❦ Attic Full of Fish ❦【Aerlith】

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Post by sonic-nancy-fan on Wed Nov 27, 2013 9:19 am

Lovely as usual Prairie Squirrel~ I only have two constructive criticisms for you. 1.Your voice is either drowned out by the music or the music is drowned out by your voice. It tends to be one or the other. That could just be a difference of headphones though. 2. Your voice fluctuates a lot when you are holding out a note. Its kind of hard to describe, but I noticed it  a couple of times in A Thousand Year Solo. Otherwise, your voice is really soft and airy but in a good way.~

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Post by Aerlith on Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:03 am

...Oops. thanks for pointing that out. I tend to listen to music really loudly so sometimes I forget to check the volume for my covers. I will make sure to be more careful. And yeah, I need to work on a steadier voice! I do agree with you that my voice tends to fluctuate sometimes and also sounds like it is close to breaking. Will work on that, too, thanks for the feedback! :D

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Post by Aerlith on Sun Jul 13, 2014 10:08 pm



Group's entry for NCC R2. C:

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Post by Aerlith on Sat Aug 02, 2014 4:30 am


Thank you Vorg and Shinra for helping with the mix! ^^

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Post by Aisuu aka RiEDe on Sat Nov 08, 2014 10:09 pm

WOW SUCH PRO


I love how you did the chorus, all dat passion belts ooh yeah bbu, and the clarity yes, good mixing vorg and shinra.
You handled the pitches real well and I enjoyed the whole cover withoutfallingasleep , the timing was pretty accurate too, or at least i didn't notice any problems in it. xD The harmonies also matched really well with the vocals, albeit some adlibs can be added to pump up the song. notthedirtypumpupifyouknowwhatimean


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Post by Aerlith on Sat Nov 08, 2014 10:26 pm

When you can't do it yourself, ask for help. 8D....

The reason why the timing and the pitch are perfect are 'cause Shinra helped me take care of it. 8D;; I couldn't do that on my own.

BUT YES. THIS SONG IS SO AWESOME. D: I had to have a pro mix it.

-bows down to Vorg and Shinra-

And thank you for the feedback. <33

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Post by Aisuu aka RiEDe on Sun Nov 09, 2014 5:26 am

AYEE IT IS AWESOME, AND PRO. You're welcome.

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