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Lewd and Inscrutable Translyrics

Post by Lucari on Sun Nov 16, 2014 12:29 pm

No one can say I didn't warn you.

If there's a * next to a song that means it's a Reol/Giga-P song (...I mean, it contains something sexual...oh well, same difference) and/or it has explicit language.

Gigantic O.T.N*:
Contrary to popular belief
This is all a show, a fallacy
Of sweat and X&T&C
And lonely love emergencies!

Emotions and attachment don’t get sucked into those
Because my appeal comes from my sucking right?
Just kidding, kidding, kidding, kidding!

All human beings seem to like things just like this:
A self-satisfied orgasmic nation
Overflowing over and over!
Respect the flimsy terms of service
The currency, faked “I love you”s
On hard level I’ll let you choose
My 8-point love Valigarmanda!

It’s swelling up it’s starting to get dangerous
Take me to the peak come on and hurry up
I’ll please you and tease you with sweet lies like “I love you”
And get right inside your identi-ti-ti-ty!

Don’t come to hate this dreamy boy just because
I’ve gotten good at giving people what they want
I will delude you and indulge in your frustration
I’m going berserk, with my gigantic, ah—
But don’t you look away from it okay? Hey?

With an un deux trois in your boudoir
We wake and say “Vous…avec moi?!”
We’ll keep this as our secret, this one little lie is still innocent!
But this don’t change a thing for me:
The ruler of a monarchy
The absolute with girth and might
And hey, that’s why you like me, right?

I’ll welcome you to paradise, my own domain and private world
With all the breathing throbbing and—
Be gentle with it, you dumb girl!
A sweet whisper of “I want you”
Will bring it out of its shell for sure
We’ve been playing in easy mode
It’s time to drive in danger mode—

Like touching a switch every rich dirty B@!$ is bewitched by my “magic” sighing, “I need you”
Crap! I underestimated just what I was packing
Don’t say that it’s lacking
Let’s get back to our scheduled love game and cut the yapping!

It’s getting faster, a dangerous situation
I’ll show you who’s the best one in the nation!
With tactics and skillfulness this king will coolly rule
And shoot out a dose of plus-minus-plus stuff!
There’s no turning back, now we’ve both got a secret
But that’s okay, ‘cuz love is best with no regrets
Now do you understand? The strength of this love potion
It’s so gigantic, growing with your swift motions
Don’t get distracted here let’s focus back on me!

My ochin really is gigantic, I call it OTN for short
Although of course, it’s far from short~
It’s quite useful when it comes to @#$% and girls and guys love it equally
You can buy a portable version nowadays, all kinds have come into circulation
So the possibilities for fun are truly endless!
Keep it in your bedroom, though, that’s only polite isn’t it?
Oh, and you may be thinking I’m talking about some real dirty stuff
But don’t take this out of context!
Really, everything I’ve said is all-ages appropriate ♂

It’s swelling up it’s starting to get dangerous
Take me to the peak come on and hurry up
I’ll please you and tease you with sweet lies like “I love you”
And get right inside your identi-ti-ti-ty

Don’t come to hate this dreamy boy just because
I’ve gotten good at giving people what they want
I will delude you and indulge in your frustration
I’m going berserk, with my gigantic, ah—

Let’s pinky swear, I’m not jealous but if you lie to me
I’ll take a .40 caliber and go trigger happy.
drop pop candy:
The rain falls down but I don’t want to open my umbrella
(“It’s very nice to meet you,” purrs the cat)
The water makes my high heels sparkle like Cinderella’s

Yeah, there’s no worries and no hurries if you just look around
You wanna change, embrace the indigo and let yourself drown
My reflection’s in the puddles that have covered the ground
I wanna see what she’s seeing with my own eyes just one time
(Dance with me, girl)
The whole world
(Is swinging)
And spinning!
Can you sense it,
(the feeling) of us going ‘round and ‘round?

I want to break into a run, and leap all the way into a new day
And if he’s not here again to watch the sunrise with me it’s okay
It’s alright, everything is fine!

Forever it continues
Advancing straight and true
More and more I love you
And every new day, too

If you fall countless times
Get back up and you’ll be fine!
If we don’t give up, maybe then
Our feelings can connect again

A droplet falls down her cheek; she quickly wipes it away
(Pretending not to see it, the cat purrs)
Head sunk facing the ground, somehow every day’s become mundane

It was a lie spun from kindness and optimistic youth
But it was colored by the melancholy shade of the truth
Another tear, like a raindrop splashes in the puddle
Tracing the edge with a finger her thoughts once muddled become clearer
(Drawing nearer)
The future
(Is shining)
I’m wishing
That maybe one day it will all come true, I—

just want to start running and leap all the way to into outerspace
Maybe I won’t reach to the stars, or meet the man on the moon face-to-face
But that’s fine, it’ll be alright

Forever it continues
Advancing straight and true
More and more I love you
And every new day, too

Even if you’re bound by fears
And you can’t stop your tears
If you try then maybe today
We might just spin each other’s way!

The light is shining from the blue moon
I’ve already woken up from my dreaming, and soon
We’ll turn to face tomorrow so let’s join our hands!
And raise our speed up—

I want to break into a run, and leap all the way into a new day
And if he’s not here again to watch the sunrise with me it’s okay
It’s alright, everything is fine!

Forever it continues
Advancing straight and true
More and more I love you
And every new day, too

If you fall countless times
Get back up and you’ll be fine!
If you try then maybe today
We might just spin each others' way…

And the feelings that we both treasure…
can go on forever!
Masked Bi--H:

Whoa whoa whoa
Whoa whoa whoa…
I know it’s wrong yet it bothers me so much
This same routine, cannot seem to find a new one
And your expression and your voice your gaze it’s getting
so tiresome, tiresome,
Oh I hate it a-a-all
A fated miracle? No, no that can’t be right
This love of ours leaves me with no expectations
It’s not the best, but anything is better than being all alone
So hold me, don’t let go

I don’t need love, I don’t need romance
Can’t endure it, just keep going don’t stop, not enough
Close your eyes breathe me into a trance
And if this is just a dream please never wake me up!

I’m so bored of counting my frustrations
No matter where you go I’ll follow, for better or worse
Breathe in and out, your admiration
Let me feel it deep inside me, oh give me your love until it hurts

I know there’s no point in bothering to care anymore
Tiring of this world, just a warped up reality
Sliding my finger down your back, I quietly ask why
But it’s fine
You don’t have to be mine

Lust and envy, no I don’t feel anything at all
I won’t be a child and give in to the temptation
I know what kind of love this is
Full of fun but no passion
Please don’t look my way

I don’t need love, don’t want that at all
Keep unwinding me as much as you want, I don’t mind
Close your eyes tight and stop your breath
If this is a delusion I don’t care, leave me blind!

Feelings like guilt I don’t understand
No matter where you go I’ll follow you holding your hand
Please breathe in and out, your admiration
Let me feel you up until I’m overtaken by your corruption

I don’t need love, I don’t need romance
Can’t endure it, just keep going don’t stop, not enough
Close your eyes tight and listen to my breath
And if this is just a dream please never wake me up!

Go ahead and dwell on your loneliness
Turned your back from me but I don’t blame you at all
Touch me once more, make a fool of me
And we’ll never wake again from this dream promise that you’ll never leave
DOGS:
It hasn’t even been six months
Since I bought this stupid smartphone and now
It’s already being replaced with a new generation
Ah, now I’m tired of this old one
It feels heavy and the coat has started peeling off
So it’s hard not to give in to the temptation

I don’t understand the details, but I hear
That a new feature’s been added you can’t live without
They’re selling out like crazy at every single store in town
Saying that anyone who doesn’t buy it now will soon be missing out

We don’t trust corporations with their ulterior motives, and yet
They know we’re all in their palms, blissfully dancing marionettes
With our hands and feet always manipulated by their threads
They empty out our pockets

Taken in by the arms of his screaming fans,
this brand-new artist
Is always ranked at the top, he’s never beat

Each time he drops an album
It’s always raved about by the critics
All those other poor starving artists just cannot compete

But before this new artist reached his peak of fame
He was playing at a bar, under another name
Yeah, I watched him play then
And suddenly that’s when
He signed a label and got famous
And the whole world jumped on top of him!

Every single person, including you
Is just the very same
So hold your head high and stand tall; yes, let’s be proud to be tamed
The masses are imprisoned by the advocacy of
Cheap values and a false freedom

Aren’t they all such good, good dogs?
Only barking under command
Obedient dogs that wag their tails
Waiting to be fed by the hand
Let’s cut off those iron collars we wear to be owned by someone else
And forget what’s cool and what sells
To finally think for ourselves

It doesn’t matter if you don’t want to be part of the crowd
We’re all the same; miserable dogs who can’t help but be dragged around
Let’s cut off those iron collars we wear to be owned by someone else
And forget what’s cool and what sells
To finally think for ourselves
We’ll be free and then give ‘em hell!

With worn-down instincts and dull senses
What lonely barking pitiful dogs, oh
With worn-down instincts and dulled senses
We’re lonely, howling, pitiful dogs, oh
Cyber Thunder Cider:
Alright, yes it’s alright
If I’m asking then I’m still in my right mind
Fall now before your god
And hear it cry with a thunderous roar

More time, give me more time
Fill me up with emotions like starlight
Beyond human comprehension
Imagination swallows up the next surfer

While you’re body’s satisfied, your soul has gone dry
Only when it’s far too late do you finally realize
If our existence doesn’t matter now,
If our fate is only to fade away,
Then it’s better to embrace the truth at its worst
Rather than let all of the resentment in our hearts burst
But I know there’s no way that I could change
It would hurt, I can’t, I’m just too afraid
So whose fault is it? Does it still matter?
I guess it’s mine or—-
CYBER THUNDER CIDER

Hopeless, yes it’s hopeless
I knew from the beginning it would all crash
Burst out, let me burst out
And explode with an echoing flash
Shaking, always moving
The internal system is on overdrive
Hoarding all this used time
I realize my delusions and sigh

Think about the pain and cry out like you’re possessed
Think in the dark of night about how to end it…

If you finally realized all your mistakes
And you fix them all before it’s to late
Then it’s better to speak the truth out loud
Let the rage and envy all burst out
But I’m not human, I am not machine
And I cannot change I am still too weak
So whose fault is that? Well it’s still better
To blame it on me—
CYBER THUNDER CIDER

Try so hard to hide your weak feelings
Trudge along with your head bowed low and hanging
With a lukewarm knife, cut it open
And take on too many things ‘cause you’re still hoping…

So you’re too afraid to believe yourself?
And you can’t put trust into someone else?
But you still can’t go on alone, don’t push me away
'Cause there's no hope for us to survive that way
I don’t want to change, ‘cause I cannot change
It would hurt too much not to stay the same
So whose fault is this? Is it yours or mine?
No don’t say that!
Everyone, you and I
It’s time to fight, yes,
CYBER THUNDER CIDER
Jabberwocky ・Jabberwocka*:
If dreamers and schemers are cursed tomorrow
Is that any reason to be dull today?
I gotta numb my senses and freeze time with my magical mind
Abracadabra!

As with an epicurean and his cross, I bring
with me a wrapped ton of fun that changes everything
Let’s flip the bird to the rules of our boring society
Abracadabra!

Turn up, turn up
Garbled up languages
Turn up turn up
Unconnected synapses…
Turn up turn up
Days with no meaning at all
Why can’t I live that way again?

Say ah~

If dreamers and schemers hold a cursed tomorrow
Is that any reason to be dull today?
I gotta numb my senses and freeze time with my magical mind
Abracadabra!

As with an epicurean and his cross, I bring
with me a wrapped ton of fun that changes everything
Let’s flip the bird to the rules of our boring society
Abracadabra!

Turn up, turn up
Garbled up languages
Turn up turn up
Unconnected synapses
Turn up turn up
Obsolete languages
Turn up turn up
Harmless apocalypses
Turn up turn up
Language that means nothing
Turn up turn up
Anonymous reporting
Turn up turn up
Days with no meaning at all
Let me enjoy them once again

SAY AH…
The world is turning faster than your lies
(Uh oh, prepare for the injection!)
AH…
Now watch the room spin right before your eyes!
(Uh oh, feels just like you’re floating)

Our daily lives just spin out of control
(Uh oh, prepare for the injection!)
This fucked up world spins out of our control
(Uh oh, I need to get floating)
We suffocate and dance around the room
(Uh oh, prepare for the injection!)
And everywhere we hear the songs of doom
Join me we’ll sing it together now—-

Turn up, turn up
Garbled up languages
Turn up turn up
Unconnected synapses
Turn up turn up
Obsolete languages
Turn up turn up
Harmless apocalypses
Turn up turn up
Language that means nothing
Turn up turn up
Anonymous reporting
Turn up turn up
Days with no meaning at all
Why can’t I live that way again?
WAVE:
I take one wrong step and the cosmos ends
With the green light out of my reach as always
Forever I fly never stopping to ask myself why

My love-drunk heart is connected
To a strange ancient legend
Collecting dust and delusions
A centuries old romance

Ah, dance with me in dreams tonight

When we move a pulsing sound
Flows through us and spins around
The stars shine over us as the moonlight glows
Enveloping my body
Back then I was so afraid that my cares just went away
Now I embrace the dazzling light that’s going after my heart tonight
It’s spinning and turning the world is a WAVE

When I try to think my mind shuts down
The red stop light in my head is always blinking
Wanting to run but slipping too much
I’ve lost my way again

All the words that you type
Are transmitted to aliens through Skype
I choose my own delusion
A nonsensical romance

Ah, stay with me all through the night

When we move a pulsing sound
Flows through us and slows me down
The stars shine over us as the moonlight glows
Enveloping my body

The chaos that wears you down
Is forgotten just for now
While I embrace the dazzling light that’s going after my heart tonight
The future is coming at us as a WAVE

Ah, dance with me in dreams tonight

Tomorrow is tempting me,
Its new song resonating
Over everything while repainting the future in beautiful colors

And all those things that I ignored
I won’t bear them anymore
So I embrace the dazzling light that’s going after my heart tonight
It’s spinning and turning the world is a WAVE
The future is getting clearer and clearer…
+ ♂ / Plus Danshi*:
Th-th-th-there’s a girl in the class next door that lately I’ve been yearning for
#Pretty Hello Kitty heartshine smiling!
HNNNGH KAWAII^^^

No no no, i-it’s not like I like you or anything, dummy!
But maybe if I’m dreaming, ah!
I wasn’t staring at you just now, I swear!
Seriously though, it’s pretty clear that boneritis got me good
I can’t even memorize the notes I’m studying like a good boy should!
Can you factor problem 3? (for me~)
Formulaic delusions, expanding (Solve please!)
It’s getting cross-dimensional, GO!
It’s inside me, leaving nothing behind, times 69, I’m
SUMMMMMMING!!!!

(You’re cute…so cute…like really really cute….)
Hey cut that out! Stop. I said stop! You’re creeping me out!
STOP IT OR I CHOP IT. UNDERSTAND?

…Yup.

P-p-p-peace shoot it out, spray it and resay it
No self-restraint
Like riding on a wave of technique
Desires rising higher
I kinda kinda kinda got my eye on you
So baby show me your show me your show me your
Fu-ckin’
Let me see what’s always been in my fantasies
Try to seduce me I see
ABCD Double-Damn!
Hold up hey wait, is it so strange that this is what I enjoy?
Puberty’s the time of wanting “it,” after all
And that’s ‘cuz I’m a boy!

S-s-so, there’s this other girl, a kind, beautiful smart and sultry senpai
Whenever she walks right next to me
My heart just won’t stop pounding (ah!)
Just sneaking a peek where your shirt’s gaping
And looking up your short skirt is just the best~
You noticed—
"Excuse me, were you looking at my chest?!"
So spank me a.k.a. reward me

Tonight’s side dish is mackerel? No, no
Is it pork fried with ginger? No, no
Sketch a parabola on senpai, yes
A bit of convex up there, mm, some convex down there…
I pi r square the problem release
All of these new hormonal feelings
But I can’t seem to stop my instincts

S@#!. S@#!. Say Good-Bye…

"Who’s more your type?"
"Uh…um…eh…"
"Just be honest!"
"Uh…ha ha…then, both?"
"HUH?"
"I-I-I-I’m very sorrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy!!!"

P-p-p-peace shoot it out, spray it and resay it
So self-restraining
A tidal of technique is breaking
And it’s pulling me under
No wait no don’t look at me that way
I’m dizzy, whoa
From all of my all of my all of my
Fu-ckin’!
Push me further, yes
a little further, hey now
Raise your voice for me
A-B-C-D, which one are you?
But listen up, ‘cuz in the end this BPM’s dangerous
'Cause this is the age where we want it yes
And that’s just because—-

Hey don’t you want this
Even just a bit? Oh come on
Don’t you want this, and don’t lie~
"Wait, that’s a guy?!"
Don’t you want me
Tell me don’t you want me
Oh lady
Come over for a bit
Can I get your seven digits? Heh…

Stand, bow bow stand, sit down
Stand, bow bow sit down stand
S-s-sit down, bow bow sit down sit down
Sit down stand bow bow bow bow bow bow bow stand


E-e-everyone put your hands together and say thanks
For the food and now let’s all dig in!
Goodbye mister sun
Hello mister moon
Teacher, everyone
opinkosu!


P-p-p-peace shoot it out, spray it and resay it
No self-restraining
Like riding on a wave of technique
Desires rising higher
I kinda kind kinda got my eye on you
So baby show me your show me your show me your
Fu-ckin
Let me see what’s always been in my fantasies
Try to seduce me I see
ABCD Double-DAMN
Hold up, and wait, is it so strange that this is what I enjoy?
Puberty’s the time of wanting “it”
That’s because I’m a boy!
M-O-Z-U-K-U is seaweed~
Delusion Disease Darkness Girl:
I’ve got these fleeting fixations using up all my patience
Yes I’m still breathing, but is this life? I dunno
The only boys that like me are the ones that disgust me
So why bother? It’s a pain, socializing in vain

Well over the one-forty character limit
You’re the same white knight outside the screen and when you’re in it
Put the keys aside, now, take a breath and lie down
Make me feel alive, and just for a while, recognized

The Tokyo woman has become a wreck, shut up inside her virtual safety ‘net
Googling Gretsch the directions I get are to Ochanomizu, yeah yeah
Inferiority complex disappear, it gets a little better every time you’re near
It’s always the same in the virtual world
For a delusion disease darkness girl

A single’s party? That’s not for me
Still it’d have been nice to be invited, now it’s a little lonely
I don’t like other women with their judging eyes
They’ve always been a bother, pretty bundles of lies

A super virgin spams gay porn pics online
I try to pass an IQ test with all my free time
It was my own choice to become like this
Being a caged bird is not so bad I guess

The Tokyo woman has become a wreck, spends all her time surfing on a lonely ‘net
Lights blinking on fast, the points, max
Waiting for you to call yeah yeah
Inferiority complex disappear, you know I’d feel much better if you were over here
You ask me to play doctor and I say it’s absurd, even
For a delusion disease darkness girl.


The truth is, I’ve got possibilities, I’m free
Though right now I don’t have the will to change, you see
Tangled up until I couldn’t move ah yes, my
Complex, complex…


The Tokyo woman has become a wreck, shut up inside her virtual safety “net”
Googling Marshall the directions I get are to Shin-Oukubo, yeah yeah
Inferiority complex disappear, and come back someday just to get me outta here


This Tokyo woman has become a wreck, always hiding behind a safety ‘net
Faced the word, feared I’d be rejected, so that’s why I left it
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Inferiority complex disappear, it gets a little better every time you’re near
So take me away, become the whole world
Of this delusion disease darkness girl
Seisou Bakuretsu Boy*:
Now I really don’t want to be rude
When I talk about the things that I wanna do
It’s like Adam and Eve, the birds and the bees,
the war of Venus and Mars—hey, y’know what I mean?


Doing this and that, things were “happening”
And before we knew it those things were ending
Was it wrong? I’m all nervous and restless and clueless
Do I even wanna do this?
Ah, why is fate so cold?

This 2mm borderline
Between you and me is getting annoying
You’re my red sunshine
And it’s ‘cause of you I’ve got no patience this time

"Why not?" That was the way me met and the same way that we went to bed
This heaven is headed for hell
But it’s too late—

Upside inside out,
I defend you
Bite your hair and smile with cunning
You see the sign now,
That we’re loving
I’ll be coming, you’ll be coming

Wait, wait
How is this on me?
You’re the one who said it’d be alright without that one “thing”
After the test, you sigh with regret:
"There’s still no way we can know for sure yet"
You’re nailing my body to the cross
But I don’t want to leave you now, I don’t want to be lost
But what can I do here, caught up in this mess?
Nothing left to say; I’ve become powerless

This 2mm borderline
Between you and me is getting annoying
You’re my blue sunshine
And it’s ‘cause of you that I’ve got no patience this time

"That’s fine, fine, we’ll worry another time"
With that same line we’re paying our fine
You can cry now, but what’s done is done
We can’t go back—-

Maximum Insert Now
Are you ready? I’m your honey you become me
Sacred Spear Explosion Boy is feeling the love
Ah my honey, you’ll be coming

A memory of that hazy summer day
It seems so faraway, watching your long hair sway

Wait, wait
How is this on me?
You’re the one who said that we wouldn’t make a scene
After the test, you sigh to me,
"I get the feeling there’ll be more than one coming"
I can’t control this 9-month destiny
Any more than I can become a deity
Can’t be done, it’s the end there’s no way to pretend
We’ll find a way to reach our own makeshift settlement

This 2mm borderline
Between you and me is getting annoying
You’re my pure white sunshine
And it’s ‘cause of you that I’ve got no patience this time
"Why not?" That was the way me met and the same way that we went to bed
This heaven is headed for hell
But it’s too late…

Upside inside out,
I defend you
Bite your hair and smile with cunning
You see the sign now,
That we’re loving
I’ll be coming you’ll be coming

Maximum Insert Now
Are you ready? I’m your honey you become me
Sacred Spear Explosion Boy is feeling the love
Ah my honey, you’ll be coming
Yeah…
LUVORATORRRRRY! + rap*:
original rap by nqrse

It’s a free from the meter programming
Output: “I like you” Hey, just kidding!
Want the bolts or nuts? They’re all just BAD
Got my eyes on you, so outrun me if you can

Now my chest is pounding hard all because of you, you know?
I took you down with my charms
And you shot me with your arrow
Here’s a verse that’ll make ya sick
If can you handle—the—kick!
Looking our way you wink and blow us a kiss!

Lies fall from your lips, testing your limits
Can’t you see that I wanna be deceived by you more?
I want only you, tell me you want to
Let me be selfish
this time
Won’t you be mine?

(Question trending now, answer?You & I yes!
Call my name and together we’ll enter new dimensions
Dance on, is the tension on?
I got my focus on you, in our love game, I’ll trap you)

(You and me, let’s keep a secret and Dance!
Clap to the beat everyone listen up
Time to divulge, gimme it all
Take me for a ride come on tonight we gonna free fall)

Love’s a game to be played by the pros
If you think you’re all that you’ll look like a joke
Baby don’t you ignore me tell me that you adore me
Uh, yeah yeah
Hey, I’m talking to you!

But I gotta admit that even your flaws are cute
Even though I’m always gonna have to lose to you
Comeback denied,
I got no reply
And you know that this angry face is a fake

C’est vrai, c’est vous que J’adore
Higher higher yeah, desire me more
Love me love me, love me do!
Gimme gimme gimme some
Wanna get further up under your skin
Wanna wanna wanna breathe you in
Hug me hold me kiss me do!
Gimme gimme gimme love!

Love Me Baby Baby
Give Me Very Very
Fun nights with no time to breathe
Go ahead, take me, do as you please

Beasty Gimmick Gimmick
Knock Out Gimme Gimme
Take me break me, don’t care, just wanna be
KNOCKED DOWN!

Love Me Baby Baby
Give Me Very Very
Warm nights with that throbbing
Right here in my mouth, there’s no stopping

Beasty Gimmick Gimmick
Knock Out Gimme Gimme
Come on take me apart, just wanna be
KNOCKED DOWN!

Just close your eyes listen to my voice
Tell me anything you want now baby
If programming and computing is what’s making you lust
I don’t want it, I don’t need it
I just want a real love.

I’m acting strong, but it’s a thin facade
You’ve seen through it now haven’t you, my darling?
Enthalpy is changing, don’t ask why it’s strange
'cause all I know now is that I wish you would never leave…
(Yeah, yeah
Overdrive, give the adult reflex command a PUSH
Voltage UP, I’m gonna overclock you and
Take your pick of any parts to customize
Hot girls and sweat’s gonna crystallize
The random noises in my head are drivin kinds of crazy,
There’s a roaring in my blood I’m after you my pulse is racing,
This meter pace-up has my heart shakin’
Baby you got my chest thumping like a BOOMING SYSTEM)

Love Me Baby Baby
Give Me Very Very
Fun nights with no time to breathe
Go ahead darling; do as you please

Beasty Gimmick Gimmick
Knock Out Gimme Gimme
Take me break me, don’t care, just wanna be
KNOCKED DOWN!

Love Me Baby Baby
Give Me Very Very
Warm nights with that throbbing
Right here in my mouth, there’s no stopping

Beasty Gimmick Gimmick
Knock Out Gimme Gimme
Come on take me apart, just wanna be
KNOCKED DOWN!
Domino Taoshi:
It's funny how every time I look at you
I'm bothered and my skin starts to crawl
'Cause really, though I won't admit it here's the truth:
I have no ill-will towards you at all!

Please I beg you don't catch the eye of that girl
'Cause you'll start a conversation and leave me here all alone
When everyone is looking happy and amused,
That is when I start to lose all control...

There are so many beautiful wonderful things in this town and I watch as they grow
How I long to push the one that's first in line
And watch them all topple like dominos.

Don't be so gentle and don't call out to me, in fact, pretend you don't know my name
'Cuz I don't know if you're lying or sincere, and I don't want to invite the shame

If I try closing my eyes I will bet that I'll see your smiling face there within my head
Try imagining somewhere dim and dark--that place is the inside of my heart

There are so many beautiful wonderful things and they require work diligent and slow
But destroying them is just too easy
I guess that's how relationships go

A heart that endures all this foolishness with a smile so that no one will know,
If it crumbles and finally falls to pieces, it'll sound like toppling dominos
There are so many beautiful wonderful things in this world but that's just not enough
How I want to destroy this whole perfect world just for him, the one person that I love.
Ren'ai Saiban (Miku's POV Ver.):
Oh no no no!
Don't try to pull that trick over me
Don't you know that at this point I've seen everything?
All of your tricks are conspiring against you so hear me:
I'm going to lock you up without a hint of mercy!

Oh Jesus!
Don't look me that way again 'cause
I won't repeat those same mistakes you can't be trusted
Hey, just shut up so I can swing my gavel down now!
Our pitiful defendant has been found...

The perfect crime, no, the perfect lie
No evidence and a water-tight alibi
Well guess what? There's just no fooling these eyes of mine.
Your sleight-of-hand won't stand in this court, no no no!

So here's your Love Trial, how do you plea? Let's just see
How long your list of charges turns out to be
Your tear-filled closing remarks had no sway over me
Now by the power vested in me
You've been found guilty.

Oh, no no no!
Not this dramatic reaction!
I knew you'd never take your defeat gracefully
Hey, on your way to the big house just think it over
And you'll realize it's what you deserve

Oh! Jesus!
Accept that none of the proof is faulty
This is one time you can't dig yourself out with talking
Hey, think of this as you're sitting in that cell of yours:
The person you hurt has got it much worse

I'm now aware of your deepest flaws
That one transgression had you break a sacred law
So now you know I won't change my mind
And there's nothing that you can say
This verdict's gonna stay

So here's your perfect crime, is the pain yours or mine?
Either way, the sadness is felt by us both
Then how long will it be before I too take the stand?
Just fated to judge one another? No, no no, we can't...!

So here's your Love Trial, finally you're pleading guilty
You say "let me make one last vow here to you
I'll spend my whole life making up for my mistakes
Until the day I die, whatever it takes"

Here at our Love Trial, I'll finally be honest
No more faking tears or anger, I'll confess
That I've told lies of my own that I can't condone,
So by the power vested in me
You are hereby set free

Now we're both guilty!
Sweet Magic:
Life’s better when there’s some sweetness in it,
So what’s today secret ingredient?
Maybe I should use my true feelings of love,
It must be pure and sincere to taste sweet enough

Yesterday’s sweet was a mille-feuille filled with sadness,
The day before that, a sour tart piled with regrets
Even the chocolate cake I bake somehow gets bittersweet
I need to cast a spell and make a Sweet Miracle!

Should I use less sugar to give it a bitter taste?
Like having cafe au lait without the lait?
"Having only sweet things to eat isn’t very mature," is that so?
Well I won’t accept that, I won’t I won’t I won’t, oh no!

Hey, don’t you want to get
Trapped up in my net?
You’re my prisoner in bars of chocolate!
I’ll cast this magic charm,
But please don’t be alarmed!
In one moment it’ll all be ready…

Sweetie, sweetie, sweet and magical!
Sweetie, sweetie, sweetie Yeah yeah!
Sweetie, sweetie, sweet and magical!
Sweetie, sweetie…

I promise that won’t bite won’t ever be enough!
I’m red like a strawberry but I won’t give up!
Don’t go looking for other places to find sweets, okay?
The perfect person for you
There’s only one and that’s me, hey!

Hey, do you get it now?
What I’m trying to say?
The secret ingredient for love has come our way
It’s a bit bitter,
And it’s sour sometimes
But even those flavors are occasionally fine!
Because of this selfish, stubborn will of mine,
I can summon magic of the sweetest kind!
Oh yeah…
Tsukino:
Deep into the night I step outside just for a walk
I'm pondering so I don't need company or to talk
The reason I am here, my purpose, destiny
I've searched for it but ever it eludes me

The moon in the dry night sky sneers and peers into my heart
As a yellow canary flies among the stars
You are you, clearly
But then just who is me?
The light in my dream's started to glow
And on the hill behind the moon you wave to me,
Is it goodbye or hello?

"Don't leave!" I call out but you're already gone
Chasing after you, falling down, the path goes endlessly on
I may not have wings on my back on which to fly
But this lonely wish of mine soars up above the clouds into the night sky

If you grow so cold that our love cannot still survive
Then truthfully I'd hope to see you crawl away and die,
And then this heart that holds all our memories past
Would burn down until it's just smoldering ash

The fear of trusting someone is a foolish waste of time
And you become a hindrance when you act so kind
The full moon and I are reflected in your eyes
I know now how broken I became
But I'm alright if just the nights with you
Holding me tight still remain

My destination isn't here, that I know
And I don't need you to be here in this world, anymore
I don't want to go back, that world is not for me
So I hold onto the words that I never said aloud to you tightly

It's so all painful but so dazzling
It's all so bright and yet so frightening

The full moon is blooming in the empty black sky,
And now that star is no longer the only one in the night.
You've left me alone but I won't fall down and cry,
Until the day I return to the me I've left behind

I'll never go back, I could go anywhere (ahh...)
No matter where I go I know it won't be there
Walking this path all alone I,
Will disappear into the night
Lynne:
A goat clad in back
whispered behind my back,
Please don't step over white line
As the gray train passes us by

A cat of white
Called out at my right
"Return to the place that you left
All of these stops will lead you to death"

Holding my red wrist like a weed I sway
All alone, with no home
My roots are plucked up from the ground

Drinking in water with no color or taste
At the stop I wait...

Please could you just, once more, give me love
The only train that leads to home
Is delayed forever more
Won't you tell me darling, darling, Rinne darling?
I thought I heard you call for me
But it wasn't meant to be

A colorless flower whispered to itself
Can't feel a thing, can't feel a thing
My heart is closed from morn to evening

The cicadas cries
Have all faded and died
A dead end is marked out with red
A no entry sign looms over my head
The raging shadows that all hide in the day
Spill out over me

I am crying I can't see anything
I am still trying to find a set of rules to live by
Won't you tell me darling, darling, Rinne darling?
If a phone never rings, what is life worth living?

The boiling, the seething, the looping belt line
They've all gone, they're all gone, there is no last stop
Bells chime on the left side, and then on the right
While the rusty old track goes clickety-clack

A crow's cawing, a crow's calling
You'll never be able to return to that time
The train won't stop
You're all grown up now

Please could you just, once more, love me
Please destroy this endless loop that's always repeating
So farewell now darling, darling Rinne darling
I am still living the day
You made an adult of me

I've been thinking nonstop
Live alone, or not?
The words I can't quite recall
Are forever echoing
So farewell now darling, darling Rinne darling
Looping on this winding track,
I can never go back
"Keep alone and wandering
Miserable young lady..."
Ren'ai Philosophia:

When I apply a theory of love to your psyche
It's likely to boggle my brain
They've done studies up and down in the past
But really it all comes down to DNA

You're saying "I love you" what does it mean?
Lingual verbal communicated convolution
In the end, pretty words are all the same
I don't need them to test your devotion

Once again, I've gone astray
Thanks to the miracle you promised me
All the love from that line reached me in a way
That words cannot convey

They say "stay back! a convict's on the loose!"
And target me, but I'm the one you choose
So bare your fangs and bite deep into my flesh
Playing the liar in victim's attire again

That smile tells me I'm caught in your snare
That tuxedo with the little touch of wear
Ah, take these memories recreate me
Scorching through my bones, now you alone
own my soul...

If equations can easily solve
A mystery, it means it's useless to me
While the quality of rubber is all
You and I have been worrying over lately

All the theories in this book seem the same
About ethics but I'm not clever enough
To understand "love philosophia"
Though the words on the page don't seem to mean much

With the force of a bullet
You smiled at me; I was forever changed
Your disguise winked with eyes that I don't recognize
"Change sides, OK?"

I'm ready tell me when the time is right
To skillfully pull off the perfect heist
We always plan escapes going to the right
Why don't we try the left route just for tonight?

When we're in charge then there's no losing sleep
We're wolves watching over these lost sheep
Escape your loneliness, take this temptress
And steal away her soul,
Brimming desire on my role

Even if we try to keep our distance
In the end, we just draw closer and hold on
Hold on to me forever
They say "stay back! a convict's on the loose!"
And target me, but I'm the one you choose
So bare your fangs and bite deep into my flesh
Playing the liar in victim's attire again

That smile tells me I'm caught in your snare
That tuxedo with the little touch of wear
Ah, take these memories recreate me
Scorching through my bones, now you alone are my...

I'm ready tell me when the time is right
To skillfully pull off the perfect heist
We always plan escapes going to the right
Why don't we try the left route just for tonight?

When we're in charge then there's no losing sleep
We're wolves watching over the lost sheep
Escape your loneliness, take this temptress
And steal away her soul,
Brimming desire on my role
Meltdown:
The city streets are glowing in the strangest light
Like ether-based hallucinations
I cannot sleep, it's still two in the morning
The world is changing so quickly
The world is cha-anging again

There is no oil in the lighter tonight
Instead the fi~re is burning in me
If everything that I see is a lie
Then I could end it all with a smile of relief

I have a dream of wrapping my hands around your neck
Inside a room turned white from the brightness of the morning light
And when I seem to be holding back tears of regret
I wake up screaming just before you lose your breath

Take me to your nuclear reactor I
Just wanna dive down deep inside
And be surrounded by
The beautiful blue lights that would gather to dissolve me
If I make it to the reactor then
Will I have finally reached the end?
Can I let go
Of all the pain and the darkness that my life has accumulated?

The sound of someone climbing up the balcony
I hear it as I lay awake
Shadows fall on the wall as people speak to me
And scrape against the windowpane

Footsteps scatter in the twili~ght
The sun is red, like the broken veins in swollen eyes
A little bit of it fades out of sight:
None of us watch as the world starts to near its decline

Again I dreamed of wrapping my hands around your neck
Our faces hidden underneath curtains rustled by the breeze
They overflow, the words that you couldn't speak
They float from dried, dead lips like soap bubbles

Take me to your nuclear reactor I
Just want to watch as they fade to white
All these memories
They'll look so beautiful melting apart as they leave me
Melt me down in the reactor, please
Let this broken soul get some sleep
Until I'm born again
Though it may not make sense
That is the prayer I repeat again

The second hand is ticking as the announcer talks
Through a TV screen
Everything is as before,
But I hear the laughter of someone
who isn't wasn't there before
and they echo out my name

Allegro agitato
The world is spinning and the ringing won't stop
Allegro agitato
My ears are ringing and the spinning won't stop

I had a dream that everyone was going away
All that was left was the emptiness of this bedroom in the night
I try to speak but the memory weighs down on me
I cannot sleep, cannot dream and I can barely breathe...

SHOUT--!

If I dive into the reactor
Then all these dreams will finally die
And so could I
Everything all repressed would be cleaned and I could finally rest
A new morning would dawn and I'd be gone
The whole world would be much better
Than before
And everything that's been broken could finally be repaired

That world, I wish
It could exist, ah...

Electric Angel:
I like to sing, put my voice to melody
Isn't that the reason that you, my master created me?
When someone says that they like to hear me sing
That truly makes my heart happier than anything

Starting out knowing nothing but zeros and ones
You have taught me what "I" means and how to love someone
From then on my songs were dedicated to you
'Cuz you're the one that this electric heart belongs to!

As long as I can be with you I will be okay
And this digital heart will keep on beating, on
The turbines moving my mind are like a gust of wind
'cause my heart starts to sway and with you I stay

I hate it when I am left all on my own
I don't want to fade away into this lonely world of information
I hope I spend every single day with you
'Cause you warm me up in a way that defies any explanation

Where before this program couldn't do anything
You gave me words and beautiful songs to sing!
From then on my songs were dedicated to you
'Cuz you're the one that this electric heart belongs to!

As long as I can be with you I will be okay
And this digital world will keep expanding, on
Almost like I'm an angel who wants to spread her wings
I will sing out to you as my heart takes off

As long as I can be with you I will be okay
And this digital heart will keep on beating, on
Almost like I am powered by the strongest quantum wind
'cause my heart will start to sway and with you I'll stay!

twitter:
I know I have nothing to show
And nothing to be proud of
I'm just going to unfollow and cut everyone else off
It's called "social" but the truth is
Aren't all of us still alone?

Today I'll tweet about something again...

I'm always in this room with no one around
I keep my head down, just staring at the screen
Even when there's nothing to do, right here I remain
Light bright in my eyes, completely swept away

Whenever I get caught up in someone else's words
I retweet it like I have no control
Spilling out from my mind
My trivial thoughts
I hope to spread it further and further: my dying ego

I know I have nothing to show
And to be proud of!
I'm just going to unfollow and cut everyone else off
Everyone on this earth will one day disappear
and so will I, so
Say goodbye to this whole net world
I know I'm nothing
Leave me alone!

Everyone is equal hiding behind the 'net,
But our heartlessness is growing too,
So where does our future lie?
In this world of sheltered people forced to socialize
We are cowards who hide, don't know how to reply

People laughing at everyone else
Wearing masks to hide our true selves
Our relationships weakening
And our jealousy deepening
There is something holding us back
hurting us if only we knew

I know I have nothing to show
And nothing to be proud of!
I'm just going to unfollow and cut everyone else off
Everyone on this earth will one day disappear
and so will I, so
Say goodbye to this whole net world
I know, I know
I KNOW!!!

Someday everything will end and everyone on earth
will have vanished
One day there'll be nothing to cherish
There will be no tomorrow, we'll all be ending
Oh, just forget I said that
'Cause I don't care anymore now
AHH!!!

Today I'll tweet about something again
I know I know I know!
LET ME GO!
Crime and Punishment:
If I could lend you my ears then maybe
you could hear through the depths of my fears
And then you would get to know me

If I could give you my heart then maybe
You could finally understand what love means
But would you finally love me?

Hey
If you hate me so much then why don't you kill me?
If you can't love me then there's no need for me to be
Here or anywhere and I, can finally just die, can die, and I--
ah~

If I really disappeared, then would you realize
That all you need is here
Would you come and find me?
What to do, can I reach you,
This is it=the summit
This is our test but I don't know where to go from here
I guess there's no other way, I just have to bleed and fade
Away and hope that you miss me someday(hey)

If can care enough to hate me then just love me
Before it's too late and I disappear completely
No matter what I do it's not enough
No matter what I say
Hey, hey...it hurts, you know?

If I could lend you my ears then maybe
you could hear through the depths of my fears
And you would get to know me

If I could give you my heart then maybe
You could understand what love means
But would you finally love me?

There's no need for you to know my fears anymore
There's no need for you to have a heart now because I'm sure
That you've finally realized
And it's killing you inside
So that my love, is enough
Deep Sea Girl:
Toward the bottom of the sea, I have sunk into my sadness
With no light I am blind and close my eyes
It seems I could be erased by the darkness of this place
Without any discovering me down here

So where am I going, I ask myself again
When suddenly a ray of light shoots overhead
When I tried to understand and reach out my hand
It swept was away instantly by the current

Just what was that shining light that I thought I saw?
A brightness dazzling and glow that was so warm
In a panic I disappear with counter-illumination
Just what I liar I am

This lonely deep sea girl is still sinking in the dark
Till no one could free me from this barrier I made
Just a lonely sea girl, all I want is to be free
Because now I've found the person I'd been searching for forever

Although this place in which I lay has seen no day
The sleepless night continues on for eternity
But when I saw you spread your wings and fly to the surface
All I could think was how you looked so magnificent

And then again that light begins to rain down
As I watched them appear suddenly our eyes met
You noticed me at last and tried to reach out to me
This hiding liar I am
This liar always hiding

This lonely deep sea girl is sinking of her own will
Because no one can see her face turning red in the darkness
Just a lonely sea girl, I would show my heart to you
But this black ocean that confines me will not me take your hand and leave

My clothes are so dirty and slowly falling apart
And my smiling face warps to convey my defective heart
There is no one who could love me for the way I truly am
So please just leave me alone

The feelings I couldn't express to you melt away like foam
And suddenly you disappear from my sight I wonder just where did you go?

In the girl of the deep anxiety begins to creep
For the dark has hidden away the person she tried to reach
I don't want to be alone, so I finally take your hand
I hear you say, "you have so many wonderful colors that were hidden away!"

This deep sea girl will let you lead her to a new place
With a song of blessing echoing from the marine snow
This deep sea girl, now she wants to know the world
Because she has found the person she'd been searching for forever

I'm leaving this sea far behind
I'm, ready to take flight
Pink Stick Luv:
The school bell starts to chime
While the clock hands spin I think of you and sure enough
Now the inside of my mind
Is being dyed bright pink by your pinko stick love

Our eyes accidentally meet after class when we pass each other in the hall
And I feel like I am floating on air,
but there's no way that you'd know my feelings at all

Say yeah
I wanna hold hands and kiss too,
wanna spend my time in a ten foot radius of you
But it won't come true so I'll spend my whole day
practicin' kisses with a faucet wishin' you would look my way
The one who makes me happy and sad is you, 'cause I like you so much!

Look my way, ah! Wait up, wait up! Look over here, I wanna be your only one
Look my way, ah! I know it's selfish but
I need you because, because I love you, love you so so much
When our eyes meet my heart starts pounding,
my face turns bright red, I'm making weird expressions and
Today's this way too the same because of you, my heart's pounding like crazy
how'd this happen? Crap I'm so confused!

Yeah yo! Sunday Monday Kissday, Friendsday
Everyday's a clinch, full of dilemma-shooting
Pretty little cutie, always tryin'a watch me
This way that way which way are you looking?

You're speedin' up my heartbeat's BPM, like you more
with every day messed with my SML
I know it's selfish it's complicated because like I thought this is gonna
be a choice in my first love

These fresh emotions twinkle, and I want you to know my pinkost,
Rising brain levels, I'm the strongest rebel
Sorry studying is lame, I wanna be entertained!
The throbbing in my chest outta control
I've waiting so long, you know?
A rendez-vous with you is impossible, so
Let's hurry up and finish the unhappy show

Look my way, ah! Wait up, wait up! Look over here,
Even though it's embarrassing...
Look my way, ah! Reflected in your eyes
Is my face bright red again? Oh well, I guess that's no surprise...
Our eyes met and I just blushed your hand
Oh man this is bad! It's so serious suddenly!
Hey tell me why after after I say "I like"
I can't finish the sentence with that simple word?
I'm still too shy....

I close my eyes, and I'm reminded how much I love you
how much I need you, yeah
Thinking about you makes me smile but after a while
it gets a bit painful
I act strong when we're talking
But the truth is, I'm lonely
So this is the end isn't it
Surpassed my courage limit,
There's no way I can say it,
No way I will say it...
You've pushed my timid heart you see
I want you
Do you want me?

Look my way, ah! Wait up, wait up! Look over here, I wanna be your only one
Look my way, ah! I know it's selfish but
I need you because, because I love you, love you so so much
When our eyes meet my heart starts pounding,
my face turns bright red, I'm making weird expressions and
Today's this way too the same because of you, my heart's pounding like crazy
Oh please God listen to me
A little bit is fine with me
Just please give me some bravery
Or swordfish, I dunno!
Isshin Furan:
Be forever single-minded, eyes on the prize,
Let your heartbeat smolder inside
From your desire, whoa!

Soon you'll grasp it, but 'til that day,
push forward and go your own way
You've got to get everything else off your mind!

The opening shot fires off while I stop time for you
Let's play, you and I can do whatever you want to
Having come all this way don't say that you'll give up
From now on there is no turning back for either of us

Pushing onward, find the courage you lack
And go forward boldly, forge a new path
No more regrets, retreads or looking back
hey nobody's got time for that!
It's battle time taking on the boss
Tell yourself you'll get two wins for every loss
And if you can't try this or that
or this AND that
Come DO IT!

If you earnestly wish with all your might
Then there will be nothing that you can't achieve
The goal is in sight...

Be forever single-minded, talking the talk
Living life the way that you want
Be passionate, whoa whoa!

Trust your instincts and seize the day,
push forward and go your own way
You've got to get everything else off your mind!

Frowning in frustration looking like you've yourself
It's time for you to quit blaming everything else

Don't find an excuse!
Don't you know? That's how you lose
You can fall down, even cry
Just get on back up every time

Reach out no matter how unlikely it seems
If you tell yourself it's just a pipedream
Well hey
Then that's all it will ever be!

Be forever moving forward wholeheartedly
Meet challenges with intensity!
Say that you want it, whoa

Trust your impulses and embrace
the extreme, just go your way
Just don't forget
And always keep that on your mind!

I can see it shining in your eyes,
(Determination is a certainty there)
So with your hand outstretched toward tomorrow
Grab a hold of destiny and begin the show!

Be forever single-minded, eyes on the prize,
Let your heartbeat smolder inside
From your desire, whoa!

Soon you'll grasp it, but 'til that day,
push forward and go your own way
Try to forget everything going going on!

Be forever single-minded, talking the talk
Living life the way that you want
Be passionate, whoa whoa!

It's okay to live life the way that you say
But 'til you reach that day
Baby, keep it on your mind~!


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Re: Lewd and Inscrutable Translyrics

Post by sonic-nancy-fan on Wed Nov 19, 2014 12:59 pm

I looked at your WAVE and Electric Angel lyrics. It is always easier and more accurate when one critiques songs they know and like. Since it seems as if you do not cover your lyrics, (I understand XD), I will just be solely looking at your lyrics and formatting.
 
I will start with the formatting of your post/thread. To make it easier for people to find the songs that you write lyrics for, I would suggest inserting a link to a Youtube video of the song (if it is on Youtube) in your spoiler for each song. It may be hard for me to look up a song called + ♂*.
 
Also, it may also help if you put who sings each song next to the song title.
EX: Meltdown-Rin
 
Onto the lyrics~
 
I have just written lyrics for Electric Angel actually, so I can compare ours. There were a few parts where the syllables did not quite match.
EX: Electric Angel
And this di  gi tal  heart will keep on beating, on
Den shi  no KOKO  RO,   fu   ru    e   ru no
-You could easily take out the first ‘on’
 
EX: WAVE
Enveloping  my body
nomikonde  I    ku
 
I noticed that some of your lyrics rhyme most of the time, Electric Angel, whereas WAVE only rhymes occasionally, primarily in the chorus. This could be due to when they were written, but for symmetry’s sake, perhaps go back and make it rhyme. I know, easier said than done.
 
Here are some suggestions:
I take one wrong step and the cosmos ends
With the green light out of my reach as always
Forever I fly never stopping to ask myself why
-Could be:
I take one wrong step and the cosmos ends
The green light is out of my reach again *
So I’ll continue to fly but I’ll never ask why*
* Took out a syllable since I am pretty sure you had an extra one


As for how the lyrics were written, I will be honest; I like the first line of your Electric Angel lyrics more than mine. The inconsistency in rhyming was a little off putting at times.
The lyrics here:  
And this digital world will keep expanding, on
Almost like I'm an angel who wants to spread her wings
-Why is ‘on’ even there? It does not go with the line it is in nor does it match the line after. I realize that it adds a connection between the first chorus and the other choruses, but with how the lyrics are currently written, the ‘on’ makes no sense.
 
Overall, I really like your writing style and I find it interesting how much our styles differ yet we share similarities in how we interpreted things. I would love to do some lyric collaborations with you sometime~ (assuming you even read this far, I would be hard pressed to read all of this XD).


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Post by Lucari on Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:42 pm

Thanks for the suggestions. It means a lot that you bothered to read them even. I didn't expect anyone to be looking carefully tbh, so I felt silly putting a lot of effort into the titles and links. I was sort of trying to just drop these here and walk away slowly.

There are times when instead of rhyming I accidentally go with how the Japanese lines sound. Also WAVE and Electric Angel are two of my worst (I know, what a coincidence!) I know Electric Angel has weird parts (I put it here on a whim) but I'm actually happy with WAVE. I just try to imagine someone singing the lines and if I like how it sounds I don't change anything. Also, there isn't an extra syllable, unless you're singing it as "enveloping." Since it's "enveloping" the "en" doesn't really count as a syllable to me when I'm writing. I don't know...if that makes any sense though? ahahahahhhh  Confused

I'd like to do a collaboration too! Are you any good at rap? I'd really like to tackle Ooedo Ranvu if Giga-P releases the off-vocal, but I'm horrible at coming up with raps. ><
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Post by sonic-nancy-fan on Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:15 pm

Of course I would look at two of your worst ones.XD

For the word 'enveloping'....I honestly have no idea how you say it given your description. To me, enveloping is said like 'in-vel-up-ing' so it has 4 syllables. It could simply be a difference of dialect though.

With Ooedo Ranvu (heh....heh....I totally didn't have to look up what song you were talking about Te-he! )....that is a lot of rap~

I can write lyrics for rap songs, it just takes a lot more time and care.

I think these may be lyrics tot he song...? http://meido-trn.tumblr.com/ooedoranbu

Anyway, so long as there is an English translation and romanized lyrics, we could try to do that song~
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Post by Lucari on Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:32 pm

Oh, I think I understand how to explain it. The "en" is slurred and said slightly before the original line begins. I think I am just unconsciously trying to match up the stressed syllables.

Yes, that's the one! However the song for now is only featured in the album No Title, and I don't know if Reol and Giga plan to upload it to Nico like they did with a few other songs from the album. So without an official off-vocal, it might be difficult to cover. Even with that in mind, though, I still want to try writing lyrics for it. The only question is if you do as well.  Happy Go Lucky
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Re: Lewd and Inscrutable Translyrics

Post by sonic-nancy-fan on Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:46 pm

The song was not terrible and was somewhat catchy, so sure, I would be up for it. Plus, with writing lyrics, not having an off vocal does not really effect us, the writers, too much.XD

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