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Clarn's covers-//shot. xD

Post by Clarn_Lin on Sun Nov 16, 2014 8:35 am

-I sang this about 5 months ago...? My First ever self-mixed cover yo. Of course a One-shot. :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XP3wz4RPhCM&index=15&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A


-Then I did a duet. Of course it's Pitched-up. xD I can't Loli at all. :/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jGL3JkDsffc&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=14


-Another duet... This time with my daughter Ya-chan! :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2anSEpztP6U&index=13&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A


-To thank my 130 subbies, I did this. My daughter, mixed this. :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=csrFOtXZY4g&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=11


-Then, I did a duet again. This time with Yacchi. :3 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_0t12qNS57U&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=10


-Afterwards, I did a cover for my bro's bday~! Haha. Yeah, my trappy bro~ :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLKUm9Vhftk&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=9


-Then I used Five-chan's duet-ready to mix this. Not really proud of my vocals, but yeah, I tried. xD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5iO0HAr4wyE&index=8&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A


-To thank my 150 subbies, I made this. It's short so it's easy for a lazy person like me. Razz

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgVJfj-pRew&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A


-Then, I tried to sing Unravel again, because why not? xD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fq2lSaEZqNQ&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=6


-Then, I decided to sing a Trio-ready thing. :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4kcCx8bcyU&index=5&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A


-Then I sang this for my 170 subbies~! Well, with a help of my friend who helps me mix. :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uF4aMv9CpS0&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=4


-Then, my latest one would be this~ Well, I'm a Fan of AKB48. So, I sang one of their songs. :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsirN3TK4ME&list=UUb2Rrd0JWHMiWi4wJ7Kc_1A&index=1

-Edit-

-I tried to sing to celebrate a friend's birthday...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A09ate7ffuo


-Then, I realised that I didn't sing for my other friends... So I made two covers.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4l5-GoPiNY

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK8LnmNZrcA


-To thank my 180+ subscribers, I made this...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BosoRT0QRr8


-Used Shinano-sama's duet-ready and made a duet!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hCc3trNHRaw


-Had my waifu to mix and sing a bit of the harmony with me. Glad to say I still love it to this day. :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcchSNV3jgQ


-Last upload of 2014... Hello to 2015, peopleeeee. <3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JrlL-35pfAc


-First upload of 2015 and the awkwardness, man... I can't. Lolz.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b_m-OaziVqY


-Was Huanee's birthday, had to make a cover for her... Made this while thinking of HuaZe tbh. <3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HlXxJHbmEk


-Cover to celebrate birthday of my Gaybruh! 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Uk-PxReZ-c


-Just trying on my newer mic. Ahhaha. <3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_hACRceNXVg


-Had my daughter mixed this for me! I forced her, kinda... Lol. Birthday cover for Otousan!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0Dlyf3mFDA


-Youtaite Anniversary, yep. It was official the 1st year since I started this whole Youtaite thing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3lIdvrksskw


-Re-upload of the first duet I was in!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=imhIRV7R3As


-Uploaded this for basically no main reason... //pats self

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xcd307ZvDGI


-It was Katsu's (Belated) birthday, I can't possibly not do a cover, right?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWgooOWskT8


-This is for Kiarky!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_0iIHQgCXo


-Had my hubby and Chiyo mixed this for me. Yes, I merged them both...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ecxUhBYeXw


-UNRAVELLLLLLLLLLLLLL <3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SPzhvX1uiHg


-New mic! MIC TEST, MIC TEST.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LCTVvX0OA4


-Most recent cover. Ahahha. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RaJAcJuexkc


-Did a cover with the cutie Reina! 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kaoi1q9FPpo


-I promised this since 2015 and I finally did it! A duet with my sissy. (She's no Youtaite, but she actually likes this song alot.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sq_Mml3_lKI



I also upload on;...

Zukito Sama: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCmH7ixFC1OKXWLeUKIzPHHg
Clarnis Lin: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHmQZ7ooNAPDYZkdMo1d9fQ

Hehe, just to make it clear, I'm actually a girl, hey I'm obviously one. xD Uhm, so... yeah. Razz

-Edit-

I might or might not upload anymore. Depends, although, most likely, nah.


Last edited by Clarn_Lin on Wed Aug 17, 2016 3:26 am; edited 2 times in total

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Re: Clarn's covers-//shot. xD

Post by Aisuu aka RiEDe on Fri Nov 21, 2014 2:42 am

Oh my so many um

I took a look on the latest one you linked. the AKB48 song.

I like how your voice sounds soft and cute and how you tried to sound a little bit rough on 0:28. You were also pretty on pitch and on tune. At least you also put some effort to mix and make your vocals sound better! 

Two important things I'd like to point out is the timing and the reverb.

Personally, I think the reverb is too much QAQ Don't kill me pls, because the reverb sounds unnatural to the song/instrumental. It's also pretty distracting as I can't really hear your voice clearly  on what you're singing with all the reverb. It's alright even if the mic is a cheap one. If you want your voice to sound clearer, you can try using EQ/Equalizer when you mix. It helps to make your vocals more sensitive, helping the listeners to hear better on your voice and the lyrics.

The timing is also kind of off at some parts. I don't know the song so I don't know the lyrics but I can point out the timing problems around 0:27 to 0:34 and 1:10 to 1:12. The timing sounds a little bit too quick as it didn't sound to be on beat. You can add/remove silences around your vocals when you mix and time so that it will sound on-timing/on-tempo.

If you want extra advice for improvements, you can add a little bit of vibrato when you pull off long notes like the last word 'maybe'. You can also add some harmonies and a tiny bit of adlibs to add *variety*** to the cover.

Oh and, voice twists are also fun things to play with when you sing. You can add or change a few tunes of your own in your singing. Say, for example im sorry i could only understand the maybe word In the 'maybe, maybe' parts, you can make it like "Maybe, May-ay-ay-be". It's also a good chance to show people your range as well as how you can be creative with music tunes. Voice twists are also a good practice for adlibs if you're aiming for that.

Good luck on your singing hobby and have faith in yourself! GET THAT VOICE GOINGG GUUUUU

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Re: Clarn's covers-//shot. xD

Post by Clarn_Lin on Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:51 pm

Ice Elf wrote:Oh my so many um

I took a look on the latest one you linked. the AKB48 song.

I like how your voice sounds soft and cute and how you tried to sound a little bit rough on 0:28. You were also pretty on pitch and on tune. At least you also put some effort to mix and make your vocals sound better! 

Two important things I'd like to point out is the timing and the reverb.

Personally, I think the reverb is too much QAQ Don't kill me pls, because the reverb sounds unnatural to the song/instrumental. It's also pretty distracting as I can't really hear your voice clearly  on what you're singing with all the reverb. It's alright even if the mic is a cheap one. If you want your voice to sound clearer, you can try using EQ/Equalizer when you mix. It helps to make your vocals more sensitive, helping the listeners to hear better on your voice and the lyrics.

The timing is also kind of off at some parts. I don't know the song so I don't know the lyrics but I can point out the timing problems around 0:27 to 0:34 and 1:10 to 1:12. The timing sounds a little bit too quick as it didn't sound to be on beat. You can add/remove silences around your vocals when you mix and time so that it will sound on-timing/on-tempo.

If you want extra advice for improvements, you can add a little bit of vibrato when you pull off long notes like the last word 'maybe'. You can also add some harmonies and a tiny bit of adlibs to add *variety*** to the cover.

Oh and, voice twists are also fun things to play with when you sing. You can add or change a few tunes of your own in your singing. Say, for example im sorry i could only understand the maybe word In the 'maybe, maybe' parts, you can make it like "Maybe, May-ay-ay-be". It's also a good chance to show people your range as well as how you can be creative with music tunes. Voice twists are also a good practice for adlibs if you're aiming for that.

Good luck on your singing hobby and have faith in yourself! GET THAT VOICE GOINGG GUUUUU
Ah, late reply is late. ;w; Thanks, Aisuu! <3 ^^

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Re: Clarn's covers-//shot. xD

Post by Mami on Tue Jan 27, 2015 11:30 pm

Okay so I'm so happy that you actually did A LOT of the songs that I'm familiar with xD 

so I'm going to review Lie, Ah Wonderful Cat life, Spice, and Suki Kirari..and a bit of Dango. 

To be honest, and please don't hate me for this, I could not stand to listen to Dango all the way. The opening "dangos" sounded like you were a bit making fun of it and the..I'm not sure if you coughed of scoffed or what after the last "daikazoku" made me assume it was a joke. The high vocals for the rest sounded a bit forced and uncomfortable for you, like you were testing the waters but the temp was just too hot for your body to stand. In all of this cover it wasn't your voice that made it hard to listen to, it was the microphone. So much static and fuzziness made it really difficult for me to sit and listen, I had to turn it off because of how distracting the fuzz was. 

Now by your Suki Kirai duet, THANK GOD FOR YOUR NEW MICROPHONE!!!! I have to say your loli voice is extremely adorable, it's just...so huggable and loveable, I wanted to put you in my pocket and carry you with me all day. The thing about this one is your voice was very drowned out by the music and your vocals were off key. It just sounded a lot like once again this octave was not your comfortable place. The talking was spot on, but the singing just sounded too forced which is not good to do with your voice.

Next is Spice. I've gotta say this one is very hard for me to give a feedback on. It sounds a lot better than the higher octave.  A LOT better. But it still sounds a bit like your voice isn't comfy, but it's ALMOST there. The most important thing was that you found your tone! You weren't off key! But your timing seemed a little bit off, but that's an easy fix! By this point, it was obvious that you have imporved so freakin' much from your first cover of Dango. 

Ah, it's a wonderful cat life! You were Gumi in this cover. In your description you said that you were off vocal. When I heard you singing and I read this, I was greatly confused. You were perfect on vocal. The thing that was off was your timing. It seemed rushed, as if you were trying to talk the words instead of sing them. Your vocals were ON SPOT! Which is just (I'm sorry this just excites me so much, because this is really just such an amazing improvement to me.) 
Another great thing about this cover is your voice sounds perfect comfortable! Not forced into a high vocal or a low vocal! I think you found your range in this one!

(I'm going to also throw this in here, I also reviewed your Wave song and it sounded like it had a bit of autotune in it but aside from the autotune you sounded freaking amazing in this one. I loved it so much.~ ) 

Now Lie. This one I'll be honest was a bit disappointing to me. You fixed your timing, you're still on key, you added effects that made it sound great to me. But there's something about this one that made me still think you were forcing it a little...I couldn't tell if maybe it was because it was in English or if it was just something else I couldn't put my finger on. 

In any case, I enjoyed listening to your covers and seeing how much you've improved. It shows you're practicing and working really hard, you've come SO far, much further than I've seen anyone come honestly and I'm very proud to be subscribed to you. I look forward to hearing some of your future work. Just remember to keep an eye on your tempo and where your voice is comfortable. :D

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Re: Clarn's covers-//shot. xD

Post by Clarn_Lin on Mon Jan 25, 2016 6:54 am

Mami wrote:Okay so I'm so happy that you actually did A LOT of the songs that I'm familiar with xD 

so I'm going to review Lie, Ah Wonderful Cat life, Spice, and Suki Kirari..and a bit of Dango. 

To be honest, and please don't hate me for this, I could not stand to listen to Dango all the way. The opening "dangos" sounded like you were a bit making fun of it and the..I'm not sure if you coughed of scoffed or what after the last "daikazoku" made me assume it was a joke. The high vocals for the rest sounded a bit forced and uncomfortable for you, like you were testing the waters but the temp was just too hot for your body to stand. In all of this cover it wasn't your voice that made it hard to listen to, it was the microphone. So much static and fuzziness made it really difficult for me to sit and listen, I had to turn it off because of how distracting the fuzz was. 

Now by your Suki Kirai duet, THANK GOD FOR YOUR NEW MICROPHONE!!!! I have to say your loli voice is extremely adorable, it's just...so huggable and loveable, I wanted to put you in my pocket and carry you with me all day. The thing about this one is your voice was very drowned out by the music and your vocals were off key. It just sounded a lot like once again this octave was not your comfortable place. The talking was spot on, but the singing just sounded too forced which is not good to do with your voice.

Next is Spice. I've gotta say this one is very hard for me to give a feedback on. It sounds a lot better than the higher octave.  A LOT better. But it still sounds a bit like your voice isn't comfy, but it's ALMOST there. The most important thing was that you found your tone! You weren't off key! But your timing seemed a little bit off, but that's an easy fix! By this point, it was obvious that you have imporved so freakin' much from your first cover of Dango. 

Ah, it's a wonderful cat life! You were Gumi in this cover. In your description you said that you were off vocal. When I heard you singing and I read this, I was greatly confused. You were perfect on vocal. The thing that was off was your timing. It seemed rushed, as if you were trying to talk the words instead of sing them. Your vocals were ON SPOT! Which is just (I'm sorry this just excites me so much, because this is really just such an amazing improvement to me.) 
Another great thing about this cover is your voice sounds perfect comfortable! Not forced into a high vocal or a low vocal! I think you found your range in this one!

(I'm going to also throw this in here, I also reviewed your Wave song and it sounded like it had a bit of autotune in it but aside from the autotune you sounded freaking amazing in this one. I loved it so much.~ ) 

Now Lie. This one I'll be honest was a bit disappointing to me. You fixed your timing, you're still on key, you added effects that made it sound great to me. But there's something about this one that made me still think you were forcing it a little...I couldn't tell if maybe it was because it was in English or if it was just something else I couldn't put my finger on. 

In any case, I enjoyed listening to your covers and seeing how much you've improved. It shows you're practicing and working really hard, you've come SO far, much further than I've seen anyone come honestly and I'm very proud to be subscribed to you. I look forward to hearing some of your future work. Just remember to keep an eye on your tempo and where your voice is comfortable. :D
YOU'RE WELCOME FOR THAT. ;D //shot

Thanks though, honestly. Feedback is always appreciated. ^^

Yes, most of the songs that I sing are either too high or a bit too low for me. ;A; (I'm sorry you're disappointed with a few of my covers... I just couldn't sing them properly. And, I'm actually abit of a derp. But the 'Dango' part wasn't to make fun. I was really trying to sing it so hard...)

Really though, thanks! I'm sorry for replying a year late...

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