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when penguins squawk

Post by Pengui on Thu Dec 11, 2014 8:29 pm

YOho

Um.... this is awkward..  Im pengui. um... i like to sing and draw. I would really like to improve on art and singing since //cough " I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST " I really like songs that are electro/fast-paced/rock but find that i cant sing them with sounding like a dying seal why voice why you have to be so weak //cries i would love it if youll be able to listen to my cover and give me feedback. THANKS

god that was awkard ... someone send help i think i died 


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Re: when penguins squawk

Post by zz on Mon Dec 15, 2014 9:18 pm

Yess, unravel! I like your song choice, piano is awesome. 
It was a great cover, I like your harmonies! (although you could have lowered their volume)
You have a great voice; however, you should try taking a bigger breath before letting your notes out. Try speeding up your air flow and you should be able to hit those higher notes you couldn't hit in unravel. 
You should let your voice out more. It will sound more full and confident. For pitching, i suggest more air flow and bigger breathes. 
If you practice the things I recommended above, I'm sure you'll improve a lot by the next time I hear from you!
Hope to hear more covers from you soon!


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Re: when penguins squawk

Post by Pengui on Wed Dec 17, 2014 12:41 pm

omg thanks sooo much... I will try that next time im singing THANKS

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Re: when penguins squawk

Post by Aisuu aka RiEDe on Sun Jan 04, 2015 4:16 am

Pengui to be honest I AM SO PROUD OF YOU YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT SINCE YOU FIRST SIGNED UP HERE STALKERMATE LEMME HUG YOU

Informalities aside, I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR ADLIBS  IN THE UNRAVELUL THE SHEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOSHEEEEOOOOO AHHHHHHHHHH MAKES YOU VERY PENGUIIIII ADDS A LOT OF SPRUCE UP YO COVER

I like how you also played witht he volumes like "boku no naKA NIIIIII, dareka irU NOOOOOO". Your voice is so cute hnng 14 year olds are such cuties going through puberty ahh

You can also add a little reverb when you pull off the long notes like "NANI MO MIEZU NIII". 

It's a little difficult to sing Japanese at first because I can hear the parts where it was a little awkward like "saye" should be 'sae' BUT YOU'LL LEARN EVENTUALLY I TRUST YOU. And Unravel is naturally a very high song, don't be afraid to switch to the falsettos when you can't hit the belting parts. Even the original singer from Ling Tosite Shigure also switched a little to his falsetto around the high parts. 

And like zz said, take in more air, if you have to, BREATH WITH YOU MOUTH LIKE HU HA HU HA. <- that's what i do lmao but rest it well afterwards. Also, keep looking up when you need to belt, or just keep your head held high so you can breathe better <- that's what i do too.


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Re: when penguins squawk

Post by Pengui on Sun Mar 15, 2015 3:47 pm

Ice Elf wrote:Pengui to be honest I AM SO PROUD OF YOU YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT SINCE YOU FIRST SIGNED UP HERE STALKERMATE LEMME HUG YOU

Informalities aside, I FRIGGIN LOVE YOUR ADLIBS  IN THE UNRAVELUL THE SHEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOSHEEEEOOOOO AHHHHHHHHHH MAKES YOU VERY PENGUIIIII ADDS A LOT OF SPRUCE UP YO COVER

I like how you also played witht he volumes like "boku no naKA NIIIIII, dareka irU NOOOOOO". Your voice is so cute hnng 14 year olds are such cuties going through puberty ahh

You can also add a little reverb when you pull off the long notes like "NANI MO MIEZU NIII". 

It's a little difficult to sing Japanese at first because I can hear the parts where it was a little awkward like "saye" should be 'sae' BUT YOU'LL LEARN EVENTUALLY I TRUST YOU. And Unravel is naturally a very high song, don't be afraid to switch to the falsettos when you can't hit the belting parts. Even the original singer from Ling Tosite Shigure also switched a little to his falsetto around the high parts. 

And like zz said, take in more air, if you have to, BREATH WITH YOU MOUTH LIKE HU HA HU HA. <- that's what i do lmao but rest it well afterwards. Also, keep looking up when you need to belt, or just keep your head held high so you can breathe better <- that's what i do too.


aisuuu this made my day //screams 

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Re: when penguins squawk

Post by Pengui on Sun Mar 15, 2015 3:50 pm

UM..... im just post more trash now


pls give me more criticisms
 
hahahaha

also more trash



pls accept my trash 

(dont be afraid to bash my work djahahdhjasdboad//)

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