Who's good at listening?

i mean.. like who's good at pointing out,

out of tune notes..
out of timing..
or any errors

something like that?

i have a hard time.. listening to my dub..
can you please point out the errors on it?

who can help me? @_@

it's my favorite song.. that's why i cannot afford to mess it up.. huuhu

i will PM the song to whoever volunteers to help.. -_-

hmm I'm pretty sure everyone is good at it ^^;
its just that, you just can't seem to umm make it good? XD

I dunno. xD

I'm pretty good at pinpoint out.. notes.
I wouldn't criticize not unless you wanted me too though xD

Klaus von Wolfstadt wrote:hmm I'm pretty sure everyone is good at it ^^;
its just that, you just can't seem to umm make it good? XD

I dunno. xD

I'm pretty good at pinpoint out.. notes.
I wouldn't criticize not unless you wanted me too though xD

yeah.. i cannot pinpoint the out of tune notes..

though i can hear it but i can't seem to find which part is wrong..
you know what i mean?

even the timing.. i can hear it but i can't find which part is wrong.. T_T

do you know the song tokyo rock city?

oh I love tokyo rock city <333

I'd surely can help xD <33
(actaully its one of the easier song to sing for me ;__; )

Klaus von Wolfstadt wrote:oh I love tokyo rock city <333

I'd surely can help xD <33
(actaully its one of the easier song to sing for me ;__; )

thank goodness! thank you.!!

i haven't edited my dub yet.. so some parts maybe too loud or too soft..

can i just pm the link? because im not yet confident to post it here aaaack ><

that is fine ^^

Thank you!!! i have pm-ed it already thank you very much @___@;

@A@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your voice WTF you complaining about! marry me

But I do get what you're talking about haha xD <3
here are the point IMO that you need to fix/
its only a suggestion so. if you dun like it, its fine ^^.

your voice-

Very soothing <3 that a +! but the because the song is very upbeat, its hard for the listener to listen to what. It like saying "hey! pay attention to the me the voice not the music" and vice versa. so its creates a disturbance, and disrupts the listener to concentrate on the song in general. (to like the song whole)

technique used -

the style you are singing is very nice, but as before, since its a upbeat/ rock song,
the words you are singing, has to follow along the beat of the music, so "Slur" singing is a no no for this song. it have to be more choppy but to be sure to follow the beat (to to do this usually you just listen and follow the beat of the drums)

Overall-

You're voice stands in between Monotonous and energetic xD
its like you're putting energy/ emotions into your singing BUT it comes out heavy & monotone, making the mood seems awkward.. Like you taking a deep breath to say something, but you just end up holding your breath and not saying anything ^^

Get what I am saying?

Another thing is the pronunciation of the words. try having more of a stronger accent by emphasizing on the sounds. especially of all the K, T, G sounds. (ka, ki, tsu, ga etc)

that way its creates this kind of clicking beat that goes with the music. ^^

I hope this helps! ^^
otherwise. the song sounds nice imo ^^

Klaus von Wolfstadt wrote:@A@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your voice WTF you complaining about! marry me

But I do get what you're talking about haha xD <3
here are the point IMO that you need to fix/
its only a suggestion so. if you dun like it, its fine ^^.

your voice-

Very soothing <3 that a +! but the because the song is very upbeat, its hard for the listener to listen to what. It like saying "hey! pay attention to the me the voice not the music" and vice versa. so its creates a disturbance, and disrupts the listener to concentrate on the song in general. (to like the song whole)

technique used -

the style you are singing is very nice, but as before, since its a upbeat/ rock song,
the words you are singing, has to follow along the beat of the music, so "Slur" singing is a no no for this song. it have to be more choppy but to be sure to follow the beat (to to do this usually you just listen and follow the beat of the drums)

Overall-

You're voice stands in between Monotonous and energetic xD
its like you're putting energy/ emotions into your singing BUT it comes out heavy & monotone, making the mood seems awkward.. Like you taking a deep breath to say something, but you just end up holding your breath and not saying anything ^^

Get what I am saying?

Another thing is the pronunciation of the words. try having more of a stronger accent by emphasizing on the sounds. especially of all the K, T, G sounds. (ka, ki, tsu, ga etc)

that way its creates this kind of clicking beat that goes with the music. ^^

I hope this helps! ^^
otherwise. the song sounds nice imo ^^

waa i'm not complainig it's just .. i just want it to be presentable xD

but wow.. you're good at pointing out errors @_@

this is the answers that im looking for

about the voice..

you mean.. i should soften my voice a little? is it too loud? hahah i think i was shouting already..
Now that you've said it.. @_@ you're right it is distracting.. so do i need to soften my voice a little?

and what do you mean by slur? @_@ this is the first time i heard it lol

ok ok i got it.. follow the drums XD haha i got a big problem with timing..

and what do you mean by monotone? 8D haha i really don't know these terms sorry..

what should i do? should i soften my voice a little? or repeat the whole song? XD

thank you very much for your time.. :D

Rue wrote:

waa i'm not complainig it's just .. i just want it to be presentable xD

but wow.. you're good at pointing out errors @_@

this is the answers that im looking for

about the voice..

you mean.. i should soften my voice a little? is it too loud? hahah i think i was shouting already..
Now that you've said it.. @_@ you're right it is distracting.. so do i need to soften my voice a little?

and what do you mean by slur? @_@ this is the first time i heard it lol

ok ok i got it.. follow the drums XD haha i got a big problem with timing..

and what do you mean by monotone? 8D haha i really don't know these terms sorry..

what should i do? should i soften my voice a little? or repeat the whole song? XD

thank you very much for your time.. :D

ahah no, you're voice isn't loud ^^ its the on perfect for the loudness.
but what you need is more energy to make you voice sound more excited like this emoicon-- >

because currently your voice sounds like this emoicon -->

its missing it vital life line LOLOLOLOL
you shouldn't soften your voice, but instead bring power in your voice to make it lively.

On the slur part. what I mean is when you sing

"shi~awasena~ hazu no ketsumatsu o~

those that I bold are consider slurs because you were emphasizing on those parts of the words when really, its doesn't need any emphasizing to catch people's attention. Instead, you're only creating more confuzzleness towards the beat of the song, because the slurs are a tad bit slower than the background music's beat.

What you CAN do is shorten the slurs, (because after all the slurs are a part of your style in singing) so the singing can be in sync with the BGM.

Monotone or Monotonous means you sing with no emotions. Very dull sounding and umm dead beat xDD

Klaus von Wolfstadt wrote:

ahah no, you're voice isn't loud ^^ its the on perfect for the loudness.
but what you need is more energy to make you voice sound more excited like this emoicon-- >

because currently your voice sounds like this emoicon -->

its missing it vital life line LOLOLOLOL
you shouldn't soften your voice, but instead bring power in your voice to make it lively.

On the slur part. what I mean is when you sing

"shi~awasena~ hazu no ketsumatsu o~

those that I bold are consider slurs because you were emphasizing on those parts of the words when really, its doesn't need any emphasizing to catch people's attention. Instead, you're only creating more confuzzleness towards the beat of the song, because the slurs are a tad bit slower than the background music's beat.

What you CAN do is shorten the slurs, (because after all the slurs are a part of your style in singing) so the singing can be in sync with the BGM.

Monotone or Monotonous means you sing with no emotions. Very dull sounding and umm dead beat xDD

AH!!! NOW I GET IT !! I AM ENLIGHTENED!! XD THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH!

I understand it now.. XD haha i'm having a hard time figuring out what was wrong.. XD

thanks a lot!! *hug*

Glad I could be of service ^^.
Feel free to ask if you need something.