
Dont say war
Men in war
eyes see war
A-Z Imagination see you dat?

Hatsune Miku (scop) - Crier Tagalog ( I tried ):


Kapag ako'y hindi okay
ang aking luha ay nagtutuluan
at pagtapos na 'yon
matulog na ako sa pagkapagod

ito'y totoo

ang gabing ganiya'y ulitin
di napuputol
pero hindi complete
pagkagising,
ako ay hindi parin nakakahinga

Ang pag-aala at dilim hinding nagwawakas
At ang selos ko sa tao na perpekto
ang pagseloso ko ang aking pagkasira

at muling nahulog, mga luha

iyak muli, iyak muli
Nandito ako di kaya magiba ng bagay
Pagkalungkot, ang luob ko
hindi kayang maging malakas

Wala'y meron, wala'y meron
Sana na meron taong naintindian ako
Aking mata, aking puso
Kunin mo na, lahat sakin

kaagad

Maraming tao, nagsinungaling para sa gusto
Pero 'di ko makita kung ginagamit lang ako
Kaya nandito lang ko, kasama ang iyong salita

naniniwala

Kaya ang lahat ng salita o mga sinungaling mo
Sobrang lalim
Sobrang lalim ako'y sinaktan

Hindi ko na kaya, tignan mo!

Ito ang sugat, at lagi ito namamaga
Dinagdagan mo pa, 'di ko kaya

Ulit muli, ulit muli
Narinig ko muli ang mga sakim na salita

Saktan muli, pero sure na
Ako rin ay sakim pala

"Wala'y meron, huminto (ka) na" x
Gusto magkungwari, na di ko naririnig yan

higit alam ko, higit rin nila
Ako ay nagaala lang
Sobrang tanga

Alam mo'y "easy" lang kung bigla ka lang huminto
Pero alam ko na hindi mo ito'y gagawin
Kasi naging tanga ako sa iyong salita
Tinulak niyo ako, at ako'y nahuhulog

Talaga na wala, wala kong pakialam
At habang akoy malungkot, iisipin ko lang yan
Sa tinging mo ba na maslalakas ka kung saktan mo ako?
Kailang ba hihinto ang aking mga luha?

iyak muli, iyak muli
Nandito ako di kaya magiba ng bagay
Pagkalungkot, ang luob ko
di kayang maging malakas

Wala'y meron, wala'y meron
Binabad na ng luha ang sirang puso ko
Sobrang labo, at sobrang sakit
'Di ko kayang tigilin

Iyak muli, iyak muli
naghahanap lang ng dahilan para 'ko'y mabuhay
Di ako "sure" kung anong cure
Bakit niya ba 'koy umiiyak

wala'y meron, wala'y meron
Araw-araw naman ako ay nag-iiyak

"Sobrang saya, ako dito"
yung lang ang masasabi ko

Magdadasal na lang ako

Liezel Garcia - Gisingin ang Puso English :


I still can feel the kiss
the kiss that I can't seem delete no matter what
in mind and in spirit
it's still possible that you're here

can you hear the tears
the rain of tears that keeps on pouring
are you gonna move on from the love I gave you long ago

in every single day in every beat of my heart
youre the one that's in my mind

my memories of you
are the one that troubling me
why can't I just quench the pain of my heart? Why's it hard to do so?
I will force myself to forget our love from the past
If this is just a dream and I'm sleeping, I'll just have to wake up my heart

hmm

I am now longing for you (longing for you)
And also for your tenderness and your kindness
Will you even return if our pure love just disappeared
in every single day, in every beat of my heart
youre the one that's in my mind

my memories of you
are the one thats troubling me
why can't I just quench the pain of my heart? Why's it hard to do so?
I will force myself to forget our love from the past
If this is just a dream and I'm sleeping, I'll just have to wake up my heart

You're the one that's in my mind~

my memories of you
are the one thats troubling me
why can't I just quench the pain of my heart? Why's it hard to do so?
I will force myself to forget our love from the past
If this is just a dream and I'm sleeping, I'll just have to wake up my heart (I will force myself to forget our love from the past)
If this is just a dream and I'm sleeping, I'll just have to wake up my heart

Sweet ARMS - Date A Live English:


Through out the streets of a forsaken town (Dead or Alive)
There was a winds that's dry that blows across it and
Look at my eyes the only sees despair (Dead or Alive)
It's only yearning for the light that it seeks

I made a scream that vanished into nothingness
Please hurry up and find me
Make it stop

It's in this broken world where I still don't know how to tell the difference of pure black and clear white
I still don't get why you are treating me with such kindliness
You are the only one who can fill the gap of my heart with your pure love that is as soft as a flower

Choose me as your date a live

Date A Live (Sweet ARMS) - Trust in You English:


Fate, are things really made destined?
Like what has brought us side by side in our meeting (in our meeting)
really entwines our stories?

Hey? If I am never to understand, the pounding feeling in my chest (Up to you)
I'll just have to fall as I am

Today, I'll make you choose
Come and get ready...
Let's Start this thrilling date!

Whenever we talk
Whenever we touch
Whenever we laugh
I am always reminded that these feeling have awakened
and will not give up

Because for the first time,
I'm telling the truth
I still love you
And I'm willing to always stay by your side

Oh, I am not lying!

I want to believe, date a live

Hatsune Miku (Koyori P) - Lap Tap Love English (By me and Zoe Li~ ):


Get you Lovely Rap Tap Tap drawing the melody of love
waving to the coward and "Bye Bye," I loudly say
Want You Lovely Rap Tap Tap, You and I dances without care
setting out to fall in sweet and pure gold love

dubious "I love you"
somehow it still can't convey my feels
perfectly posing
however i don't believe in me

because of your smiling face Warming
the magic is quietly appeared
important distance
it's so difficult to understand

Get you Lovely Rap Tap Tap the love is knocking at the door
i have fell in love with you without realizing it
Want You Lovely Rap Tap Tap hope you can clearly hear my voice
i must take courage for just a happy day

my phone goes ring ring
does it come from you? well this girl can dream
attractive Lip Tip
so am i just acting to be strong?

Get you Lovely Rap Tap Tap it is a puzzle made of love
it's all right to be afraid or even wanting to cry
Want you Lovely Rap Tap Tap we will face each other one day
doki doki I go forward step by step

i can not stop thinking of you everyday before sleeping
oh my god what should i do
even fail to fall asleep
If i'll be late, I'll be mostly blaming you for it

Much more Lovely Rap Tap Tap the love is knocking at the door
i have fell in love with you without realizing it
Want You Lovely Rap Tap Tap hope you can cearly hear my voice
Let me make all these dreams come true please

Get you Lovely Rap Tap Tap the love is knocking at the door
i have falled in love with you without realizing it
Want You Lovely Rap Tap Tap hope you can clearly hear my voice
i must take courage and let you understand all that i am thinking now
Hope everything can go smoothly "I love you"

Flowr (Honeyworks) - Inokori Sensei English (By me and Ginger~):


Hey class, do you like your teacher or not?
[Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah]
Those of you who disagree or said ‘I don’t’
I’ll see you when class is done
 
Did you think I’d care, what are you? Stupid?
Just keep on glaring as if I’m a kid, Hmph!
Keep on protesting but you know you’ll lose
Because I’m a grown up man, so I think
 
Do not split hairs with me! It’s really annoying
I ain’t a kid so
Stop looking down! I’m not a baby!
‘He will never do it’. Isn’t that what you thought?
But are you sure? Cause’ I’m done! (See!]
 
Hey class, do you like your teacher or not?
[Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah]
Those of you who disagree or said ‘I don’t’
I’ll see you when class is done
Teacher! I’m hating your guts!
This isn’t what friendship is all about, you know.
Alright. Majority rules. So stop whining and take a win
Hey, do you think this is right?
All of this homework that is yet to be done
Can I not have you to help again?
Just like we used to way back then
 
Try to call me a kid but did ya know
There are just some things similar between us
I know what it is like to fall in love
Cause’ I’m a grown up, at least… I think so
 
Stop with the tough guy act
You know you aren’t like that
I see right through all your fronts you put up
But now I’m all grown up
So let’s keep our distance
Don’t you get it, you brat? [Huh?]
 
Hey class, do you like your teacher or not?
[Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah]
I can never raise my hand or say ‘I do’
If all this is really an act
Teacher! I’m hating your guts!
This isn’t what friendship is all about, you know.
Alright. Majority rules. So stop whining and take a win
Hey, do you think this is right?
All of this homework that is yet to be done
Can I not have you to help again?
Just like we used to way back then
 
 
 
Other people surrounding me all of the time
Making other people laugh all of the time
Just realized that I kept looking back to the past, i’m yearning still
Other people surrounding me all of the time
My list of all important things increases its height
Only by the time you lose something that is prized
Is the time that you will feel despair
 
Hey class, do you like your teacher or not?
[Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah]
Put your full stop before the quotation mark
[Put your full stop before the quotation mark]
Do you like your classic literature class?
[Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah]
The only one who didn’t agree or nod
Is just me, now isn’t that right?
Years passed by and there’s still no change
Just endless cycle of hello’s and goodbye’s
Might as well, just get in the line
I will wait for our tur-tur-tur-tur-turn
Teacher! Do you dislike me?
Stop pretending that our relationship is fake
It’s agreed. What really matters, is just my vote, now you can’t win
Teacher! Remember again!
The evil thing in your heart that still isn’t dealt with?
Do you want me to solve it with you?
I’m welcoming you home
We both can laugh and smile
Just like the precious good old times

Hatsune Miku (40mp) - Renai Saiban English:


Oh! NO! NO! NO!
I still don’t know what came to me
I think that you clearly know you’re my everything
Before you bring the hammer down please consider
That I can’t bear the thought of living without you

Oh! Jesus!
Please don’t look at me like that
Never again, I can change.
I’ll Keep this promise!
Give me some pity and stay my penalty
I beg of you to overlook my sin

Having planned the perfect crime
Equipped with a watertype alibi as well
I just can’t pull the wool over your eyes
Looks like this isn’t gonna work
NO! NO! NO!

Appearing at my Love Trial,
I wonder of how long the list of charges are gonna be
Delivering that verdict after my closing note
By the power invested in you, you say I’m guilty

Oh! No! No! No!
This is the worst thing that could happen
So, are you just gonna get rid of me just like this
If yes so then please let me be punished into
That Like-a-void pit by the likes of you

Oh! Jesus!
The proof is definite indeed!
I can no longer talk my way out of this one
Well, at least being in that prison of yours
Isn’t the worst thing that could happen

I know that you will never come back
It’s thank to this inherent character flaws
I am guessing that I wont be allowed
To beg and plead my way out of this
Pickle that you own

How can I even call this a perfect crime
And, as for the two of us, here’s what I will say
The one who loved and the one who was loved, are sad
They were fated to mutually pass judgment on this bond of ours

Delivering that guilty verdict,
It makes me think of what crime you’ll accuse me of next
I am willing to devote my whole life to you
In recompense I’ll be by your side until death
There is one truth that you have taught me at the love trial that you held for me
After crying those fake tears in front of me
You secretly give me that small smile,
Add impish to that
"Hey you’re guilty too"

Vocaloid ALLSTARS (Oster Project) - Alice In Musicland ENGLISH:


There is a story I must tell
It is from an old fairy tale
It is a great, fantastic, tremendous, type of fairy tale
And then, I opened up my eyes
And a small white hare came to sight
running here and there, and everywhere!
So then it, I shall chase.
 
Tick-tock-tick-tock, gotta make a haste, or I'm gonna be late
Ah~ Tick-tock-tick-tock, I've had enough! SO please stop cutting in!
come on~ Tick-tock-tick-tock, Why can't just time stop for  least an hour?
I the white rabbit has no time to share or give to thou
 
Hey~ Can you Please just tell me why you're in such a tick-tock hurry?
Do you have something important to do? with a  place, time, somebody?
 
Yes! And when it comes to tick-tock time, she can be quite severe!
 
Really? Really!
 
After all she is the almighty queen!
 
Dilly dally, stuffs and stuffs, ugh there is no more time. I think I should be running now, so I then guess this goodbye
Oh, but please just tell me
Why at a time like this
You're still singing a cheerful tune?
How come you're singing a very happy song?
 
Why, this is Musicland!
Musicland?
Yes, this is musicland!
Wonderland!
Musicland's all about songs, that's why I sing
 
Oh no, I'm very late! This is really Bye-bye! Farewell! Au revoir! Tah tah~
Please Waiiiit~
 
Ah, this world I am in right now, must be so large and wondrous
I wonder what could be ahead, the road which I am to take
 
Young Lady
huh?
Young lady
Is that me?
Yup! Young lady?
Yes, sir?
Who are you, my dear?
I strongly believe my name is
Oh, so you are just your name?
Oh,well! Then explain to me who you are!
Who am I? I should finally try asking...
Why's that?
Who am I? Why, I actually don't know!
Who are you? Come on, you should just tell me
Who am I? Well, I really can’t tell
There is one thing I'm sure of, and it is when I am singing. I feel that I'm the happiest in the whole  world.
You love music, which explains why when you sing…
Slowly but surely, I'm starting to see!
I find that when I sing, I surely now have a reason to live!
So, I guess that now, I am the
Yes! And I think I am also the
Greatest singer in this whole wonderland!
 
I wonder where this rhythm have originated, I'm so curious. It's really fast and uncommon.very great!
Oh, hello there! It is I! Oh just wait, is it really i?
Now, just sit down so that I can begin the tea!
How would you like some tea?
How would you like some tea?
Shove it down your throat, and this world will dance with you!
How would you like some tea? Hey! Here you could get your tea!
AHH! This flavor is strange, isn't it?
 
I'm sure youre all "too-used" to all the normal food you taste
And then it gets till you don't want to eat any of them anymore
Yes! I agree that it is boring to be natural.
And to those who says that, becomes mad and will do many crazy stuffs! OH MY!
How would you like some tea?
COME ON! How would you like some tea?
You must be curious, right now, so just become mad... LIKE ME!
How would you like some tea?
COME! How would you like some tea? Ahhh
This such a wonderful mad teatime, indeed!
 
As I get lost deeper in this dark forest
, a voice suddenly shows and it beckons me
It echoes, it echoes, in the so dense fog.
Oh, wait, which was the path I wanted to take?
 
Is it there, or right there or maybe it's this one
My! Who knew a lady like you can be so doubtful?
But do not worry, for I, myself is just the same!
"Wonder here, wonder there" is the road I take!
Ah! All of the joy and love that gets lost deeper into despair
When you think of it, maybe the thing you wish is to sing with passion and all your heart
Eventually, you will be unsure of the things you said you wanted from the start of your life
 But I'm sure in the end, I will definitely find
That which the invisible one cannot find for herself
Music's debris
 The one that lost it's spirit
Can you really truly call that melody an art?
I can not say, I 'm sure no one can
Even if my head is really chaotic, I must say that being invisible isn't bad
But now I have made a descision, and this is the road that I had chosen
 
If it's fortune and sorrow, it all depends on her own whim
The path to the queen's what she chose... Such a winding path
 
Bow down, to her Majesty the Queen!
I am the queen of all as you can see
I think  that you have no problem at all...
When I sing everyone should just stop and listen to moi
My intense aura of royalty makes all things obey!
"So you are the queen, I have heard about"
"yeah, yeah, you better dont forget!"
"What a beautfiul voice that you have there?"
"Why, isn't that obviousness?"
So, now I will force the orchestra to begi~n
COME ON PLAY MY MUSIC
Piano
Woodb~A@#
Drum~s
B~rass section
Everyone listens to only me
Everyone only should play for only me
EVERYTHING IN THIS WORLD IS ONLY MINE!
BECAUSE AFTERALL I AM THE ALMIGHTY QUEEEEEN
 
Waaait just one sec
The music is not yours! It is for every one to play
Even though you are wierd
Or just a little bit out of sorts
Or maybe if you are in such a rush
It really can bring such bliss and joy
Everybody in the world has their ways!
But together they form a harmony!
And the reason is simply....
BECAUSE WE LOVE MUSIC~
 
There is a story we must tell
It is from an old fairy tale
It is a great, fantastic, tremendous, type of fairy tale
It is to be found everywhere
A magical philosophy!
It will be hidden deeply in the hearts of Alll!
Our Musicland
 
Alice in Musicland
How do you get to Musicland?
Over the hill or underland?
Or just behind the tree?
 
When clouds go rolling by
They roll away and leave the sky
Where is the land beyond the eye
that people cannot see?
 
Where do stars go?
Where is the silver crescent moon?
 
They must be somewhere
in the sunny afternoon
 
 
Alice in Musicland
Where is the path to Musicland?
Over the hill or here or there?
I really wonder where
 
 
Now we know the answer
When we're enjoying music
Always we're in Musicland!


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Post by sonic-nancy-fan on Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:52 pm

Sadly, I hardly know any of the songs that you have written lyrics for so I had to look at the two I do know, Mr. Taxi and aLIEz. I will not be too critical of aLIEz since you yourself say you ‘basically butchered’ them.
 
The first thing I would like to comment on is how you post is organized….it is not really organized.XD
For someone like me who does not know the songs you have done, I have no idea what they are from or who sings them.  I would recommend putting the name of the singer or maybe the anime/game the song is from in the title of your spoiler.
For Mr. Taxi, there is a Japanese and a Korean version, so maybe you could put JAPANESE VERSION in the title of the spoiler so people can easily know which one your lyrics are for.
 
Another thing is your introduction paragraph. It has a lot of abbreviations in it which may be a ‘red flag’ to readers. Having a lot of abbreviations and slang in the opening may make readers think that your lyrics are full of slang as well. You do not have to change it; I just thought you should know.
 
As for the lyrics, I’ll start with Mr. Taxi
 
The first thing that stands out is the grammar. I noticed that you are in the Philippines so English might not be your first language. Either way, there are some lines that do not make sense.
 
” Across the world, we'll go out in a drive tonight
I will show of this very dazzling new style”
-People do not ‘go out in a drive’. They can ‘go out for a drive’ though.
-‘of’ should be ‘off’. That could easily just be a typo.
 
“There's so much flying that I fear it's getting noxious”
-That line confuses me. Do you mean ‘The car is flying (driving) so fast that the air is becoming noxious’? I think that saying something that means ‘The car is flying so fast that I think I’m getting nauseous’ makes more sense.
 
“Can't be touched like a racing car”
-Why? Why can you not tough a racing car, because it is moving fast? The line before says that you are ‘shining bright like a star’ which has nothing to do with speed. It is not wrong, it just sounds awkward to me.
 
Several lines have syllables that are not right.
“Across the world, we'll go out in a drive tonight”
Kima     ma ni        se   ka  i   wo   drive tonight
-The ‘a’ is left out
 
Not everyone cares about the syllables. You do not have to keep them the same.
 
As for the lyrics themselves, I looked over several translations as your lyrics seem to be a little off in some parts. Trans-lyrics are people’s interpretations so I cannot say that they are wrong. I just suggest trying to stay true to the original wording a little bit more.
Now for aLIEz~
 
I am just going to focus on the words themselves and give some suggestions. The lyrics do stay pretty true to the original meaning, bi there are some problems.
 
Here is a segment from your lyrics that I will comment on:
“Even if I take the stand
And make noise that was so planned
My Cheap Pride
looks like it's tied with conceited vanity

Within the sad mirror
is a bitter thing that is deeply hidden inside my wardrobe”
 
1.       You do not ‘take the stand’, you ‘take a stand’
2.       ‘And make noise that was so planned’. It sounds like you were so focused on rhyming that the sentence just sounds awkward. Nobody says ‘so planned’. Perhaps change it to something like, ‘And cry out like we all planned’, or something like that.
3.       The ‘looks like it's tied with conceited vanity’ line has the wrong syllables.
4.       ‘Within the sad mirror’. This implies that there is only one sad mirror. However, this can easily be confused with sounding like there is only one mirror in existence. Maybe you could change ‘the’ to ‘this’
5.       The last line works, but it just sounds awkward to me. I do not really have a reason why though.
 
Overall, I think that your lyrics are pretty good. There are some grammatical errors here and there, but that will be fixed with practice. Your lyrics remind me of the lyrics I wrote when I first started, although almost opposite. I did not rhyme at first and my sentences stayed so close to the original meaning that they sounded terrible. Your lyrics always rhyme and they tend t0 stray away from the meaning.XD
I am not sure how long you have been writing lyrics. I know for me, it took me a couple of years to develop a style of writing. Eventually, everything will just pop into your head one day and you will immediately know how to things you never thought you could. I see the spark; you just need to keep practicing, as you seem to be. I look forward to seeing more work from you.


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Re: Shadow's Lyrics (Such originality)

Post by xXxLoneShadowxXx on Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:05 am

Hi sonic-nancy~ I was smiling as I read your thoughtful feedback :D

First lemme just thank you. Because I never thought somebody would even give me feedback~

Second, I wasn't really serious in the aLIEz thing haha
I was just bored so I was like, "screw everything. I'm gonna write the most random thing in the world" Mind you, that was made in like 15 minutes xD I was fooling around laughing at myself. Memories of writing that was good Smile

For Mr. Taxi
Yes, English isn't my first language. My English isn't that nice because my old school doesn't really value speaking English, but I recently transferred to an English Speaking School so I believe my grammar would improve v^_^v

at the "Can't be touched like a racing car" part, I was thinking that she was describing how high and mighty she is. That she can't be touched. Since the star is so far high and a racing car is so fast. But the mistakes on me :D I don't know where the bright thing came from haha~

I don't always write translyrics. Sometimes, when I'm bored, yeah haha
My most recent one is Depression of the young literati which was made like a week ago and the lyrics before that was made many months ago. So I don't really think I get that much practice. Just writing when I feel like it. I'll definitely practice more. I appreciate it :D

For now, I'll just organize this lol. I'm not the most organized person.
I'm equally as messy in real life xD

Thanks again for your thoughtful feedback! I really really appreciate it ^^
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