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Post by RuukiKaru on Tue Feb 11, 2014 1:50 pm

My Zombie Pikachu:

It was hard that day when i lost my pikachu
A small thing like that and so unique
I thought we could live happy together forever
But he went to the heaven earlier


Now im sitting in a corner
Crying, I just remember each one of his smile
Each time he shocked me almost to death
I loved when he did that…
 
But now he doesn’t shock me anymore
 I ll not see death near me anymore
What can I do now, why did you left me?
Who will shock me everyday now?


If I could see him again, I would show
My heart to him, so he could see
That my life is bound to his
And my heart is bound to his


But he doesn’t have a heart anymore
 He is now dead... I just want to see him again
Im going to his corpse and see his smile once again
His mouth is now wide open , I can see it


Oh his eyes are rotten but are beautiful as ever
His tail is decomposed but it is still cute
His belly has a huge hole but I like it
He is moving while dead but I still love him


Im hugging him, he is dead but he is moving
Oh wait that’s not normal, but who cares?
Oh he bit me what the hell, Pikachu are you hungry?
I gave him an apple from my hand, hand is not here anymore…
 
So that’s how ill live, at your side
We both dead but still moving
We both rotten but still smiling
And eating someone´s flesh makes me think, human meat is good!


The Heart's Clock:

Life is a mess, of words and ilusions
Of fake smiles and despair
Where you cant make your way
Without suffering

What is life, 
Besides being a depressive clock
That goes back in time 
And replenishes on the past with tears

Tears of sadness, as always
Cause tears of happiness vanished
From this world of darkness
From this unpleasant doom

A clock moved not by the time
But by tears of sadness and smiles
Each smile moves it further
Each tear moves it backwards

And my clock is always going the same way
Always backwards , always...
Well, maybe one day who knows...
Someone will make my clock go further.



Last edited by RuukiKaru on Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:06 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Added spoilers (so i can add more chapters and such))
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Post by Kagi on Tue Feb 11, 2014 1:55 pm

      That was so depressing, yet at the same time very sweet. Great job! I wish I had that poetic sense in my writing. I can't do anything but write fighting/gore/psychological scenes OTZ (Not sure if that's a good thing).

      Great job!!
      I dunno why but I was imagining Satoshi when you said, "Don't shock me anymore"
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Post by RuukiKaru on Fri Feb 14, 2014 1:16 pm

Aw thank you! oh Satoshi >.< *smiles*  I dont usually write poems like this (i write more romantic/sad/ scenes ~)
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Post by ikikurface on Tue Feb 18, 2014 6:19 pm

I like this *w*

It's so dark and sweet and bitter like dark chocolate...
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